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Sorrow's Lament

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  •  11-29-2008, 19:17 3243996 in reply to 3243883

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    Bravo. This story is really getting G o o d [Good].

    "Time is our greatest teacher. Unfortunately, it kills most of its pupils." ~Louis Hector Berlioz

  •  11-29-2008, 22:43 3244115 in reply to 3243996

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    Re: Maze & the Bandit King

    must read moar! Ogre [:gre:]

    Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel was just a freight train coming your way
  •  11-30-2008, 18:47 3244929 in reply to 3244115

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    Re: Maze & the Bandit King

    yes, more please.
    Flown down by ravens and stolen by the dawn's first rays, night mares stalk the night. Through dusty windows and cracked glass, they watch the weary rest till mornings rise.
  •  12-01-2008, 23:06 3246175 in reply to 3244929

    Re: Maze & the Bandit King

    mo' story PLZ

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  •  12-02-2008, 20:35 3246960 in reply to 3243996

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    great story, I can't wait to read more. It's very G o o d [Good]

    Oh, the huge manatee!
  •  12-04-2008, 21:25 3249549 in reply to 3246960

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    Re: Maze & the Bandit King

    Thank you, all.  More coming right up.


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  12-04-2008, 22:06 3249575 in reply to 3249549

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    Trust, Friendship, Lies

    Adelina the Sorrowful Blade stood at the crossroads, standing beneath the statue that pointed, at this very moment, back the way she had come, into the Greatwood Forest.  She was wearing her black chainmail, sans helmet and wore Maze’s sword (which she had taken to calling the Betrayer’s Blade) across her back.  She stared down the path at the Guild.  In the pre-dawn gloom, the castle was grim and foreboding, rising out of the mist like an ancient sentinel.

     

    She took a deep breath and screwed her courage to the sticking place.  She had Twinblade’s broken Guild Seal dangling from the hilt of the Betrayer’s Blade, all the proof she needed to convince Maze she had completed his quest.  She did not intend on staying in the Guild Castle for long; she needed to make a journey to Knothole Glade and, from there, to the Arena.  A minstrel had sought her out by name in Oakvale, bearing a message for her.

     

    Adelina,
    I have been invited to compete in the Arena.  I’ve decided to do it.  I’d like for you to be in attendance.
    ~Sabre

     

    It seemed that Sabre was going to fulfill the predictions made when he earned his Seal.  He had yet to reach twenty, was not even nineteen summers of age, and he was going to compete in the Arena.  She did not know if he would become an Arena Champion, that was a feat that seemed beyond even him, but it was a great honor to just be invited.  Quick and deadly, she knew he would do well, though.

     

    But her pleasure at his success wavered before her need to test him, to test all of the young Guild Warriors that were her friends and the experienced Guild Warriors that she had grown up idolizing.  She did not think any of them would betray her.

     

    But I once believed that Maze was like a father to me.  The thought was sad and tinged with bitter hatred.

     

    She started walking again as the sky lightened to a steely gray in anticipation of the dawn.  She was ushered into the Guild by a hooded apprentice and she saw the Guild Master laying Quest Cards on the Map Table.  His eyes widened when he saw Twinblade’s broken Guild Seal dangling from the pommel of her sword and she knew that her reputation would be bolstered by this victory, false though it was.  She inclined her head to him but bypassed the Map Table on her way up the stairs.  She paused outside the door to the room she had shared with Whisper.

     

    Why did I come back here?  None of my friends live here anymore.

     

    She opened the door silently and stepped into the room.

     

    And I don’t live here anymore, either, it would seem.

     

    A young girl, perhaps thirteen years old, was sleeping in Whisper’s bed.  A boy about the same age was sleeping in her bed.  She sighed and closed the door, stepping back into the hall.  She would have to find a steward and locate the box with her things in it.  As she stepped out into the training grounds, she spotted a light burning in Maze’s tower.

     

    Might as well get this over with.

     

    She needed to show him the trophy, to close the Quest and be done with him.  She entered the tower and ascended the serpentine stairs.  She paused below the landing as she heard the sleepy murmur of voices.  Her armor made silence impossible so she did not bother.  She walked boldly up the last curve of stone steps and across the floor.  She found Maze abed with one of the Guild Apprentices, a slim young thing called Rumor, a slender and small breasted blonde that was a summer and winter shy of sixteen.

     

    “Twinblade is dead,” she said, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the silence.

     

    Maze sat up quickly, startled awake.  Rumor yanked the covers up to her chin with a yelp and hid her flushing face by turning away and curling into a little ball.  Adelina wondered if Rumor had been compelled into his bed, as she herself had been, to learn a spell or if the old Sorcerer had simply taken her with the promise of knowledge.

     

    “Could this not have waited until morning,” Maze snapped, “as my summons of you in Oakvale did?”

     

    “It is morning, Maze,” she said, “and just as in Oakvale, I see you’ve forced yourself on another young Guildswoman.”

