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Sorrow's Lament

Last post 11-10-2009, 17:26 by RogueRikku. 297 replies.
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  •  04-18-2009, 8:47 3328284 in reply to 3321500

    Re: Awesome

    Is your wife OK? Are you OK. Surprise [:O]  Has the court thing happened yet. I hope everything is fine.

  •  04-18-2009, 8:50 3328288 in reply to 3328284

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    We're anxiously awaiting the next chapter, but you can post whenever you feel like it Marcasite.
  •  04-18-2009, 17:11 3328455 in reply to 3328288

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    Re: Awesome

    Greetings all!

    I want to thank you all for your well wishes and your undestanding.  My wife is okay physically but we have not been to court yet.  We are waiting for the police report.  Stuff has been happening, G o o d [Good] and bad, and this is the first day I've really had to myself.  I'm working on the chapter today (inbetween naps and while watching cheesy movies).  I'm shooting to finish the next chapter some time today but it may have to see the final touches during the week.

    Ciao for now,

    ~Marcasite.


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  04-18-2009, 20:22 3328557 in reply to 3328455

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    Looking forward to it. Smily [:)]   Glad you had some time to reply.

  •  04-19-2009, 18:17 3328888 in reply to 3328557

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    Here's hoping for your wife to win the case! Smily [:)]

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  •  04-20-2009, 21:40 3329415 in reply to 3328455

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    Marcasite:

    Greetings all!

    I want to thank you all for your well wishes and your undestanding.  My wife is okay physically but we have not been to court yet.  We are waiting for the police report.  Stuff has been happening, G o o d [Good] and bad, and this is the first day I've really had to myself.  I'm working on the chapter today (inbetween naps and while watching cheesy movies).  I'm shooting to finish the next chapter some time today but it may have to see the final touches during the week.

    Ciao for now,

    ~Marcasite.


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  •  04-22-2009, 23:01 3330331 in reply to 3328455

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    Marcasite:

    Greetings all!

    I want to thank you all for your well wishes and your undestanding.  My wife is okay physically but we have not been to court yet.  We are waiting for the police report.  Stuff has been happening, G o o d [Good] and bad, and this is the first day I've really had to myself.  I'm working on the chapter today (inbetween naps and while watching cheesy movies).  I'm shooting to finish the next chapter some time today but it may have to see the final touches during the week.

    Ciao for now,

    ~Marcasite.

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  •  04-23-2009, 18:20 3330766 in reply to 3330331

    Re: Awesome

    G o o d [Good] luck with the case!
  •  04-24-2009, 23:58 3331365 in reply to 3330766

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    BigWhite:
    G o o d [Good] luck with the case!
    G o o d [Good] luck and hire the Harvey Birdman


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  •  04-30-2009, 16:44 3335234 in reply to 3331365

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    Re: Awesome

    Where does the time go?

    Well, in my case, it goes to work and then to a horrendous drive home.  But I have been working on the chapter and it is ready to go up.  It's a little shorter than usual but I hope you all like it.

    Ciao for now.

    ~Marcasite


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  04-30-2009, 16:46 3335237 in reply to 3335234

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    A House Divided

    Storm was Maze.

     

    Sobbing in the darkness, softly and silently, Adelina the Sorrowful Blade knew the truth beyond the shadow of doubt.  He had traded to Skorm for youth, she knew it.  He looked different, spoke differently, and carried himself with a sleek grace that he had not possessed in his twilight years but the way he touched her, the way he used her, told her everything.  That had not changed, not one bit.  When she had closed her eyes, it had been Oakvale all over again and she could see Maze, hear him in the grunts and groans.

     

    She felt dirty, filthy, but she knew what she had to do.

     

    She rose from the bed and winced as she rose to her feet.  He had not been gentle, Storm-Who-Was-Maze, and her breath hissed between her teeth as she bent over to retrieve her pants and her boots.  He stirred on the bed and she felt his eyes raking over her in the dark, her skin made luminous by the light of the moon, shining through the open shutters.

     

    “Leaving so soon,” he asked sleepily.

