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Those That Paved The Way

Last post 10-07-2009, 13:13 by twelthdoctor. 161 replies.
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  •  11-22-2008, 22:42 3236644 in reply to 3226522

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    Randomthought31:
    WindsofHorus:

    kit_103:
    Randomthought31:
    existance:
    PLUTO! I swear someday you will be a planet once more so my writing skills can make you ASPLODE!
    And then my writing skills shall cause all the particles of Pluto to form back together then ASPLODE it again! Muwahahahaha!


    Man, you guys have your goals too low.

    The point is to make a story so epic, so amazing, that the sun implodes then reforms and finally explodes. You have to kill humanity, not shatter a rock.Cheeky [:cheeky:]

    Anyways, lol. Constant moaning. At least you finally started to work on it after that.Stick out tongue [:P]

    Whenever i eventually finish this story, then form start my next one, This will be my goal

    Actually, the goal is more like this: The story should be SO EPIC, that it has it's own gravitational pull, causing every planet, moon, rock, and star, to just fly towards it and collide. Then the story must still have enough epicness to push all the planets, rocks, stars, moons, and everything else back to their regular position before they implode, reform, explode, and collect back together before they finally all grow a pair then get testicular cancer. THAT is how epic a story should be.

    Kit made it cool, randomthought…. You ruined it! Confused [8-)]

    Anywho, I’m quite surprised at the activity of this board, then again I am surprised the boards are this active, but we do have people who rush through the game. Paranoid [:aranoid:]

    I however wont be on anytime soon, I have just got gold a few weeks ago. I have been glued to my new 360 Stick out tongue [:P] yes new… -_-’ Anyone who wants to play with me, feel free to add my GT but please do tell me who you are, I mightn’t of heard of you. Confused [*-)]

    After I have my 360 fun I’ll get back to this topic, and MY fiction, as I was taking a break from writing. I look forward to finishing my fable fiction anthology. Big Smile [:D] ^^ [^^]

    Hermit



  •  11-26-2008, 6:54 3241006 in reply to 3236644

    • Faerie_child is not online. Last active: 24 Nov 2009, 5:26 Faerie_child
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    Im new as it can be evidently seen by my status that says junior member, any way enough about me. i just wanted to say this thread is G o o d [Good], it helps new members. so keep up with the G o o d [Good] work and i only hope that on day my work is G o o d [Good] enough to go on your list. also i wish people would give comments rather then just view my work, it irrates me. 
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  •  11-28-2008, 9:38 3242766 in reply to 3241006

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    Faerie_child:
    Im new as it can be evidently seen by my status that says junior member, any way enough about me. i just wanted to say this thread is G o o d [Good], it helps new members. so keep up with the G o o d [Good] work and i only hope that on day my work is G o o d [Good] enough to go on your list. also i wish people would give comments rather then just view my work, it irrates me.

    Welcome to Lion head forums faerie, don’t be concerned with your forum rank, I know plenty a aged member who still have a low rank, its not to signify how new you are but rather how often you’ve posted. Don’t worry too much with the views over comments, it happens to everyone, just keep writing and eventually someone will be inclined to post.

    I’m sure if you love writing, and are dedicated to it, then you’ll be up there. As this topic is in light of the minority of writers who seen their stories as more than a bit of fun for a few days, but a piece of work which required time effort, and devotion, the majority of the board in my view is just a few people thinking “oh wouldn’t it be cool to write a story haha” then giving up on it after a few days. Stick out tongue [:P] or not bothering to enhance their writing skill.

    Regularity is something a reader will see and commend the writer for, you’ll find writers who post updates frequently are more loved than those who are lazy and or busy.

    Again welcome to the board.

    Hermit


  •  12-01-2008, 1:15 3245275 in reply to 3242766

    • twelthdoctor is not online. Last active: 11-23-2009, 20:34 twelthdoctor
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    If you write it, they will post . . .Stick out tongue [:P]  As long as you stick with a story you like and keep up the quality, someone will post eventually.  Enough views will get you a "favorite" mark on your work, and that will attract more readers.  Don't be too concerned with attention, you've still got a lot of time to work on your reputation as both a writer and a forum member.