     

    Anger darkened Maze’s cheeks and mottled his neck.  He rose from the bed and Rumor wrapped the sheet around her body, fleeing.  Neither of them spoke again until the girl was gone.

     

    “Jealousy ill suits you, Sorrowful Blade,” he snarled.

     

    “You mistake jealousy for disdain, Maze,” she retorted, “and disgust.  She doesn’t even have a Seal.”  Her eyes pointedly turned to the bed and the evidence of Rumor’s sundered maidenhood.

     

    Maze clenched his fists but brought himself visibly under control, becoming the sagely old councilor.  “You promised me Twinblade’s head,” he reminded her.

     

    “It was too ugly to take as a trophy.  I brought his Seal as proof.”

     

    His eyes went to the broken seal dangling from the hilt of the Betrayer’s Blade by a leather thong.  A tense silence grew between them and Adelina sundered it.

     

    G o o d [Good]bye, Maze.”

     

    She turned her back on him and started for the stairs.  The skin between her shoulder blades crawled but she forced herself to keep walking.  She did not relax until she was crossing the grassy field towards the Guild Shop.  She saw Rumor running up the outer stairs that led back into the Apprentice Dormitories but ignored her.  The girl would need to learn her own lessons.

     

     

     

    It was past dawn but the town of Bowerstone was still slumbering, with only a handful of dock workers wandering the streets and the Guards sleepily standing watch or patrolling the streets.  She had surrendered her arms, as dictated by the town charter, and she hurried through South Bowerstone, heading for the house near the town’s school.  The door was locked but she found the spare key hidden cleverly in a cleft between two loose stones and let herself in.

     

    Empty mugs and bottles stood on every flat surface and she stepped over boots and cloaks as she entered Sabre’s house.

     

    They must have celebrated his invitation to the Arena.

     

    She walked upstairs and sighed when she beheld the carnage.

     

    Sabre was sprawled naked on top of the covers of the largest bed, with an equally nude Whisper face down beside him, drooling on the pillow.  Thorn was sleeping on the other side of Whisper, perilously close to the edge of the bed, wearing one sock.  Sparrowhawke was on one of the other beds, under the covers and snoring softly.

     

    She sat on the third, unused bed, and took off her boots and armor.  Picking a book off of Sabre’s shelves, ‘The Guild of Zeroes’, she leaned against the ornate headboard and waited for them to wake from their debauched slumbers.  But her eyes were constantly drawn back to Whisper’s nude form.  By Bloodraven’s account, he had claimed Whisper several times and had even enjoyed her with a whore called Selene in the Darkwood Bordello.  She sensed the truth in those tales and, after her own experience with Bloodraven and Selene, she found herself wondering what it would be like to be with Whisper.

     

    She looked away.

     

    Before they had earned their Seals, Whisper had regularly slept with Sabre and with Thorn, often at the same time.  She was fairly certain that Sparrowhawke had slept with her once or twice as well.

     

    I gave myself to ‘raven and Selene at the Bordello.  I sought his bedroll every night we traveled together.  I let Maze use me.  Does love exist for us?  Do we sacrifice love for power in the Guild?

     

    The thought that love would not or could not exist for her depressed her.  She closed her book and stood up, bare feet silent on the smooth floorboards.  But when she turned around with a new book in hand, something to cheer her up, she found herself looking into Sparrowhawke’s dark blue eyes.

     

    “I didn’t mean to wake you,” she said softly.

     

    He stretched beneath the covers.  “Walk more softly,” he said with a smile.  “You jingled all the way up the stairs.”

     

    “I meant to come later but new Apprentices had been moved into my room at the Guild.”

     

    He smiled.  “You should have come sooner.  We wore poor Whisper out.”

     

    Jealousy surged through her as she considered all the time she had wasted, the many opportunities she had to be with Sparrowhawke.  She suddenly regretted giving herself to Bloodraven.

     

    He must have seen something in her eyes.  He sat up.

     

    “I didn’t mean to offend.”

     

    She hesitated.  “I…”  She could not look into his eyes any longer.  “You didn’t.  I…”

     

    He rose from the bed and moved to sit next to her.  He was wearing loose black pants.  She had thought him naked beneath the sheets.

     

    “What’s wrong?”

     

    What’s wrong?  I’ve wanted you since I was a girl and I’ve given myself to two men.

     

    With the harsh light of day between her and the Barrow Fields, she now believed that the Bloodraven did not love her, had used her just as Maze had used her.  Only he had been successful at seducing her where Maze had taken what he wanted.

     

    “I…” She looked at him, deep into his eyes.

     

    “What is it?”

     

    Words failed her so she kissed him.  After a moment, he kissed her back, his arms closing around her.  She let him bear her back onto the mattress.  His hands were cold, his mouth was hot, and she felt a deep, moist heat flush through her body as he slowly removed her clothes.

     

    It was different than it had been with Maze and even the Bloodraven.

