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The Aztec god: The beguining of a god

Last post 06-02-2008, 10:02 by Blitz_rockon. 464 replies.
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  •  10-07-2006, 12:57 2293816

    The Aztec god: The beguining of a god

    In this fanfic im actually going to base my stories on an Aztec god, not a Greek one, just to break free from the crowd of good Greek god fanfics, My god is called Spire, the aztec god of war, he has a pet turtle called crusher who's name will become clear later on. he is an aztec god so i will be needing 2 good gods of any tribe and a greek god of any alignment. simpley put the following info Name: Age: Alignment: Miricles: (made up or any miricles from 1,2,or BOTG) Description of god: (is he shy destructive, kind or helping and any other info about what god he is and his personality) Creature: (again made up, from 1,2 or BOTG) Size: (from 4m-14m) Alignment: Miricles: description: Power: (how strong a god are you, are you weak and need other gods to survive or can you kill gods with ease) City: (how big your city is, village, town, city, metropolis) Trib: (what trib do you lead) i need 1 greek god, 2 good gods and tribe, and all other gods are free to chose, but please dont all be good, neuteral is fine but not all good.
  •  10-07-2006, 13:45 2293900 in reply to 2293816

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    This 1st chapter is a bit boring so if you want to skip be my guest, I just wanted to explain how my god was born. Chapter one “The birth of a god” In the empty space outside the inner realm of the universe, called the outer realm, power was flowing, power that could create……a god. The energy would build up so great that after millions of years, a god would be created, and this god, would travel many billion light years to get to the sanctity of life, the haven of all gods. This haven would be the home to all gods, good and evil, but they all lived in this one special place in the inner realm, this haven was called Enchart and was an island, floating in abyss. The power in the outer realm had built up for many millions of years and it was time to give birth to a god. This new god has no name, no personality and no followers. It is just a ball of pure energy making its way to the great island that is suspended in space and time. The ball would enter a special room where it was registered as a god. The god would not have a human form like the rest until it was registered and was declared a god. This ball of energy was far from a god, but when registered, would find a suitable human form and use that to move around Enchart. “Next!!” a small, dwarf like gad shouted. The ball of energy floated to the desk a waited for the god to look up. “Show me your hand” the god asked, the ball didn’t know what he meant so the god explained what he had to do. “See this?” he said, holding up his hand, the ball nodded, “I want you to change into one of these, all you do is think of one, got it?” the god asked, the ball thought hard an eventually, a small, childlike hand appeared. The god then grabbed the hand and pressed it to the book. The book glowed brightly and he was registered as a god. The book then writ by itself the balls preferred name. “Spire? Well it’s your choice, welcome to Enchart, young one” the god said, the ball went out of the Registration office, the New god now ha a human form, he had a Crocodile skin hood, gold armour, and a green sash. The new god was pleased with his human form and so was all the other gods, they all stared as he went past. “Hi there, what’s your name?” a female god asked, “Spire” the new god said shyly. “Pleased to meet you spire, i'm Atlanta, goddess of the woods” she said. “Nice name,” the new god said, “Thanks, you must be new” she said, “How did you know?” spire asked, “You only seem about……a thousand years old,” Atlanta answered, “How can you tell the age of a god?” spire asked again, “by there mark, look,” Atlanta said lifting her leather armour up to reveal a green mark on her stomach that had a picture of a bow and arrow. “Wow, where I get one of those?” spire asked, “You already have one, I was given to our in the registration office,” she said. Spire found his on his shoulder, it was small but Atlanta said that it would grow larger as the god got more powerful. They were talking for ages, Spire learnt a lot about Enchart, like he would need to find a trainer to help him become a god, and learn everything he needs to learn. Spire didn’t know where to get one and Atlanta said that he didn’t find one, they would find him, the best thing that spire could do was to explore Enchart and find out all he needed to know. Spire was young and was respected by the other gods as much as the elders were. He found that if he wandered around for too long gods would ask if he were lost. Spire was lost but didn’t want to cause trouble so he said he wasn’t lost and continued to wander. Eventually he got back to the centre and had a brief idea of the setup of the city. He found that Atlanta had disappeared and he wished to find her. “Atlanta, where are you?” he shouted, “Keep your voice down sunny, you’ll send an old god to an early rebirth,” an old god said to the young god. “Oh i’m sorry, I was just looking for my friend,” Spire said, “Your new rant you?” the god asked, “You read my mark didn’t you?” Spire asked, “No, you just don’t know how to god whisper do you?” the god asked. Spire didn’t know what god whispering was and found out that this old gods name was Achilles and was a god trainer. Achilles was willing to train Spire how to use godly powers as long as he didn’t shout at old gods again. Spire agreed and they set off to Achilles training grounds where he ha trained millions of gods to become great gods and was planning on doing the same with Spire.
  •  10-07-2006, 13:47 2293903 in reply to 2293816

