yeah, we're gonna do MP weeeeee, anyway VERY GOOD CHAPTER! I don't think i've got much trouble correcting it . I'm also doing my housework already (for tomorrow, monday AND tuesday so i'll have enough time to play

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Originally posted by AMAUNATOR_THE_REVEALER yeah, we're gonna do MP weeeeee, anyway VERY GOOD CHAPTER! I don't think i've got much trouble correcting it . I'm also doing my housework already (for tomorrow, monday AND tuesday so i'll have enough time to play

Housework is homework. I'd say spend more time on your english homework. Anyway, it seems that I've written a good chapter, if I look at the posts that have been posted. It'll be a while before the next one arrives though... I'm slightly stuck. It's not story-threatening, but if I write it without too much thinking it'll be terrible, and I don't want that. I guess the next chapter will be here next week. Cya!

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right, gotcha ... i need to write too really ...

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Bathing in eternal sunlight...

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I'm trying to play Multiplayer game with Amaunator, but it doesn't work. I have asked the question in the MP board. It's in the ''Anyone want to play over the net?'' thread. Please answer the question. The prize is...A LONGER CHAPTER, AND SOON!!! That is, if it works...

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You've got to make sure that both players are using the same game (i.e BnW not CI) and that they are updated to v1.20. If you've done all that then I don't know what else. I've never actually played multiplayer before Now write, goshdarn it!

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Sole Destroying.

Did that, didn't work. As for the story, I have nearly no inspiration at the moment, and I was stuck already. But as soon as I get the inspiration I'll write, even if I'm at school, and that's a promise!

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Eya! Sorry for the delay, fellahs. I've got a lot of homework, and had little inspiration. I still give a longer chapter if someone can help me with getting a game work in Multiplayer. I've got a player, but we can't see each other. So here's the next chapter. ENJOY! Chapter 7: Two discoveries. It's been a month since I killed Marrvic's creature. It didn't delay Marrvic much though, as he resurrected the stag 2 weeks after his death. By using some strange ritual, which needed both prayerpower and a lot of villagers doing some strange ritual, he gained enough power to recall the creature, and after a while his body disappeared from the crater. It simply faded away. I wondered whether it had failed, but suddenly a portal opened. Slowly the stag materialised, fully healed. Marrvic looked at me, and laughed loudly. "I'm coming for you next! Prepare to be destroyed! I'll end you pitiful existence, Solar!" I threw a fireball at him, which he dodged. He was paying too little attention to realise I had been aiming at his temple. When he noticed it the fireball hit his target. Marrvic's glow lessened for a while, and many houses in his city were suddenly on fire. Since nobody was in the city nobody had been hurt. I had thought of that for once. "It was very decent of you to do it while nobody was in the city, leader, but where are those people going to sleep?" Beardy popped up. I thought for a while. They'll find a place, I guess. And with a little luck I will have put the home of his general on fire, where his plans probably are. I heard a shriek of anger and frustration. Demon popped up, smiling. "Seems Marrvic thinks the same, boss. Why don't you throw another fireball?" I laughed, and then returned to my city. That was what had happened then... But now time is running out. Armies are gathering at the gates of the dark land. Armies ready for war. They would not be a thread if Marrvic's stag would stay home. My Sunblades, the most elite soldiers, were ready, but the stag could kill them all. If I could delay Marrvic even more, I could perhaps find out where my creature was. I once again called Cratas, and asked him to tell what had happened after I had left. For the seventh time he began telling the story. As he came to the part of a heavily protected island, I stopped him, and started asking about it. He said what he knew about it, every time I had asked him about it. "I have already told you what I know." Cratas thought for a while before he continued. "The island is small, but you have created an extremely powerful barrier around it. Why you did that I do not know.' Cratas looked disappointed because he couldn't answer me once again. I wondered who did know more about it. Suddenly Crates jumped from his chair. "That's it! The runes of the Temple Ruins of Al-Sher!" He said excited. "There is said what's on that island." Suddenly he became sad again. "What's wrong?" I asked. "The Ruins were completely destroyed by the Slayer, Great One. He found and destroyed it for his master." I felt defeated. The only clue had been destroyed. Suddenly I sensed a fireball coming straight at my temple. I flew out of my temple, created a spiritual shield around me, and bashed the fireball away. Marrvic had been doing this more often lately. Suddenly I noticed he wasn't here. I looked around and saw to my horror, that it had been his stag. He prepared for another fireball, but I immediately threw a fireball myself. The fireball hit him, and his fireball went over my city, narrowly missing my temple. The stag cried out of pain, and Marrvic came and used the water miracle to put out the fire. Then he sent his stag home. "You cannot defeat me without your creature." Marrvic looked at me. "You know.." He said slowly and ly. "I DO know where your creature is." I stared at him. Marrvic enjoyed himself thoroughly. "I was able to take a few runes from one of your temples before it was destroyed. I have it in my temple here." He laughed loudly. "See you later." He said, still laughing about my shocked silence. I entered my temple. There I went to my chamber, and I thought for a while. It had a golden throne, even though I couldn't sit in it, since I was a god. I hovered above the throne, and started thinking. A normal villager could never sneak in. If I could be in human… I thought about being a human for a while. Suddenly I felt a change, and fell down on the throne. "What the..." Beardy popped up. He seemed to fade as he spoke. "You can change in a human, leader. Or at least in a human form. You are like a Demigod then." He faded more rapidly. I asked him: "Why are you fading?" Beardy smiled. "Demon and I are not made to be in your Demigod form. We can't stay too long when you're in Demigod form because it drains our power. This means we can't advise you then. Learn how to move in this form, leader. This might give us the edge in this battle." Beardy disappeared with a smile. I slowly stood up. It was strangely familiar. After a few steps I was feeling quite comfortable. I looked in a mirror. I saw a looking Greek looking at me, wearing a beautiful white toga. There were a few differences though. I had a golden glow around me, and my eyes... They were different. The seemed to be impossibly deep and it intrigued me. Deep within my eyes I saw a blue light. Even though I was in human form, I didn't look completely like one. I tried to decrease my glow, and after a while there was hardly a difference between a real villager and me. Now only my eyes remained different. I tried to change it as well. It worked. You could still lose yourself in those mysterious eyes, but they were like the average eyes. My natural eyes were more beautiful though. I decided that I would use this form to find out more about the runes. I changed back into my godly form, which was surprisingly easy. Beardy and Demon popped up. "Did you miss us, boss?" I mentally said hello. Then Beardy asked: "What have you done when you were all alone, leader?" I was surprised. Beardy laughed. "We can't see what happens when you're in Demigod form. We can only see it if it's really extreme. With that I mean things like killing hundreds of people. Anything else you do can't be seen by us, leader." I quickly told them about my plan. They both found it a idea, but warned me to be cautious. Then they left. I called Crates. "Crates, I want to have a meeting with the following people: the weaponmaster, his three lieutenants, and you. The meeting will take place tomorrow, after lunch." Cratas hurried off. I looked how he walked towards the exit of my temple. He would be surprised when he saw my human form. And what would the weaponmaster say? I had promoted him to general of the Sunblades yesterday. He was overjoyed. Would he still recognise me? I laughed silently, and left to my chamber. In my chamber I saw a fly. I locked the door, changed to human form, and tried to fly. It was easy. I followed the fly for a while, and then I went to my chair. As I sat there, the fly started flying around me. Bored and irritated I thought about a fireball with which I could stop this creature. To my surprise a tiny fireball came out of the tip of my finger. The fireball incinerated the poor fly, and then fell harmlessly to the ground. I could still use miracles! This would make my job much easier. I smiled and sat back, knowing that my journey will begin tomorrow. If I find what I seek, this war will be over soon. Marrvic shall be defeated. Please give critism!