     

    There was no pain, her body welcomed him eagerly.  Their bodies sliding together, she gasped and moaned as he plunged into her, again and again.  Her cries woke the others but she paid them no mind as she gave herself to Sparrowhawke.  Words escaped her without conscious thought but they inspired him to greater heights of passion and he dragged her along with him.  Sabre and Thorn pinned Whisper between them but she paid them no heed as she gave herself at last to her Sparrowhawke.

     

    No shame burned in her, as it had in the aftermath of her trysts with the Bloodraven.  No sick regret flooded her, as it had in the aftermath of her surrender to Maze.  It was not the true love that she had read about it books but it was close enough for the moment.  She couldn’t breathe.  The world closed in on her and unbearable pleasure ripped through her body.  His name was on her lips as her first orgasm flared through her, leaving her limp beneath him.  She cooed as he spilled his seed deep in her secret garden.

     

    He kissed her gently, supporting himself on his hands and looking down at her.

     

    “You love me?”

     

    She blinked up at him.  Did I say that?  She had.  “I do.”

     

    “Why didn’t you ever tell me?”

     

    She couldn’t look away from his eyes.  “I was afraid.”

     

    He kissed her again and she forgot her fears and troubles for a time.

     

     

     

    The sun was rising higher and Twinblade shielded his eyes against the glare as he gazed down at the harbor far below.

     

    With news of his death traveling far and wide, he would not be able to leave the camp, not until their war against Jack of Blades had ended.  He frowned as a ship heeled over and raced into the harbor, sails billowing.  It had been ten long years since he had last walked the roads as a Guild Warrior, famed and respected by all.  He could hardly believe the day when he could do so again was so rapidly approaching.

     

    “Blood,” he growled.  “This be all about blood.”

     

    Aiden nodded.  “Yes, old friend… my blood… the blood of Archon…”

     

    “Why di’n’ you tell yer sister about Maze?”

     

    Aiden turned his face to the sun, seeking the warmth of it on his face.  “She is not ready to know everything.  One betrayal too many and she will be broken.  It is enough for her to know that Jack of Blades is her enemy and that Maze cannot be trusted.”

     

    “She migh’ be stronger than ye think.”

     

    Aiden nodded.  “Might be… but for her to know that Maze led the raid on Oakvale… she would do something foolish.  I have not waited all this time for her to be killed by that ***.”

     

    “When will ye tell her?”

     

    “When she can kill Maze.”

     

    “Bah… tha’ won’ happen so long as she’s lettin’ them young stallions take turns in her saddle.”

     

    Aiden smiled.  “The Guild is decadent but they are her true friends.  Besides, how many girls became women between you and Thunder in your youth?  How many women laid beneath you while their husbands were away?”

     

    Twinblade growled but had to concede the point.  “Bah…”

     

    Aiden laughed, a rare sound.  “Come, old friend.  We have much to do and little time to do it.”

     

     

     

    The crowd roared, bloodthirsty and unheeding of the pain and misery they beheld.

     

    Adelina the Sorrowful Blade had to look away as a young Guild Fighter, a man in the black garb of a warrior that never earned a Seal, was pinned to the bloody sand by a Hobbe spear.  She heard the crowd raise their voices and his her face in Sparrowhawke’s shoulder.

     

    “It’s over,” Sparrowhawke said softly.

     

    She dared to look and saw a Hobbe lifting a bloody mace, bits of hair and bone clinging to it, high above its head.  The crowd went wild.  It was the first death of the morning.

     

    “I can’t believe they’re cheering,” she said.

     

    “They’ve never felt the bite of a blade,” Sparrowhawke reasoned.  “They’ve never seen their own blood on someone else’s sword.”

     

    The Arena Guards entered through the heavy doors, shields locked together and spears thrust outward, herding the Hobbes back into their cages.  Adelina frowned as one of the Guards grabbed the dead Guild Warrior by the ankle and drag him away.  The lack of respect for the dead ignited a flare of anger within her.

     

    “Do you want to leave?”

     

    She shook her head grimly.  “I’m here to support Sabre.  I won’t let him fight with just these… people screaming for his death.”

     

    Sparrowhawke drew her closer, his arm around her shoulders.  Even with the press of the crowd, they had space around them, their armor and their weapons keeping the masses at bay.  Their Guild Seals prominently displayed, no one dared press against them.

     

    “Where’s Whisper,” she asked suddenly.  “I thought she was going to meet us here.”

     

    On Sparrowhawke’s other side, Thorn leaned forward on the rail.  “Don’t know.  She should have been here by now.”

     

    Adelina leaned forward suddenly as the heavy doors opened and Sabre stepped out onto the bloody sand.  His hands were raised high and he seemed to bask in the roars of the crowd, even going so far as to wink and blow kisses at the ladies that crowded against the lowest tier rails.  He played to the crowd even as the announcer proclaimed his name and called for the first round of beasts to be released.

     

     

     

    Thunder stood behind the Lady Grey in her private box and gazed down into the Arena.