     

    “I have to return to-”

     

    “Sparrowhawke?”  He chuckled in the dark.  “Why don’t you stay?  Dawn is many hours away.”

     

    She stepped into her pants and pulled them up, dragging the leather up over her thighs and hips.  “I have to go.”

     

    He reached for her and brushed his fingertips against the small of her back and then over the leather that covered her bum.  “Stay.”

     

    She pulled her shirt over her head, hiding her breasts from his eyes.  She left it unlaced though, revealing her cleavage.  “I don’t want to be here when it happens.”

     

    The moonlight cast his features in stark relief, showing her the suspicion and curiosity.  “When what happens?”

     

    The door burst open, kicked in, and two figures entered the chamber as he scrambled from the bed.  Adelina planted a kick in his chest, knocking him back onto the bed.  Sparrowhawke pulled the mask down, revealing the snarl and bared teeth.

     

    “When we put you in the dead book for G o o d [Good], Maze,” Sparrowhawke growled.

     

    “What?!”  He rolled off the other side of the bed, coming up with open hands.  “I’m not-”

     

    Whisper stepped out of the shadows behind him and drove her spear into him from behind, the point of the blade erupting from his chest with a spray of blood.  Adelina went for her sword.  Sparrowhawke and Blade advanced, swords raised for killing blows.  But he was vanishing in rings of red light, teleporting away.  The hatred and fire in his pale blue eyes told her that she was right.  He was Maze.

     

    And they had failed to kill him.

     

    Sparrowhawke came to her side and she leaned into him gratefully as he draped his arm over her.  There were no words between them; there was no need for words.  She stared at the blood on the bed and hoped that the wound was mortal, that he was bleeding out even now but she knew that it was a futile hope.  Maze had been powerful in his old age; with his youth restored, he would be unstoppable.

     

    “This isn’t over yet,” she said softly.

     

    Blade sheathed his swords.  “Explanations will have to be made.”

     

    “I’ll speak to the Guild Master,” Adelina promised.  “I’ll tell him everything.”

     

    “He may not believe you,” Whisper warned.

     

    “He may expel you from the Guild,” Sparrowhawke breathed.  “He may decide to expel all of us.”

     

    Blade snorted and scoffed.  “Without us, is there a Guild?”

     

    Adelina wished she had Blade’s confidence but, confident or not, he had a point.  Dawn was hours away but it felt like time was running out.

     

     

     

    Storm fell to his knees in the long grass of the Barrow Fields.

     

    Scrambling up to his feet and then dropping back to his knees, he choked on the blood filling his lungs.  Drawing heavily on his magic, he healed himself.  Gagging, he vomited blood and choked, convulsing as he expelled the blood from his lungs.  Crawling through the slick grass, he dragged himself to the edge of the river and dunked his head into the icy water, screaming into the river.

     

    He lunged to his feet, the tendons standing out in his neck and his jaw locked as he roared into the night.  In the nearby trader’s camp, he heard the sudden commotion as the traders scrambled out of their tents, the rasp of steel as the guards drew their swords and came to investigate.  He stayed on his knees, gagging and vomiting blood.  He held up a hand, fingers splayed and halted the guards as he choked and coughed.

     

    Recognizing him as a Guildsman and seeing that he was unarmed (though with his magic he was quite deadly), the guards sheathed their swords.  The Guard Captain ignored his upheld hand and approached.

     

    “Are you well, Master Guildsman,” the Captain asked.

     

    “No,” he gagged, “but I’ll live.”

     

    He rose to his feet, lurching upright.  He wiped the blood off of his chest and revealed the smooth flesh beneath.  His wound was healed and he had cleared his lungs of blood.  His hand went instinctively to his side but he was completely unarmed.  He had left his weapons behind when he teleported away from the Guild.  He touched his Seal but it was inert, drained of magic.

     

    They must have gone to the Guild Master with their tale.