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    Grammar is your friendCrazy [:crazy:] , fanatics who correct everyone's for them are not . . .Ogre [:gre:]

    Has the world ended already? Oh dear, I must have missed it. . .

  •  12-31-2008, 0:16 3269129 in reply to 3245275

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    Everyone, forgive my absence, with keeping my grades up and full time jobs, I finally get a rest.

    -Pro tip:

    When you get G o o d [Good] reviews, don't be full of yourself like I was, that mistake will probably cost me in the future...somehow.

    Anyways, its G o o d [Good] to be back!

    -Danfucius

  •  01-01-2009, 17:25 3270167 in reply to 3269129

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    Danfucius:

    Everyone, forgive my absence, with keeping my grades up and full time jobs, I finally get a rest.

    -Amateur tip:

    When you get G o o d [Good] reviews, don't be full of yourself like I was, that mistake will probably cost me in the future...somehow.

    Anyways, its G o o d [Good] to be back!

    -Danfucius

    Hmm [^o)]

    Arrogance should be reserved for the experienced dead. Sleeping [:zleeping:]

    Hermit

  •  01-01-2009, 19:06 3270252 in reply to 3270167

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    Hey, Orakaius got any new upcoming stories. I really enjoy your work!
    The offspring of riches: Pride, vanity, ostentation, arrogance, tyranny

  •  01-01-2009, 21:29 3270341 in reply to 3270167

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    Orakaius:

    Hmm [^o)]

    Arrogance should be reserved for the experienced dead. Sleeping [:zleeping:]

    Hermit



    I'll have to keep that in mind then. Cheeky [:cheeky:]

    But yes, do not get to full of yourself because the fall will hurt when you hit the ground. Always keep a level head about your writing.

    And can we see more critiques with stories while we're at it please? Yes, it's always nice to have someone praise your story but some helpful, non-flaming criticism is always nice to see. Especially when it comes to updating this thread in the future.

    Up [:up:]

  •  01-01-2009, 21:48 3270353 in reply to 3270341

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    Kit you should know better to not listen to any thing I say. Hmm [^o)]

    And am I meant to be the common critique? Sad [:(] I would think people with accomplished quad-trilogies would help others with their stories more so than others. Stick out tongue [:P]

    But yeah as said in the opening post, the community can make suggestions for this topic, please make sure its of high quality. Smily [:)]

    Hermit

     

  •  01-06-2009, 11:29 3273872 in reply to 3270353

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    Hey Orakaius, thanks for helping me out with getting heroes for my fan fic. XD
    The offspring of riches: Pride, vanity, ostentation, arrogance, tyranny

  •  01-08-2009, 22:32 3275828 in reply to 3273872

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    Beware of one star ninjas (*Ninja [:ninja:]).  They escaped from TMO and may be attempting to misrate your works .  Don't let them get  you down; if they target you, you must have gotten some attention they want to ruin.
    Has the world ended already? Oh dear, I must have missed it. . .

  •  01-09-2009, 11:36 3276071 in reply to 3275828

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    One Star Ninjas? Oh dear...how...unfortunate.

    But yes, do not let them get you down. Hell just ignore them.

    What I find odd is...is that it's one person making multiple accounts to play the one star ninja game. I mean, if it was a roaming bunch of different one star ninjas, then maybe I'd issue Order 66 and hunt them down but one man? Nah, not worth the trouble.

    How sad do you have to be to do that btw?

  •  01-11-2009, 18:30 3278044 in reply to 3276071

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    The one star Ninja [:ninja:] have striked again! My first attack from them, hmmn i don't feel angry, Ha! their attack has no effect, so why do it? Why attack only the recent posts? They are bias that way, its obvious who they are, but is there no way to stop them?
    Flown down by ravens and stolen by the dawn's first rays, night mares stalk the night. Through dusty windows and cracked glass, they watch the weary rest till mornings rise.

  •  01-11-2009, 19:20 3278094 in reply to 3278044

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    Idk if there is. Might have to ask Mort here soon.Stick out tongue [:P]

    I guess he does it because he honestly has nothing better to do. Yes, I am saying Mister One Star is one man! Clones I say! Clones!