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    I'll just look at this now, haven't read it yet. Hmm. The first bit seems... slightly familiar Wink [;)]. Name:Lateol Age: 10 000 000 (10 billion) Alignment: Good [Good] Miricles: All BW2 and BOTG ones, and volcano. Description of god: Kind, caring, never bad tempered, independant. Creature: White wolf Size: 10m Alignment: Good [Good] Miricles:Same as the god description:Same as the god Power: Strong aim with miracles and strong power miracles, but not so powerful. City: Tiny settlement. Trib: The Linots
  •  10-07-2006, 14:01 2293926 in reply to 2293816

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    sorry i wasnt clear, the second description and miricles are for the creature. and Enchart seems like such a goo place i had to use it. Oh and what are the linots?, what is there way of life, do they build impressive settelments or are they strong wariors or what?
  •  10-07-2006, 14:04 2293929 in reply to 2293816

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    For a few years there was a tribe called the Linots and were good people, believing in peace and all that. Ironically, they were all murdered.
  •  10-07-2006, 14:12 2293938 in reply to 2293816

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    so there a bit like drewids but they arent as magical, they belive in good and nature and ironically are all killed.
  •  10-07-2006, 14:26 2293955 in reply to 2293816

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    Chapter 2 “The prayer day” A thousand years later, and Spire had learnt the basics of being a god. He had learnt about, • The mortals of Eden and the way they live • Creatures and how to look after them • Godly hand tricks like multi hand pickup and Hand forcing • Using the hand to help the people • and how to mind read mortals and read a gods sign Achilles was pleased with the training and Spire was now a god, only not a very strong god and he had yet to get a creature. “When do I get a creature, I know how to look after one but I don’t have one to look after?” Spire asked, “Sorry Spire but the creatures all live in Eden and you will need to go there to get one,” Achilles explained, “Well can I go now and get one?” Spire asked, “You will need to go see the king of all gods to say you have past my training and are now eligible for the prayer day. This day was when tribes would sacrifice to gods and pray to them to come from Enchart to Eden to become there god. It was an exciting time for all new gods and would make Spire a true god. “I can’t wait until prayer day, can you?” Atlanta asked Spire, “No I can’t wait,” Spire said just thinking of the creature he will get. There were hundreds of creatures but only one could be chosen by a god, and that creature would stay with that god forever. Atlanta had already picked her creature; she wanted a wolf, a female wolf, because she had no interest in any other creature. Spire had thought long and hard but no creature appealed to him in that way. Prayer day came and the whole of Eden was in prayer, hoping that there prayers would be answered and a god would come to them. The new gods were all waiting, for only the rue gods to a tribe would be that tribe’s god. Many gods where chosen, Atlanta was chosen for the Norse, she would fit perfectly there, they lived in forest and Atlanta loved the forests. Lateol was chosen by a very rare race of people called the linots that wanted a good god to lead them to peace. Spire waited impatiently for a tribe to call him to Eden but none called. Many more gods were called to Eden but Spire was beginning to loose hope on every getting a tribe. Suddenly a woman from the Aztec tribe called for a god, Spire was the only new god left and was therefore picked to be the leader of the Aztecs. Prayer day was over and Eden had its first new gods. Many more would join them in a thousand years in god’s time, which is ten years in mortal’s time. Spire was now a god, he had a tribe and would soon get a creature, but he still had a lot to learn, and he would need to learn it fast, because an evil was growing in Tarterus, the prison of the gods, and would purge all of Eden of its gods.
  •  10-07-2006, 14:27 2293957 in reply to 2293816