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one solar, though i must advise you to keep using the same name for a character (ie. Cratas - Crates)

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Greeaat! THings are getting...interesting... A couple of grammatical errors jumped out at me, though. You talked about Solar playing around with the fly. Something like this: 'I saw a fly. I tried to fly. I followed the fly. I fireballed the fly.' What I'm trying to say is that you use the same word too much in one paragraph. Try to use some variation, e.g.: 'I saw a fly. Inspired by it, I tried to levitate, and with much success. I expertly drifted after the insect, before fireballing it.' ...K thats rubbish but you get the idea Chapter is as usual, though. May the Source be with you

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Sole Destroying.

2 things: First: YIPPIEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! The boards are back! WOOHOOOOOOOOOOO! Second: WHAT THE HELL?!?!?! WHAT HAPPENED TO MY STORY??? Since when is my story filled with strange letters and complete nonsense? Third: I've got a chapter ready, but I'm going to post it later. First I'm going to find out what has happened over here. Cya!

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He didn't show my post! WHAT'S HAPPENING?!?!?!? testing again.

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*%^(%^*&#(%*#*$%!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hij doet niet normaal WAAROM!!!!!!! WAAROM DOET HIJ ZO?!?!?!

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*%^(%^*&#(%*#*$%!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hij doet niet normaal WAAROM!!!!!!! WAAROM DOET HIJ ZO?!?!?! WAAROM!!!!!!! WAAROM DOET HIJ ZO?!?!?!

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ALLRIGHT!!! THAT'S IT! IMPROVE THE BOARDS HUH?!?!?! I'VE NEVER HAD SUCH A TROUBLESOME PROBLEM IN MY ENTIRE LIFE! HE WON'T EVEN SHOW MY NEW CHAPTER! NO MATTER WHAT I TRY! AND IT HAS POSTED THE SAME POST MULTIPLE TIMES! UNTIL THIS PROBLEM IS FIXED I'M NOT GONNA POST A NEW CHAPTER! Next time you guys wish to improve the boards, please IMPROVE them. NOT make them a terrible place to be. Please, do something about this problem, cause else I'm going to become MAD (like a madman, not angry! Well... I'll be angry as well I guess...)! Cya!

