Define exciting.

Ken

Nah, nothing like explosions or guns. Like you had in the argument between Hooker & Shaw. I need excitement in the dialogue. So far, it's kind of boring, straight forward dialogue (what little i've thought out). I'm trying to write a treatmen, an build off of that. So far, *knocks on a wooden object*, i've been able to move passed where I was stuck at yesterday, and the story is slowly growing into a script This isn't really a problem but, I feel this movie will be a very long one, 'cause I have so much happening. I mean, even with all of the cuts i've made getting rid of useless stuff, it's still seeming like it's going to be a long movie. 'cause it seems like I have so much I want to say, but I can't say it all 'cause then the movie would have to be 2 parts