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    Name: Thraal Age: 197,000,000 (197 million) Alignment: Evil [Evil] Miricles: All in B&W2 and BOTG Volcano and earthquake Description of god: Has lived unknown to the world untill now he has started his war on the world an always becoming stronger. Creature: Ape Size: 14m Alignment: Evil [Evil] Miricles: Same as god Description: Easily angry, powerful and uncontorlable Power: Very powerful only needs allys if against 3 or more gods City: A large city overcast by the Evil [Evil] power Tribe: Aztecs
  •  10-07-2006, 14:31 2293959 in reply to 2293816

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    great another aztec god, this is interesting, my god is going to be evil so i now have an ally to cause havoc with. muhohohohoho
  •  10-07-2006, 14:31 2293960 in reply to 2293816

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  •  10-07-2006, 14:33 2293962 in reply to 2293816

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    Are we allowed to make up tribes? Name:Zatl Age: 100 years Alignment: Evil [Evil], to a new level! Miricles: All of the BW2 and BOTG ones (sorry to steal the way of saying it Silly [:p]) as well as ones to levitate people and go to the land of the gods. Can create shields that can imprison things. Can kill things by staring at them, and can set things on fire in a similar way. Description of god: Pure evil... need I say more? Creature: Three headed snake with lions' heads. Many poison spikes on it's back and it has poison fangs in it's mouth. Size: 5m high, 12m long Alignment: Evil [Evil] Miricles:All the BW2, BOTG ones and the ability to spit poison and hypnotise things. description: Power: Incredible power. City: Rules an island, 100 square miles (So, if it was a square island, all sides would be 10m, for anyone who doesn't know) Trib: The Garks
  •  10-07-2006, 15:20 2294019 in reply to 2293816

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    Chapter 3 “Aztecs! I am your god” As Spire god closer to Eden he could see lots of cities doted around the land, most were owned by no any god and there people belonged to no tribe. He saw 2 settlements, one had a green beam coming from it and looked very impressive, the other was shadowed by an active volcano and looked more like a prison. Spire saw many others but these 2 where closest. He arrived at the town in human form and appeared from the flames of the plinth in the temple. He addressed the mortals, “Aztec’s, I am a god, you have summoned me, and now I am your god.” The Aztecs looked stunned at the god and women ran out of the temple screaming, “A GOD, A GOD HAS COME, WE HAVE A GOD!” The people were so happy that they had a go they all ran into the temple and started to praise the god. Spire felt important and liked it but was only then that he realized that he had stuff to do. “Welcome to our town ow mighty god,” the people prayed but Spire stopped them and ordered them to, “Tell me, where are the creatures?” The people were only happy to show him where they were. The creatures had there own little island where they lived in peace. There were 3 gods there also picking there creatures. One was Atlanta, the other 2 Spire had never seen before. “Hi Atlanta,” Spire said to Atlanta who had picked a young, white female wolf from the island. “Hi Spire, how are you?” she asked “I’m fine, I see you’ve picked a creature then,” Spire said, “Yeah, she’s perfect, just what I wanted, have you decided what you are going to get?” Atlanta asked. Spire looked around as lots of different creatures surrounded him. He looked at everyone of them but to one appealed more to him than a young 5m tall turtle that seemed healthy and very happy to see a god. He decided that he would pick the turtle that immediately ran over to the human sized god and almost squished him. “I have an idea,” Spire said concentrating hard. He then grew so that he was as tall as the turtle and then hugged hi new creature. “Aw, that’s so sweet I could cry, not” a god said behind him, Spire turned around to see a god with a black bird head shaped helmet and black armour. He had a huge ape standing next to him which was also black. “Hi I’m Spire what’s your……” Spire started “I’m Thraal, I’m the god of the Aztecs,” Thraal finished, “I too am an Aztec god,” Spire said smiling, “WHAT! Why is there 2 Aztec gods?” Thraal said enraged but quickly calmed down and said “Ok, maybe we should meet up sometime and share……idea’s about this world,” He smiled an evil smile, “Sure, that would be great,” Spire said smiling back, “Great, I’ll see you around then” Thraal said, “See ya,” a happy Spire said, “You do realize that that god is pure evil,” another voice said, he turned around and saw a god dressed in a blinding white toga on with gold lining and a gold emblem on it. He had long gold hair that blew in the wind and he looked very clean compared to the other god. “I am lateol, I have just picked my creature,” he said pointing to his white wolf. “Pleased to meet you lateol, I’m……” spire started, “You are Spire, you are 2,000 years old and you have chosen the young turtle, am I correct?” Lateol asked, Spire just nodded in amazement. “Take my advice, don’t fall into the wrong crowd, if you do, you will find it impossible to get out of it,” Lateol advised. Spire understood and Lateol disappeared to his city. “Wow, everyone here is so nice,” spire said, “Yeah, but they are much older than we are so be cautious of both of them,” Atlanta said before disappearing to her town with her creature. Spire looked at his creature which was picking its nose and eating what it found, Spire laughed and traveled to his town with his creature. The people greeted there god as he returned and gazed in wonder at the turtle that Spire had brought back. Spire had been taught that creatures must learn things from there master, a they must learn these things whilst they are young so that they can grow up knowing the difference between right and wrong. It would be hard but it was the first task that must be performed, and Spire felt confident that his creature would learn it with ease.
  •  10-07-2006, 15:30 2294034 in reply to 2293816