    And why...why rate your own stories Faerie?Stick out tongue [:P]


  •  01-11-2009, 20:54 3278194 in reply to 3278094

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    i rate them low, to show that i don't care if they (The one star ninja's) rate them at all, to show that the rating means nothing to me. Its the comments from the readers that matter. Other writers rate theirs high, but i see no point and rate mine as average because i believe they are that, average, nothing special. You probably wouldn't understand. im just annoyed that the writers that deserve 5 stars are given low rating for no reason but profanity.
    Flown down by ravens and stolen by the dawn's first rays, night mares stalk the night. Through dusty windows and cracked glass, they watch the weary rest till mornings rise.

  •  01-11-2009, 20:54 3278195 in reply to 3278094

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    ^it is the same guy, he basically admits it in his sig/title

    and even though it doesn't really do anything, it's still annoying when your story gets 1 star...that usually discourages the writer
    Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel was just a freight train coming your way

  •  01-11-2009, 21:52 3278250 in reply to 3278195

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    I agree... I just got attacked by the same one-star ninja. In fact, he does it so often that he's more of a one-star assassin. The ratings don't matter as much as the comments, but its still frustrating.

  •  01-12-2009, 14:47 3278889 in reply to 3278250

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    Dont worry about the one star ninja/assasin. I will cancel out his attacks with my five star powers!Stick out tongue [:P]
    The offspring of riches: Pride, vanity, ostentation, arrogance, tyranny

  •  01-12-2009, 16:35 3279000 in reply to 3278889

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    Uh-oh maybe i should stall my story until he's goneSad [:(]
    Bandit1: Should we really break into this house.
    Bandit2: Hey a little girl. Are you lost girlie?
    Bandit1:Kill her she'll tell the guards.
    Bandit2: But she's defenceless.
    Girl:GORGORON IS HUNGRY
    Bandit1: Ohhhh...
    Bandit2:Crap!

  •  01-12-2009, 16:52 3279025 in reply to 3279000

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    Or uh...I don't know...keep writing and don't worry about a stupid rating?

    I mean, I'd be more worried about the comments my story is receiving then how many gold stars the teacher is giving me.

    Ignore the troll and continue to write. It's that simple folks!

  •  01-13-2009, 21:02 3281314 in reply to 3279025

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    Or you could slay the troll in prose and eviscerate it in fiction.  That's always fun.

    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.

  •  01-13-2009, 21:36 3281365 in reply to 3281314

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    Marcasite:

    Or you could slay the troll in prose and eviscerate it in fiction.  That's always fun.



    yes it is...I thought that was hilarious in your last story addition Laugh [:laugh:]
    Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel was just a freight train coming your way

  •  01-22-2009, 16:05 3290736 in reply to 3281365

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    Awesome, awesome thread guys. I made sure to read a couple of these before I posted anything. I still have a few more to trail through

  •  01-25-2009, 8:03 3293187 in reply to 3290736

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    Did you know orkius or whatever the guy who started this thread gave it a one?So now I willStick out tongue [:P]
    You all suck and excutioner00 sucks too and he got owned and qouopluoled fucked in the fan-fic thread.

    Your replys won't be viewed.

  •  01-31-2009, 7:55 3297238 in reply to 3293187

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    Swordbane85_:
    Did you know orkius or whatever the guy who started this thread gave it a one?So now I willStick out tongue [:P]

    Cry [:cry:] Meanie.

    Err.... anyway, I don't have any plans to update this atm but I have recieved messages from a certain member whom wants this to be continually updated and who also wants me to read their stories or else they will go emo, apparantly.

    I will try to start gathering a update plan for this, and maybe just maybe read the story that I've been asked to read. Hmm [^o)] I'm dissapointed that no ones bothered to help the topic, but meh I'm not surprised.

    Lately I've been on the xbox, thing is I'm a console person, the only reason I ever stayed on the internet, is either because I had completed the games I had, or my consoles were broke. Stick out tongue [:P]

    So er yeah, expect updates soon upon this topic and maybe my own fiction. Thanks for the help everyone. Up [:up:]

    Hermit

     
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