yeah he'll be in it.

I'll leave you to type away then.

Chapter 4 “The path of evil" For the past week, Spire had built more buildings in his town including a creature pen. So far Spire had taught crusher to collect and eat grain, collect wood and ore, build buildings and poo in the fields to fertilize them. Crusher did have some little……incidents where he sat on a few houses but has learnt that destroying houses, eating people and stealing from the store house are forbidden and as much as it hurt Spire to watch it, he gave crusher slap so that he wouldn’t do it again. Everything was going well until Thraal appeared, “Oh hey Thraal, what are you doing here?” Spire asked, “I just popped round to see how your evil citadel was coming along but noticed you haven’t built any armouries, why?” Thrall asked, “What are armouries?” Spire asked, “Oh yeah, I forgot you were a newbie, don’t worry, pop round later and I’ll teach you about them,” Thraal said with an evil smile on his face. “Ok, I’ll see you….” Spire finished but Thraal had already gone. Spire went to see Thraal and couldn’t wait to learn about armouries. He brought hi creature along so that he could learn too. Spire arrived at some huge gates that were covered in blood and the path leading to it was aligned with punishment spikes and flaming torches. He banged on the gate and they opened for him, he then walked inside and they closed behind him. The inside of the city was full of grotty hovels and lots of people were homeless. There were prisons, no idea what they were for and touchier pits. As Spire walked people screamed and were dieing around him, it wasn’t a good sight. He reached a huge black temple at the far end of the city. Spire stepped inside the temple and saw a figure in black armour, that was Thraal, but there was someone else, someone so evil that there presence filled the hearts of men with fear. Spire head left his creature with the other creatures, which was a bad idea being that the other creatures were bigger and stronger than crusher, he spent most of his time in the corner of the creature pen whilst the others picked on people to eat. Back in the temple the figure turned around and stared at Spire. The stare sent a shiver down Spires spine and the storehouse behind Spire burst into flames killing several people, “Spire, this is Zatl, my dear friend, Zatl, this is Spire, the newbie,” Thraal said, “I see, tell me son, what do you wish to know,” Zatl said with a chilling voice, “I would like to know what armouries are?” Spire asked, “Ah going along the path of darkness are ya?” Zatl asked, “I don’t know yet, sure why not,” Spire answered “good, then lets start from the beginning,” Zatl said. They talked for hours and the more they talked the more the dark side was becoming Spires true path, although he didn’t like the idea of killing your own people, he thought that it was flattering having them risk there lives for there gods. He was also going to teach his creature the teachings of war, that way his creature could kill more enemies. As he left Thraal and Zatl laughed, and declared an evil alliance with the newbie. Back a his town Spire ordered his builders to build some armouries and being loyal to there master meant doing such tasks. Little did Spire know that he just sealed the fate of the Aztecs, there thirst for war will lead tem to almost completely rule the world. Crusher was still a bit shook up but really wanted to lift some weights so that he could become bigger and stronger than those other creatures, it would be hard, but his determination drove crusher to performing such tasks as slowly the path of evil revealed itself to Spire. He was being engulfed by the evil, and he didn’t know it.

Wow, that's an incredible chapter!

The irony is in my story Zatl has become a pretty much good god .

there's always room for him to become good here too, but with a 3 headed snake with lion heads that spits poison as a creature, i think its hardly unlikely. Im glad you liked it.

Hardly unlikely means it's likely Anyway, I've taken care of the problem.

I'm the only one of us with a good god for the main character... ouch. And all our gods are in your story... my city and ideas as well as my creature's name .

yeah but your idea's for the birth of a god is ace, and its not like all the evil gods are going to gang up on you, there is a powerfuller evil to be destroyed, well, 3 powerful enamies. you can probibly guess who they are.

Zatl, Spire and Thraal? Otherwise, no. I can't guess .

Nice chapter yay blood death and dark things

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the 3 awesome powers stronger than any other god are, nemesis (with his 2 minions) The undead god Sol (god of the sun and firey judgement, the most powerful god in the entire inner realm.)

Aww, I saw you'd posted and I thought there was another chapter

The undead god's name is Xoatl, or "Jimmy", as I tried to get eveyone to call him. It didn't work but... who cares.

i told you you would know them, they are the evilest gods i could think of. all play there part somewhere, firt its nemeis's turn, bring on the minions.

 Quoting: Undead---God

The undead god's name is Xoatl, or "Jimmy", as I tried to get eveyone to call him. It didn't work but... who cares.

it sounds good to me, jimmy it is.

Double post OMG!