     

    He growled as the wind and the water running down his chest and stomach reminded him that he had been roused from bed and was utterly naked.  He looked at the traders lingering behind the guards.  Their pavilions were closed and would not open til morning and, judging by the position of the moon, it was midnight, the Witching Hour.  His gold had been left behind as well.  He had no gold and nothing to trade.  Too many guards were around for him to risk battle completely naked and with his magic alone.  He removed his Seal and held it out by the chain.

     

    “I need clothes and a sword,” he said, voice flat and cold.  “Which of you is open right now?”

     

     

     

    Adelina the Sorrowful Blade silently left the Guild Master’s office.

     

    Tears stained her cheeks and her eyes were red-rimmed and burned.  Her nose was red as well and, as the door closed behind her, the hard words that the Guild Master had leveled against her echoed in her head.  The accusations that her machinations had endangered the Guild struck far too true for her to deny and it hurt her heart to have his anger centered squarely on her.  She sniffled and rubbed her tears away with the back of her fist as she descended the stairs.

     

    Hard words had been uttered against her companions as well, Whisper and Blade, Sparrowhawke and Sabre, but the blame had been laid on her shoulders and hers alone.  He had castigated her as the ring leader, as the seductress that had set Guildsman against Guildsman.  The death of Bloodraven laid at her feet at last, the sheer incredulity on the Guild Master's face, the way he struggled to find the words to express his outrage.

     

    It burned her as she walked slowly down the stairs.

     

    Two Guild Apprentices were waiting at the bottom of the stairs, one of them holding her bag and the other holding her weapons.  She buckled on her weapon belt and then hoisted her bag onto her shoulders.  As she walked past the Map Table, she looked back once, gazing up the curved stairs.  The Guild Master stood at the top, looking down at her.

     

    "I will contact you when you may return," he said gravely.

     

    "No..."

     

    She took off her Guild Seal and held it by the chain.

     

    "You won't."

     

    She tossed it onto the Map Table and strode out of the hall, ignoring his call for her to wait.  She squinted against the bright afternoon sunlight and kept walking, looking forward to the Crossroads and not turning back nor slowing her pace as she heard the Guild Master calling for her from the gates of the castle.  Tears flowed freely down her cheeks but she did not look back.

     

     

     

    Sabre braced his hands on the rail and leaned forward, watching the lonely figure walk through the North Quarter of Bowerstone.

     

    What's this?

     

    Adelina the Sorrowful Blade walked with her head down, hair hiding her face.  Her steps were slow and measured and she was bent under the weight of a large bag.  One foot in front of the other, as if she did not have the strength to continue on but kept going through sheer will and desire.  He stayed where he was, letting her come to him.  When she reached the base of the steps, she stopped and looked up at him.

     

    Her eyes were red and swollen, her cheeks blotched, her nose red but her face was defiant, daring him to mock her tears.  He did not.  He straightened and walked down the stairs, moving around her and taking her pack from her shoulders.

     

    "He exiled you?"

     

    She nodded and rubbed her fist across her eyes and nose.  "He did.  I deserved it."

     

    He shouldered her pack.  "No, you didn't."

     

    He walked up the stairs and she followed him, using the rail to keep her mostly upright.  "This is all my fault."

     

    "Maze is to blame," he said.  "Maze and the Bloodraven and Jack of Blades."

     

    "Thank you," she said softly.  "For everything..."

     

    "You don't have to thank me."  He led her inside and gave her pack to a servant.  "Take her to a room and get her settled."

     

    He looked at 'lina.

     

    "Your mother is upstairs.  I'll let her know you've arrived."

     

     

     

    Four golden Guild Seals lay on the Map Table.  Blade looked down at them and touched them one by one.

     

    The Sorrowful Blade.  Whisper.  Sparrowhawke.  Sabre.

     

    Adelina the Sorrowful Blade had cast her Seal onto the Map Table when the Guild Master turned her out of the castle.  Whisper and Sparrowhawke had cast their Seals onto the table when the learned of her exile from the Guild.  Sabre's Seal had been delivered by a servant.  The four of them, inseperable since childhood, had departed the Guild together.  He felt the weight of heavy gazes upon him and raised his eyes from the table, still touching Sabre's Seal.  At the top of the stairs, the Guild Master watched him, face seemingly carved from granite, lined and troubled.

