good chapter solar sorry it took so long for me to read it but i don't come to the site as often any more

finaly got to the last page great story solar keep riting and if you need any more nutral gods. godess name: raven! hey no one said it had to be a mythical tipe name. creacher tipe and name: big surprise a big raven name is torch becos of the birds firy red eys. god personality: a bit clumsy wen it come's to taking cear of her peaps but wen in time's of war she can be very sereas she think's all males shoud be slave's. loves to trade dusent cear weather she trade's with good or eval. her peapal: atlantean female's all male atlantean's are slave's. creacher personality:just like her godess she can be clumsy but seareus in time's of war. alinmant: nutral. creacher alinmant: also nutral. hope you get her in sory about my spelling i was gowing to put her in telmenars tale but he wasent taking anymor god's by the way i cant beleave you just tossed away gizmo he was your oldest freand and yet you killed him off and replased him with a tiger plus it conteract's somthing that was hapening wen you fort against marrvric when he rivived his stag you can just rivive gizmo and what tipe of name is ackack sory if i seme ofensive to you i dont mean to be. anyway hope you acsept my god.

erm...not to be rude...but you can't spelll very well, or your trying to not spell.

i dont realy cear

 Quoting: vampreqweenrika

i dont realy cear

Too bad for you others do.

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 Quoting: LUGNUT2500

There should be a comma between said and panicking as well. So it becomes: ‘I’m Ciryatan, but this is not the time for lengthy conversations!’ he said, panicking. -> right

Actually, that comma isn't needed. It can be used for effect (if you want to slow down the sentence for a climactic continue).

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do not dout ammy in spelling, if you do, your ever an incredibly stupid or brave person

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A cooked grenade? You mean fried or boiled?

Oh my god!, ive been here since before this story was started, and i have never noticed it... sorry solar... i only read the first 100 posts o.O and then i couldnt read anymore... i know its been a long time since then, but what has happened since then?

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Holy Moly your story is awesome! I just finshed reading all of it! All I have to say is... AMAZING!!!! Sorry I am new.

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If you gather all these chapters into 1 file (like word) then notify me and i'll download it and read through all of it (i don't have enogh time to read through it on this forum )

Neeed...... more.....story!!!

WRITE OR I SHALL....

 Quoting: rachel88

POST DAMIT OR ILL GIVE YOU A PARTIAL LABTOMY (i know i spelled it wrong) TAPE YOUR EYES OPEN, AND COOK YOUR BRAIN AND FEED IT TO YOU!!!! foamy told me to....

DO THAT!

 Quoting: THE_MYSTIK_MAN

If you gather all these chapters into 1 file (like word) then notify me and i'll download it and read through all of it (i don't have enogh time to read through it on this forum )

Sorry for my late reaction, but I try not to post here unless I have something special to say. Anyhow, I never really liked of having it simply for download. I prefer to have it simply on my computer, and pasting a chapter at a time when it's ready. This also ensure that people who read it here might give critism on it. Secondly, The first few chapters have already been corrected and improved, and since I want to release those chapters yet until later chapters have also been improved... You get the picture. Secondly, I've already put it in my sig, but my story is temporarily in Hiatus mode. Basicly, this means that any progress is halted for a while. The main reason is because I just don't have the time to write lately, mainly due to school and the excessive workload. The soonest I might be able to do something again is in three weeks, but don't expect me to deliver a new chapter then. That said, I'm off to school again. Have a nice day, people!

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Three weeks? Omigod, you're losing fans here!!!

And if I write now, I'm getting bad notes. The result? Spending more time working for school to get better grades. This would only make it harder for me to write. Also, please remember that altough I like to write, it is a hobby, not a task which has to be done. If I wished to do so, I could say "I quit, bye people!" After all, nobody could force me to write. And before somebody thinks I'm quitting, I'm not. Lastly, school is (altough I hate to say it) of great importance. If I get good grades, I can have a good job, which means it's easier to live my future life. I'm not going to risk my future just to enjoy myself (and readers). I don't mind enjoying myself, on the contrary! But school goes first (unfortunately). If I lose fans, it's a pity, but I can't help it. A delayed chapter won't kill them, will it? And in the end, I mainly write to enjoy myself. If others enjoy themselves while reading, so much the better. Please remember this next time.

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yes it will kill us and when are you going to put my goddess in there

Oh man, when's the next one coming?

all i can say is....bah edit:by the way where do you get those cool pictures guys

if you can't wait for awhile for the next chapter your not a true fan of the story a true fan can wait.

Great, now he's getting self-righteous. Happens with too much good feedback. Better tell him his next chapter sucks to crush his spirit.

 Quoting: Eversio

Great, now he's getting self-righteous. Happens with too much good feedback. Better tell him his next chapter sucks to crush his spirit.

Dude is that just a joke or real saying?

i'm confused

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Instead of constant 'super duper, fantastic the roxxorz' comments, writers and all other artists are better off with some constructive criticism. If their chapters/statues/paintings/compositions etc. are rubbish, then tell them what's wrong!

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Crap, this thread died...but I shall resurrect it again...in hopes Solar will write again...

Ammys getting mad . Yeah hes right (as always) we need to criticize people more, argue more and basically be mean . Anyway theres enough lawyers for all of us right now so we can all sue (yay!) Can you imagine a world without lawyers? (people holding hands and dancing)

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A cooked grenade? You mean fried or boiled?