     

    It had been many long seasons since he had set foot on the Arena sands and carved his reputation out of the hides of beasts and men alike.  He still wore his Arena Champion’s Seal affixed to his armor but he felt that the glory days of the Arena were gone and he said as much to the Lady.

     

    “Bah… such feeble games… when I fought in the Arena, I was not given time to breathe nor such easy opponants.”

     

    The Lady Grey seemed far from impressed.  “So you’ve said before, Thunder.  Hush, I’m watching Sabre.”

     

    He glowered down at the boy as he artfully dispatched the last of the Hobbes and flourished his blade, flicking the blood onto the sand.  The crowd roared its approval and the Lady Grey smiled, her gloved hands clapping gently.  Thunder gazed upon her breasts and cleavage from above and slightly behind her, where she could not see the aim of his eyes.

     

    “He certainly has style, eh, Thunder?”

     

    He glowered at the boy, tearing his eyes from her breasts.  “Style and no substance,” he insisted.  “He will not last.”

     

    Lady Grey pursed her lips, a gloved finger tapping against their full curves.  “I think he will.  I believe he will be champion today.”

     

    “It will not happen.”

     

    She cast her eyes up at him, tilting her chin and turning slightly.  One blonde eyebrow was quirked and her blue eyes were alight with mischievous fire.

     

    “Would you be willing to wager that?”  Her voice was coy and full of promise.

     

    He nodded.  “I would.  What do you propose.”

     

    “If Sabre wins,” she said, “you’ll give me your Champion’s Seal.”

     

    He found himself at a loss for words.  His hand went to the Seal, where it had been cleverly linked into a recessed hollow above his breastbone.  He looked back down at Sabre, still grandstanding to the crowd.

     

    “Do you suddenly lack the courage to wager your conviction,” she asked archly.

     

    “No… but if I am correct and he does not become Champion, I will take your hand in marriage as my prize.”

     

    She considered for a moment.  “Done.”

     

    He smiled.  Sabre would not be Champion.  He was G o o d [Good] but not G o o d [Good] enough.  This time tomorrow, he would be Lord Mayor of Bowerstone and the Lady Grey would be his wife.  He was already hard thinking about the things he would do to her once he claimed her in their marital bed.  It would be the sweetest prize he ever claimed and the Lady Grey would be his most grand trophy.

     

     

     

    She heard the crowds chanting his name.

     

    No one knew what she planned; she had shared her intentions with the Guild Master and the Guild Master alone.  The invitation had come in the dead of night, delivered to her in the cold gray light of dawn.  It was hand-written but genuine, bearing the Seal of the Master of the Arena.  She could not pass up this opportunity.

     

    I know you will forgive me, my friend.

     

    She tightened her grip on the smooth shaft of her spear, licking her lips.  The Arena Guards watched her, measured her.  She heard the announcer’s voice proclaiming Sabre’s victory and that they had a special surprise, a new twist to their game.  The heavy doors opened and the sudden influx of light half-blinded her.

     

    “Also from the Guild…”

     

    She began walking forward, towards the light.

     

    “…come to battle in the Arena…”

     

    The stones gave way to sand.

     

    “…a fellow member of the Guild…”

     

    She raised her spear and shook it at the crowd, bathing in their screams and shouts.

     

    “Whisper!”

     

    She saw Sabre’s arctic blue eyes lock onto her and Whisper smiled.


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  12-04-2008, 22:31 3249603 in reply to 3249575

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    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    finally, I can't wait to read moar! Up [:up:]

    Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel was just a freight train coming your way
  •  12-04-2008, 23:38 3249641 in reply to 3249603

    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    I liked the original. But the rewrite is awesome!!! I can'wait to read more..
  •  12-05-2008, 16:05 3250374 in reply to 3249641

    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    Oh, wow. G o o d [Good] ending (though I probably should have seen it coming). Keep it coming, mate.

    "Time is our greatest teacher. Unfortunately, it kills most of its pupils." ~Louis Hector Berlioz

  •  12-06-2008, 0:17 3250898 in reply to 3250374

    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    mo'
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  •  12-07-2008, 15:03 3252296 in reply to 3250898

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    great story Up [:up:]Up [:up:]Up [:up:]Up [:up:]Up [:up:]

    Metallica=greatest band ever
  •  12-07-2008, 17:52 3252517 in reply to 3252296

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    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    Thanks everyone.

    The next chapter is being worked on right now.  The revision phase is over and now its on to all new chapters and such.  I'm pretty excited about the new stuff and I hope to have the next chapter up soon.

    Ciao for now!

    ~Marcasite


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  12-07-2008, 18:00 3252531 in reply to 3252517

    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    Godspeed Marcasite!

    Metallica=greatest band ever
  •  12-07-2008, 19:25 3252590 in reply to 3252531

    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    segwaytom:
    Godspeed Marcasite!


    agreed...this may sound sad, but when I get home from work everyday I  run to my pc like it's Christmas morning to see if you've updated it. Nervous [:nervous:]

    Oh, the huge manatee!
  •  12-07-2008, 23:43 3252791 in reply to 3252590

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    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    You all know how to make a guy feel great.  Seriously, thanks for the praise.  I finished the next chapter and it's going up soon.  I just have to check the formatting.

