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Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

Last post 12-03-2008, 15:46 by hawk540. 137 replies.
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  •  11-17-2008, 22:09 3231132 in reply to 2889665

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    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    Wow.

    I didn't expect this kind of reaction.  Really, I didn't.  All I can say to you all is thank you.  I'll be restarting the story soon, not tonight as I'm celebrating my birthday (32 years young today) but soon.  I have been revising and the story takes a drastic turn in the later chapters.  Just so everything makes sense, I'll be reposting the first chapters.

    Some of the changes are minor and I'll be sure to link the new thread in this one.  And I'll put up the disclaimer, just so people know what they're getting into.  Wink [;)]

    Ciao for now!

    ~Marcasite


  •  11-18-2008, 0:49 3231249 in reply to 2867181

    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    You are an amazing author. Nice story. Just one question though, why does everyone keep trying to have sex with Adelina in every chapter.

  •  11-18-2008, 6:41 3231440 in reply to 3231249

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    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    cuz she's hawt

    Peace sells, but who's buying?
  •  11-19-2008, 17:36 3233216 in reply to 3231440

    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    Am I supposed to assume Megan Fox hot?

  •  11-19-2008, 22:04 3233494 in reply to 3233216

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    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    more like Jessica Alba hot

    Peace sells, but who's buying?
  •  11-20-2008, 21:24 3234656 in reply to 3233494

    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    in the first fable their are no ugly chicks
    by that she must look G o o d [Good]

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  •  11-20-2008, 22:59 3234752 in reply to 3234656

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    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    there were some old ugly women in hook coast....but despite my jokes about Adelina's hawtness, the story is very G o o d [Good] with or without the "sex" scenes. Up [:up:]

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  •  11-21-2008, 0:05 3234801 in reply to 3234752

    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    dawgz525:
    there were some old ugly women in hook coast....but despite my jokes about Adelina's hawtness, the story is very G o o d [Good] with or without the "sex" scenes. Up [:up:]
    ya the story is a 12/10

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  •  11-21-2008, 21:11 3235620 in reply to 3234801

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    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    That is a very G o o d [Good] question.

    With Maze, his lust is an example of how corrupt he has become during the years that he worked for Jack of Blades.  He wants her but not because he loves her.  Maze wants to possess her and feels entitled to her due to the years he has invested in her.

    Bloodraven is equal parts lust and setting her up for a betrayal.  In all honesty, I did not like the way that arc went down and I feel it should have been resolved a different way.  In fact, during the rewrite, I threw out most of Chapter 5 and all of Chapter 6.

    In many ways, it is an entirely different story.

    The Guild is a very corrupt place, in my opinion.  They only do G o o d [Good] if they are paid to do so and there are no consequences within the Guild for you if you regularly sacrifice villagers and traders to Skorm.  It is a place where you trade passion for power and the rewrite goes into that a little more.

    Once again, I seem to have gone off on a tangent so I'll cut this off short... or shortish at the very least.  The first Chapter of the rewrite will be going up momentarily.

    I hope you all enjoy Sorrow's Lament.

    Ciao for now.

    ~Marcasite


  •  11-21-2008, 21:43 3235636 in reply to 3235620

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    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    I didn't think that the story needed a rewrite, but you are the author.

    Peace sells, but who's buying?
  •  12-02-2008, 15:42 3246671 in reply to 3235636

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    Very G o o d [Good] story Up [:up:]
  •  12-02-2008, 19:31 3246897 in reply to 3246671

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    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    the story is being rewritten in this topic http://community.lionhead.com/forums/2/3235623/ShowThread.aspx#3235623 I think that the rewrite is better.

    Peace sells, but who's buying?
  •  12-03-2008, 15:46 3248013 in reply to 3246897

    Re: Fable TLC: Through the Eyes of a Girl

    dawgz525:
    the story is being rewritten in this topic http://community.lionhead.com/forums/2/3235623/ShowThread.aspx#3235623 I think that the rewrite is better.

    Thanks ^^ [^^]


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