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    This storys getting good Silly [:p] not that it wasn't good before
  •  10-07-2006, 15:50 2294075 in reply to 2293816

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    Yeah, this story's great! I especially think the idea of gods being formed from energy in the Outer Realm is genious, don't you agree, LWarrior and Undead---God?
  •  10-07-2006, 16:10 2294107 in reply to 2293816

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  •  10-07-2006, 16:12 2294111 in reply to 2293816

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    http://allboards.lionhead.com/showthread.php?t=191612 Glad you agree Happy [:)] Anyway, when are you adding the next chapter? And have ignored poor Undead Sad [:(]?
  •  10-07-2006, 16:14 2294112 in reply to 2293816

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    Yeah i want to hear more, poor undead Silly [:p]
  •  10-07-2006, 16:15 2294115 in reply to 2293816

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    Put in my character, Or you shall all feel my wrath, or Zatl's to be more precise!!!
  •  10-07-2006, 16:16 2294116 in reply to 2293816

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  •  10-07-2006, 17:42 2294271 in reply to 2293816

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    sorry, i've been bussy with other things, Thanks guys, im glad you like them, but its going to get a wjole lot better. nice god Undead, i'll put him in later, yes you can create your own tribe as long as you decribe what they are like, are they powerful in combate, can they buil impressive structures can they survive in unbarible conditions, can they thrive and grow faster than any other.
  •  10-07-2006, 18:23 2294358 in reply to 2293816

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    Right, they're incredibly tough and have undying loyalty. They'd swim across a sea of burning oil for their god. They perform human sacrifices to give their god power, they create impressive cities.
  •  10-07-2006, 18:35 2294387 in reply to 2293816

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    right, so they areincredibly loyal tot he point of guwging out there own eyes just to make there god happy, got ya.
  •  10-07-2006, 18:37 2294389 in reply to 2293816

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    Aye laddy, aye
  •  10-07-2006, 18:40 2294393 in reply to 2293816

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    lol, i'll be addng more soon.
  •  10-07-2006, 18:42 2294396 in reply to 2293816

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    Great. Will Undead's be in this one? Sounds like a good god. Well, not good, evil, but... you know what I mean Big Smile [:D]
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