    Ciao for now,

    ~Marcasite


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  12-07-2008, 23:55 3252798 in reply to 3252791

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    Blood on the Sand

    The roar of the crowd was deafening as whisper strode onto the Arena sands.  They shouted and screamed her name, roared for blood to be spilled.  She heard them calling for Sabre to kill Whisper or for Whisper to kill Sabre.  Adelina had to shout to be heard above them, on her tiptoes and clinging to Sparrowhawke’s arm.

     

    “What’s she doing?!”

     

    Sparrowhawke didn’t answer her, his eyes narrowed and his mouth grim.  Beside Sparrowhawke, hands white-knuckled on the rail, Thorn cursed.

     

    “She’s making a bloody spectacle,” Thorn growled.  “Two Guildsmen in the Arena at once?  It’s unheard of!”

     

    Adelina looked around at the crowd, the bloodthirsty mass of villagers and townsmen.  Her eyes keyed to a familiar figure in the Arena Master’s Box.  Leaning on his staff and wearing his blue and green coat, Maze gazed into the Arena and nodded to himself.  She looked away and tugged on Sparrowhawke’s jacket.

     

    “Can we get her out of there?”

     

    He shook his head.  “No… there’s no breaks between rounds.  Not unless they want to forfeit the prize.  They have to fight straight through.”

     

    “This is madness!”  She released his jacket and dropped back down onto her heels.

     

    Helpless rage rippled through her, directed at Whisper.  How could you be so foolish?!  But she knew the answer.  Whisper had lived in Sabre’s shadow, they had all lived in Sabre’s shadow, from the moment he first took up a sword and showed everyone in the Guild just how G o o d [Good] he was.  With her own desire to best Sabre at something, at anything, fueled by Thunder’s withering contempt whenever she failed to do so, Adelina could understand why Whisper would pit herself against Sabre in the Arena.

     

    She only hoped that she did not lose one of her friends this day.  She bit her lower lips as Sabre and Whisper approached each other on the bloody sand.

     

     

     

    Sabre tightened his grip on the hilt of his sword.

     

    “What are you doing here,” he growled.

     

    Whisper smiled at him.  “I received an invitation to compete.”

     

    “Then you are welcome to do so,” he snarled, “but not on my coattails and not when I’ve cleared the first rounds for you!  You’ll not steal my glory, Whisper.”

     

    She laughed, hands on her hips.  “Surely you don’t fear a little competition.”

     

    He felt the bile rising in the back of his throat, sour and burning.  His hand tightened on the grip of his sword and he ground his teeth together, bared in a feral snarl.  He pointed an accusatory finger at her.

     

    “You’re a fool, Whisper,” he snarled.  “Didn’t you listen to all the tales your brother inflicted on us?  Didn’t you bother to listen to the gate keepers when you were waiting to be let in?”

     

    The announcer heralded the coming of their next trial, captured bandits of the Black Hand gang.

     

    “Only one is ever crowned Champion,” he reminded her grimly, “the one that stands victorious atop the corpses.”

     

    He turned his back on her as the gates squealed open and charged the bandits that rushed onto the Arena sands.  He channeled his power through his Guild Seal as he charged, summoning a Physical Shield.  The swords slashed at him but did not touch his flesh as he waded into the bandits, carving his way through them.  His Shield was still holding as he drove his sword through the chest of one bandit.  The sword was torn from his grasp as the bandit fell but he was far from helpless without it.

     

    “Get ‘im,” one of the bandits screamed.  “’e lost ‘is weapon!”

     

    “I am the weapon,” he snarled.

     

    Summoning his power, he went to one knee and slammed his fist into the sand as the bandits rushed in.

     

    Enflame.

     

    A wall of fire rushed outwards in a circle with him as the center.  Flung backwards by the force of the spell and burning, the bandits screamed and rolled in the sand.  Sabre rushed to the impaled bandit and grabbed his sword with both hands, planting his boot on the bandit’s chest.  Yanking his sword free, his Physical Shield failed as something impacted against his back and exploded;

     

    “Oops!”

     

    It was one of Whisper’s little exploding flasks.  He rolled free of the melee and pulled a glowing blue phial from his belt.  Quickly tossing the Will Potion back, he brought his Physical Shield back to life and waded back into the fight.

     

    All around them, the crowd was screaming for more.

     

    A running start and a foot planted on the back of a kneeling bandit, Sabre leapt and brought his sword down with both hands on the grip, carving one bandit in two from the crown of his head to his groin.  Whisper staggered back, splattered with brains and blood.  Sabre whipped around, bringing the sword in a deadly arc and taking the head of the kneeling bandit behind him.  Dripping gore, his sword sent the last bandit standing to Skorm’s embrace as Sabre cut him down.

     

    For a moment, he locked gazes with Whisper.  Her gaze was steady but he saw the fear behind her eyes.