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 Quoting: XSOLARX

*%^(%^*&#(%*#*$%!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hij doet niet normaal WAAROM!!!!!!! WAAROM DOET HIJ ZO?!?!?! WAAROM!!!!!!! WAAROM DOET HIJ ZO?!?!?!

I'm no lingual expert, but I'd say that this here outburst means: This is not normal. WHERE! WHERE IS IT?!?!?! etc Patience, child, and know that you have made the first double post of the new look boards. Congrats Be patient, and try again. Copy and paste your chapter from your document and post it. DO NOT click the post button more than once. Click it, then wait. Make a cup of tea if you have to, just wait. If that doesn't work, try posting the chapter in smaller sections.

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Sole Destroying.

i'm having no troubles here ... smooth sailing if you ask me. Get this party pumping ... tudutumtum, turutumtum ... pumping ... (cha-cha slide anyone? )

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 Quoting: BLUDGEONMAN

I'm no lingual expert, but I'd say that this here outburst means: This is not normal. WHERE! WHERE IS IT?!?!?! etc Patience, child, and know that you have made the first double post of the new look boards. Congrats Be patient, and try again. Copy and paste your chapter from your document and post it. DO NOT click the post button more than once. Click it, then wait. Make a cup of tea if you have to, just wait. If that doesn't work, try posting the chapter in smaller sections.

Nice translation. It was nearly correct... Let me tell you something: First: I've already double posted another time, and I only pressed the button once. Second: I tried copying and pasting, since I always do that. but since he had strange texts in my old chapters, like the euro-thingy and tm and such, I tried copying and pasting a simple text. He didn't do anything with 'these' things. * ' ' * When he posted everything beneath the first ' dissapeared. That's one of the main reasons I'm so sad and irritated. Third: I don't like thea... Fourth: Is it me, or do I seem to be VERY hotheaded with some of my posts? I suddenly noticed... Pss: He didn't post the first time I tried.

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Nice translation. It was nearly correct...

Woot! What did I get wrong? I only tried 'cos it looked similar to German and I used to do that for GCSE. Anyhoo, I'm sorry that I cant help. I don't see why it shouldn't work, but I expect the LH webmonkeys will sort it out soon enough (seeing as they're still ironing out bugs). Yeah, you do seem a little hotheaded, but its OK to get angry sometimes. Read the notice from the LH admin guy. They're still optimising the software & stuff so it'll get faster. [edit]I sure hope they finish tuning it soon 'cos barely any of the pics are loading (its 'red x' hell over here!) and it loads only marginally faster than the old boards.[/edit]

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Sole Destroying.

It was: He's not doing normal. (or something) WHY!!!!!!! WHY IS HE DOING LIKE THIS?!?!?! A lesson Dutch, it seems... I hope it'll not take long... Pss: Do I have a record of the most posts?

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A long chapter (IF IT CAN BE POSTED!). ENJOY! Chapter 8: The meeting. I was sitting in my human form on my throne. The sun was rising, I could feel it. Soon the meeting would take place. I grinned at the thought of their reaction. Only a few more hours of waiting

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A long chapter (Again, ONLY IF IT CAN BE POSTED!). ENJOY! Chapter 8: The meeting. I was sitting in my human form on my throne. The sun was rising, I could feel it. Soon the meeting would take place. I grinned at the thought of their reaction. Only a few more hours of waiting

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A long chapter (AGAIN, ONLY IF IT CAN BE POSTED!). ENJOY! Chapter 8: The meeting. I was sitting in my human form on my throne. The sun was rising, I could feel it. Soon the meeting would take place. I grinned at the thought of their reaction. Only a few more hours of waiting

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you didn't read SirJoe's comment on that one i guess ... you should edit and inser the missing text, until it's all there! Check it berfore you drop off too!

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Bathing in eternal sunlight...

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yea, try doing what amaunator said, or try posting it completely again, i think some of the bugs in forum were fixed, hope ya didnt take a break from writing.....

I'm BACK! It's to be home again in my second home. My computer was quite screwed up, which made sure I couldn't post here for to days. The agony... When I was going to these boards I suddenly got some pop-ups. Don't ask me how. Anyhow, it had been doing strange things to my computer. I had removed 155 objects of spyware, found a trojan horse virus, AND THE COMPUTER COULD BE DEACTIVATED, UNLESS I PULLED OUT THE PLUG!!! Right now I've got Windows XP instead of Windows 98, and a nearly completely clean computer. Nearly nothing is left (NOT EVEN B&W!), but I back-upped my story (VERY FORTUNETLY). It'll be a while before I can post the next chapter though. For a while I'll be going slow on these boards though. Cya!

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