Chapter 5 “Shadows on the shores” It had been a year since spire had been taught the teachings of evil and war, and he was using them wisely, his people however didn’t live in fear of there god, but out of duty to serve him and out of devotion. Spire had created a huge citadel with many different kinds of armouries. It was different to Thraals in the sense that it wasn’t on fire for a start but it was also not full of death or screaming women. It wasn’t full of love ether it was……a productive settlement. There productive levels had increased dramatically meaning more trade wit other towns but less happiness for the people in the town. Spire cared about the lives of his people only because they would some day become part of hi formidable army. Many tribes had tried to take the town when Spire let a trade caravan out of the gates but had always been crushed by the Aztec warriors. As well as his city growing, his creature had also grown. The maximum high of a full grown turtle was 11m, all creatures had different maximum heights but all were not higher than 14m. Spires’s turtle had grown to 9m and could crush warriors with ease. He had taken part in any battles and had not lost one. He had been bestowed with a water miracle and a lava miracle. Spire was the kind of god that liked to lead by example and his creature had learnt from its master. Spire had many miracles to unleash upon his enemies, not as much as the other gods on the island, but enough to cause havoc. He had, A lava miracle, Water miracle Shield miracle Meteor miracle Earthquake epic His Symbol that had once been a dot on his shoulder had now spread all the way down his arm and all over his shoulder, this meant that he had become more powerful and the bigger the symbol on the god, the stronger the god. Thraal and Zatl’s symbols were a bit bigger than Spire’s showing that they were power fuller, but Spire didn’t take that into count when facing a god. Spire had huge armies waiting to defend the town; he would stop any army stupid enough to challenge his. He was now as evil as the ones that had taught him and they all had meetings every week to see each others progress. Zatl had not changed much, he had already been as powerful as he could be and Thraal’s Symbol had grown too but not much. Spires’s people worked hard for there god and they respected him. Spire finally felt like a true god and as much as Lateol disagreed with Spires choice of path, he still respected the gods wishes and even though they now were good and evil, they were still friends and Spire would need a good god to help him in the future. Spire was watching his people work when a huge thunderous horn was blown. It sounded like a war horn so quickly Spire rose up into the sky to check it out. It was coming from the sea and the closer it got the more Spire saw. He saw some huge black ships and huge ice blue ships. They landed on the beach at the far end of the island and started to unload some people and other stuff. “I wonder what it is.” Thraal said appearing next to Spire, “You idiot, it’s obvious, it’s an invading army, they have come to capture this land!” Zatl shouted. Zatl was obviously scared of something; he never snapped at any one of us like that, it was clear that these invaders were getting to him, but why? “Who do you think they are?” Spire asked, “I don know, but they are not any tribe I have ever seen and they have a god,” Thraal said, “No, they have 2,” Lateol said, appearing in front of Spire, “Have any idea’s who they are?” Spire asked, neither Thraal nor Lateol seemed to know the answer but one god did, Zatl. “Its them,” Zatl said in an almost whispering voice. Not his usual evil choking voice. “Its who?” Spire asked, there was deadly silence for a bit until Zatl finally said there names. “Its Lethys and Khazar,” Zatl said, everyone seemed shocked, well all but Spire, he had not got a clue who they were, “Who are they?” Spire asked, “They are the minions of nemesis,” Lateol said, Spire knew about Nemesis but didn’t know about his minions, but he would soon find out. Khazar and Lethys liked to meet the gods they were to destroy and so floated over to greet them. As they god closer Spire could feel an icy chill from Lethys and an unwelcoming darkness from Khazar. There was no way Spire could take ether one on but he thought he would have a go, “What are you doing on our island?” Spire said, “isn’t it obvious, we are here to invade, and make your stay as dreadful as possible,” Khazar said, “Well I suggest you leave at once or feel the raff of Spire!” Spire shouted, “Dear…..Spire, we have already taken your land by landing on it, the best thing ou can do is keep your mouth shut and just hand over your cities,” Khazar said, “Never!” Spire shouted, “Well then you will feel the chill of my icy death,” Lathys said and the 2 gods turned around and head back to there ships to shout at there people. There was a deadly silence for a few minutes then Zatl went right up to Spire and said, “Do you realise what you have just done! You have just insulted the strongest gods on this island; they aren’t going to spare any of us” “You are a fool Zatl, I thought you were the strongest god on this island, but you’re as weak as they are, I’m the only god willing to put up a fight, and I intend to do so,” Spire said floating back down to his city to train his armies for the up an coming war. Zatl, Thraal and Lateol looked t each other and then smiled, “That boy has determination, and that is the only power that is needed, I’m with ya Spire, lets crush them!” Thraal shouted heading back to his city to build up an army. “Quit right, lets show these invaders that the might of there armies will not save them from the might of my city,” Lateol said heading back to his city. Zatl was the only god left, he smiled and said, “its time to regain my honour, I’ll make sure that I fill the land with there armies bodies,” Zatl said, heading to his city to prepare for war.

Hey, this is getting good. er.

i told you it would start getting good, its just all that explining stuff that boring.

Boring... yes, you're meant to say that to the person who thought up most of it, aren't you

Ooh. Owned

no i ment y twists, you didnt think of Prayer day (but something similar) and i had no idea how i was going to make my god from a newbie to evil. but once i had it gets interesting.

Heh, Zatl in my story is getting pretty evil. Take a look at it. Anyway, when is the next chapter coming along? And you can't show zatl the way you have, noo. No no no no no... I'm sounding like wotshisface off the Vicar of Dibly, aren't I?

Yes. Yes you are .