     

    The crowd was on its feet, throwing gold and roses onto the bloody sand.

     

     

     

    Maze watched with growing excitement as Whisper and Sabre fought side by side.

     

    It was a bloody but effective stratagem, one that he would not have dared to put into play himself.  Pitting Sabre and Whisper in the Arena against one another ensured that one of them would die.  And, all things being equal, Sabre would most likely be victorious.  It would drive a wedge between all of Adelina’s beloved companions and it would leave Thunder bereft, broken, and, best of all, vengeful.  Sabre would be killed by Thunder or Thunder would be killed by Sabre.  Either way, the Guild would be poorer for it and Jack richer.  If Skorm was generous with his favor, Thunder would kill Sabre and then kill Sparrowhawke and Thorn when they moved to avenge Sabre’s death.

     

    Adelina the Sorrowful Blade would be isolated and lonely.

     

    In time, she would return to him.  He knew she would.  The heat of her anger would fade and she would remember that he had been the one to walk through fire and smoke to rescue her when Oakvale was burned to the ground.  He was the one that had trained her.  She would return to him when her friends were dead.  And, after Jack used her, he would comfort and heal her, keep her safe and warm.

     

    The heady thrill of watching Whisper and Sabre fight entwined with the fiery desire that consumed him as he gazed upon Adelina the Sorrowful Blade across the bloody Arena sands.  Everything was working out according to his plan.

     

    “You look insufferably pleased with yourself, Maze,” a hollow voice said from behind.

     

    He froze and his smile melted away.  He knew the voice, had heard it in his head for decades but it had been so very long since he had heard it in his ear.  He forced himself to remain calm.

     

    “I did not expect to see you here, Jack,” he said, his voice even but his pulse hammering in his temples.

     

    “You sent another invitation, Maze,” Jack said.

     

    Maze stiffened in his seat, feeling a chill run through his body.

     

    “You maneuvered pieces without my leave,” Jack continued.  “You’ve moved Whisper in opposition to Sabre.  I had need of both.”

     

    “You never said-”

     

    “You move as I command, Maze, exactly as I command.  I must salvage your foolishness.  The Arena is made to bleed the Guild, to carve away the chaff.  Never have two fought through together and for G o o d [Good] reason.  If one does not kill the other, the Arena becomes a farce.  The tradition is broken.”

     

    His hand came to rest on Maze’s shoulder, the sharp spines that capped the fingertips of his gauntlet digging into Maze’s flesh.

     

    “Now I must reveal myself to preserve you.  You will pay for your foolishness, Maze, and you will pay dearly.”

     

    Maze felt a most unfamiliar emotion grip him in icy claws: fear.

     

     

     

    From his place in the stands, the Bloodraven looked down but not at the sands where Whisper and Sabre fought against a pack of Balverines; his gaze was locked upon Maze and Jack of Blades.  He had not expected to see Jack here, not when his plans required secrecy and subtlety.

     

    Did you arrange this farce, Maze?  Did you send an invitation to the girl?  She is not ready for this.

     

    Not that he cared if Whisper lived or died this day; the girl was an interesting diversion at best, a convenient cushion at worst, and there were sweeter conquests awaiting him should she lose her life today.  He let his gaze leave Jack and Maze, seeking Adelina in the crowd.

     

    Sparrowhawke.

     

    He snarled the name silently as he saw Adelina clinging to the young Guild Warrior.  She had given herself to Sparrowhawke, had confessed love to him.  She had been his and his alone until Maze used her and now she had gone and parted her thighs for that slip of a youth.  His eyes narrowed and he made himself a vow.

     

    I will have you again, Sorrowful Blade.  You’ll squeal and gasp beneath me.

     

    His right hand convulsed into a fist.

     

    You’re mine and mine alone.

     

    The surging cry of the crowd tore his attention back to the two figures standing on the bloody sands.  They had managed another round together but the next round would be more perilous.  He called over one of the Game Masters and placed a bet on Sabre to win the Champion’s Seal and an additional wager that Whisper would die in the final round.

     

     

     

    Adelina forced herself to watch as Sabre and Whisper battled an Earth Troll.

     

    Sabre closed immediately, hacking and slashing with his sword at the monster’s legs, rolling and dodging out of the way of its boulder sized fists.  Whisper stayed at range, lobbing her last few exploding bottles at it.  She frowned and bit her lower lip.  Whisper’s bottles were more of an annoyance than anything else and the Troll ignored her for the most part, leaving the battle to Sabre.  And even after her bottles were exhausted, Whisper did not close into melee range.  She lingered beyond the Troll’s range and left the fighting to Sabre.  She ignored the jeers of the crowd, the horrible things they called at Whisper, ignored the cheers, the way they screamed Sabre’s name, and looked at Sparrowhawke.

     

    “What’s she doing?  Why isn’t she helping him?”

     

    Sparrowhawke pounded his fist on the stone rail.  “She’s scared,” he snarled.  “She’s never faced a Troll.  She doesn’t know what to do.”

