I was thinkin about writing my own story, but I don't have the time and commitment, so maybe you wanna add me. Name: Spectre Alignment: Really good to my own citizens, but absolutely ruthless to enemies. In other words, more or less neutral. symbol: lighting bolt strength: quite powerful as a god, but extremely good a military tactics Creature: Amphibious serpent creature alignment: same You can change some stuff if you wanna

Excellent stories, keep writing.

well its been awhile since i've read this and you only got three new chapters up lol its coming great to bad you never have insipration to write the story

Solar,I have been reading your story for years now,ever since Black and White 2 came out.I come on here 2-3 times a week to check and see if you have any new chapters up and of the late I have seen a lack of chapters lol..I love the story,and I believe there is still plenty of length you can yet put into it.So please keep writing! or this will happen to me --->

It's kind of annoying how the title of the thread dissapeared. I should ask Sam or somebody once to fix that.

Anyhow, I'm afraid that in my inexperience, I kind of made a few errors which were rather hard to fix in a normal fashion, when it came to the storyline. I only planned out the full story after roughly 15-20 chapters had passed, and some of the stuff which had happened in the earlier chapters kind of... Well, forced me to further adapt my story in some ways which I didn't really want to. A lesson I've learnt by now, but regrettably, a bit too late.

A number of these errors have really stuck with me, which resulted in the decrease of inspiration. Whilst I probably could finish the story, it wouldn't really come close to my current standards of writing, and I don't really like that idea.

I believe a number of the attachments have dissapeared. I may upload the (partially corrected) story somewhere and post a link to it once if I don't forget to do so, but it is unlikely I'll ever finish it.

At best, I might be posting a short (5 chapter) story once which I worked on a while ago. If I ever do a major writing project again, it'll probably made out of several stand-alone stories, each time giving a semi-closing ending in order to not leave the readers hanging on those awful, never-ending cliffhangers.

So my apologies to anybody who's still waiting for new chapters. I know the feeling, as I've gotten that with a lot of stories myself.

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Lol, Solar. This story is five friggin' years old, man.

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It's kind of annoying how the title of the thread dissapeared. I should ask Sam or somebody once to fix that.

Fixed it for you.

h i am reading the story just a few days ago. First of all great story but my question is: I can't  find chapters 8-22. Is it just me or am I doing somthing wrong. Really would like to read them. Tell me please where to look. I hope someone can help me with this.

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