     

    "Will you be joining them," the Guild Master asked.

     

    "Should I remain," Blade countered.

     

    "The Guild needs you."  Point.

     

    Blade shrugged.  "The Guild needed the Sorrowful Blade, Whisper, Sparrowhawke, and Sabre."  Counterpoint.

     

    "You owe them nothing."  Point.

     

    Blade looked back down at the Seals.  "They're my friends."  Counterpoint.

     

    "You sound as if you have made your decision," the Guild Master said gravely.

     

    "I've considered my decision."

     

    One bushy white eyebrow rose, the Guild Master's voice lowered.  "Did they ask you to leave?"

     

    "They asked me to visit now and again."

     

    It seemed they had sparred to the Guild Master's satisfaction; he came down the stairs with calculated ease and grace, still a warrior, still dangerous.  "What have you decided?"

     

    "I haven't."  Blade picked up a Quest Card.  "I'll let you know when I do."


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  04-30-2009, 18:54 3335310 in reply to 3335237

    Re: A House Divided

    Wonderful addition to your story. Thanks for this chapter.^^ [^^]

  •  04-30-2009, 20:25 3335367 in reply to 3335310

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    awesome addition, it's great to see your story updated again. Up [:up:]

    Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel was just a freight train coming your way
  •  04-30-2009, 22:00 3335404 in reply to 3335367

    Re: A House Divided

    Short and sweet. I love this addition.
  •  04-30-2009, 22:09 3335411 in reply to 3335237

    Re: A House Divided

    Nice update.

    Really starting to enjoy and like Blade. He reminds me of someone...Cheeky [:cheeky:]
  •  05-01-2009, 1:47 3335538 in reply to 3335237

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    that was brilliant! I love how you're slowly bringing Blade closer into the group.
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  •  05-01-2009, 22:08 3336209 in reply to 3335538

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    This was awesome. Poor Adelina, though.... If I were the Guild Master, I wouldn't lose those four so easily. Thanks for writing this. Smily [:)]

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  •  05-02-2009, 8:34 3336474 in reply to 3335538

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    it's a great work and you should consider a book

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  •  05-02-2009, 14:35 3336620 in reply to 3336474

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    Re: A House Divided

    Loser online^

    See you,when you grow up.


    Smily [:)]

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  •  05-02-2009, 19:38 3336921 in reply to 3336620

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    dosos:
    Loser online^

    See you,when you grow up.


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  •  05-02-2009, 20:27 3336934 in reply to 3336921

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    Moonfever just ignore it. We don't acknowledge trolls, just report them, and continue to enjoy the the forum.

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  •  05-12-2009, 13:35 3344442 in reply to 3336934

    Re: A House Divided

    Loved the update, great story. Can't wait for it to continue. Might have to go back and re-read what was posted before. Thanks for posting. Hope all is well again with your wife and family.

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  •  05-13-2009, 22:19 3346908 in reply to 3344442

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    Reflection

    Looking back, I see 16 chapters and 10 pages. I see countless posts supporting me, praising me, and urging me on. I see a troll or two lurking and smirking, wasting my time and theirs. I see a lot of love and hard work. And, as I work on the next chapter, I feel compelled to thank you all, even the trolls.

    Why the trolls?

    Because they cared enough to post. Even if it was just to harass me, they took the time to do so. You have to look at the bright side. Love or hate, envy or celebration, the ability to inspire emotion is something every writer aspires to.

    So, to my friends, to my enemies, to my fans, and to the trolls:

    Thank you.

    Ciao for now,

    ~Marcasite
    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  05-13-2009, 22:32 3346933 in reply to 3346908

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    thanks for writing...your story is awesome

    Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel was just a freight train coming your way
  •  05-13-2009, 23:40 3347015 in reply to 3346933

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    Re: Reflection

    You're one of the best writers the board has ever seen, and you definately know how to convey emotion and imagery.  I don't see why trolls would bother with anyone else, honestly.   
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