     

    “We have to help them!”

     

    She put a hand on the rail and was about to vault over but Sparrowhawke grabbed her shoulder.

     

    “If you enter now, they’ll kill you.”  He gestured to the Arena Guards at the gates.

     

    “We have to do something!”  Desperation gripped her.  “We can’t just watch!”

     

    “There’s nothing we can do,” Sparrowhawke said grimly.

     

    Thorn’s hands were white knuckles on the stone.  “We can pray.”

     

     

     

    Sabre leapt onto the back of the giant scorpion and drove his sword through the joint between its head and body.  It convulsed beneath him but before he could tear the sword free, it’s barbed tail slammed into his chest.  He was thrown back and he bounced twice, his Physical Shield dying on the second bounce.  He laid on his back, not moving.  The crowd was deathly quiet and he heard Whisper running towards him, scrabbling through the sand to kneel beside him.

     

    “Sabre!”

     

    He kept his eyes closed.  “Sshhh…”

     

    “Are you alright?!”

     

    He opened his eyes.  “Shhh…”

     

    “What?!”

     

    “Be quiet,” he said.  “I want to hear it.”

     

    She frowned down at him.  “Hear what?!”

     

    “The silence.”

     

    He reached up and pushed her away.  As he rose to his feet, the crowd began to scream and chant his name.  He picked up his sword and raised it high, screaming back at them.  The energy was intoxicating.  Whisper raised her spear into the air beside him but he ignored her.

     

    It was his name they were chanting, not hers.  He walked across the bloody sand as Jack of Blades appeared in the Arena Master’s Box.

     

     

     

    Jack of Blades…

     

    Adelina the Sorrowful Blade gazed upon the masked face of her hated enemy and the world receded away from her.  She heard his voice but did not comprehend the words.  She heard the roar of the crowd but was immune to their energy.  Wrapped in a cocoon of hatred, she glared at him and felt her lips drawing back in a feral snarl.  Sparrowhawke’s hand tightened over hers, bringing her back.

     

    She had missed something important.  Sabre and Whisper were battling across the bloody sands.

     

    “What’s going on?”

     

    Sparrowhawke cut her an incredulous look.  “What?”

     

    “What happened?  I…”  She looked at Jack and then back at Sparrowhawke.  “I wasn’t paying attention.”

     

    He followed her gaze and nodded tightly.  “Jack decreed that the victor’s prize would be decided in one last round… Sabre against Whisper… to the death.”

     

    Her heart thudded painfully against her ribs.

     

     

     

    Thunder gripped the stone rail in both hands.

     

    “No…”

     

    Lady Gray fanned herself, a smile on her lips.  “Now this is an unexpected turn.  Our wager still stands, yes?  The Guild Champion has yet to be decided.”

     

    “What,” he roared.  “My sister…”

     

    “Entered the Arena, Thunder,” she reminded him, suddenly sounding both bored and condescending.  “Do you wish to cancel our wager?”

     

    “You want me to bet on my sister’s life?!”

     

    Her cold beauty drew him back to her side as she smiled.  Her heaving breasts captured his gaze.

     

    “Of course not,” she said, a soft lilt accenting her words.  “We were wagering on Sabre’s life.”

     

    She rose to her feet and his eyes followed her every move.

     

    “Perhaps I misjudged you, Thunder,” she said, her words stabbing into him.  “Perhaps you don’t truly want me.”

     

    “No… I mean, yes… I want you.”  He swallowed hard.  “Our wager stands.  Whisper will win.”

     

    He hated himself for the wager and despised himself for the doubt he felt.  His sweet Whisper, his beloved sister, she had not shown that she could defeat Sabre, not once in the Arena had she outshone him.

     

    “Whisper will kill him,” he said, willing himself to believe it.

     

     

     

    Sabre threw himself to the side but Whisper’s spear found his ribs, carving deeply through his armor and into his flesh.

     

    “Surrender,” she urged him.  “I promise not to kill you.  Neither of us has to die today.”

     

    He rolled on his shoulder and came back to his feet, exhausted and weakening by the moment.  He reached into his belt but there were no potions left.  Her lips were a thin line as she advanced.

     

    “You cannot beat me… not now…”

     

    He snarled and spat blood onto the sand.  “I won’t give you this victory,” he growled.  “You did nothing but get in my way.”

     

    She advanced and he retreated, his sword point drifting lower and lower.  Her eyes were sad.

     

    “I’ll make this quick,” she promised.  “I won’t kill you.”

     

    As she advanced, he reversed direction and kicked sand into her eyes.  She cried out and flinched back, one hand flying to her face.  He charged forward, wrenching his sword up over his shoulder and bringing it forward with both hands, shouting.  His blade rang against the metal haft of her spear and knocked it from her hand.  His sword followed, flying from his grip.  He kept moving, driving his shoulder into her and tackling her down onto the sand.

     

    He ripped his knife from his boot sheat and reversed it, blade downward.  He grabbed her throat with one hand, the knife in the other.  He froze, looking into her eyes.  Their gazes locked, his narrow and hate-filled, hers wide-eyed and fearful.  The knife point wavered but he did not drop it.

     

    “I yield,” she cried.  “I yield.”

     

    The crowd screamed for her blood, for her death.  Jack of Blades demanded her blood.

     

    “I yield,” she repeated, sobbing.

     

    He let the knife drop to the sand and rose to his feet.  The crowd began to scream and chant his name.  He took two steps and then collapsed face down onto the sand.


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  12-08-2008, 15:01 3253181 in reply to 3252791

    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    Cool. I think I'm starting to get some of the characters a little more. At the beginning I had no idea this was meant to resemble the main story in any way, but I'm getting it now. Adelina and Aiden are Chicken Chaser and Theresa, or something like that. And this group of heroes, Thorn, Sparrowhawke and Sabre are all somehow different attributes of Chicken Chaser? Maybe I'm just looking for something that's not there. Great story though, as always.

    "Time is our greatest teacher. Unfortunately, it kills most of its pupils." ~Louis Hector Berlioz

  •  12-08-2008, 19:05 3253485 in reply to 3253181

    • dawgz525 is not online. Last active: 11-22-2009, 15:34 dawgz525
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    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    ^ well this is a rewrite of his other story although now he's past the previously written part...



    great story though Up [:up:]Smily [:)]Smily [:)]Up [:up:]

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  •  12-08-2008, 20:07 3253551 in reply to 3253181

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    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    JezusBagels:
    Cool. I think I'm starting to get some of the characters a little more. At the beginning I had no idea this was meant to resemble the main story in any way, but I'm getting it now. Adelina and Aiden are Chicken Chaser and Theresa, or something like that. And this group of heroes, Thorn, Sparrowhawke and Sabre are all somehow different attributes of Chicken Chaser? Maybe I'm just looking for something that's not there. Great story though, as always.

    Thorn, Sparrowhawke, and Sabre are other young Guild Warriors that graduated at the same time as Adelina and Whisper.  It seemed odd to me that there were only a handful of Guild Warrior wandering around.  So I added a few more, just to pad the story a bit.

    Adelina = Chicken Chaser.
    Aiden = Theresa

    I didn't want to use Theresa's name though.  So I changed it.  Artistic license.  I'm really enjoying this story.  I haven't started the next chapter yet but I am gonna begin work on it tonight.

    Ciao for now

    ~Marcasite


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  12-08-2008, 20:11 3253557 in reply to 3253551

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    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    Nice to see you writing again, Marcasite.  High quality craftsmanship as always.  I tried to post yesterday, but internet bugged out after I hit post...


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  •  12-08-2008, 21:50 3253628 in reply to 3253551

    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    Marcasite:

    JezusBagels:
    Cool. I think I'm starting to get some of the characters a little more. At the beginning I had no idea this was meant to resemble the main story in any way, but I'm getting it now. Adelina and Aiden are Chicken Chaser and Theresa, or something like that. And this group of heroes, Thorn, Sparrowhawke and Sabre are all somehow different attributes of Chicken Chaser? Maybe I'm just looking for something that's not there. Great story though, as always.

    Thorn, Sparrowhawke, and Sabre are other young Guild Warriors that graduated at the same time as Adelina and Whisper.  It seemed odd to me that there were only a handful of Guild Warrior wandering around.  So I added a few more, just to pad the story a bit.

    Adelina = Chicken Chaser.
    Aiden = Theresa

    I didn't want to use Theresa's name though.  So I changed it.  Artistic license.  I'm really enjoying this story.  I haven't started the next chapter yet but I am gonna begin work on it tonight.

    Ciao for now

    ~Marcasite



    Makes sense. I just thought there was more behind it. Sabre, for example, seems to be everything that Chicken Chaser could have been if he was G o o d [Good].

    "Time is our greatest teacher. Unfortunately, it kills most of its pupils." ~Louis Hector Berlioz

  •  12-09-2008, 21:34 3254665 in reply to 3253628

    • Marcasite is not online. Last active: 11-01-2009, 21:47 Marcasite
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    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    I use the others around her to show the progression of the plot without making Adelina the impetus behind all the quests.  In my first fanfic, I made Alain the Sabre the central hero and all the other characters were secondary to him.  In this story, the main character is secondary in ability to all the people around her.  In a way, its about her having to overcome all the odds.  She was intentionally held back by Maze so that she would be weak.
    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  12-09-2008, 21:42 3254675 in reply to 3254665

    Re: Trust, Friendship, Lies

    Ah, I see what you mean.

    "Time is our greatest teacher. Unfortunately, it kills most of its pupils." ~Louis Hector Berlioz

  •  12-10-2008, 14:50 3255214 in reply to 3235623

    Re: Sorrow's Lament

    This is extremely G o o d [Good], I'm enjoying it and like how you've added your own characters and molded them in with the other ones. Bravo G o o d [Good] sir!
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