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The oath of vengenace.

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  •  11-21-2008, 19:48 3235577

    The oath of vengenace.

    My sword lay where it had fallen from my grasp, my voice choked in my throat and I stumbled towards her still unmoving body. The tears seemed motionless as they took lifetimes to fall from my scarred cheeks; I dropped to my knees beside her body and lay down next to her crying with hollow lungs to be slayed so that I could be with her not just for this moment but for eternity. As I reached for my trusty clockwork pistol that stayed by my side, as voice entered my sorrow and awoke a bitter anger that grew in the depths of my soul.

    "Why Hero, your tears of regret and sorrow seem so fake and insignificant against the tears of blood and pain she spilt when I rammed her through with my blade" he said with an E v i l [Evil] laugh that sliced through my pain. I jumped to my feet and the angry bloodthirsty roar that breathed in my throat erupted out echoing through the empty blood stained chamber.

    "You ***, you will die today by my sword alone, so that your rein of E v i l [Evil] and torture may never touch the lives of another innocent ever again" I screamed at him, with anger and vengeance burning bright within my eyes. He stepped back stumbling slightly before righting himself with a sneer, "foolish mortal, you think you alone, a simple farmboy can kill ME! The E v i l [Evil] overlord" his words echoed through the chamber.

    "Your oath of revenge will kill you someday, I predict that, Hero" he said spitting the last word from his mouth as if it were vulgar. As the words finally faded away, I bent down and took my sword rising it above my head I again let out another roar, this one shook the chamber walls and he failed to mask the sign of fear I detected in his red eyes.

    "Your death will not be swift" he mocked as he swept his cloak back and reached within for his katana, he bowed to me as if this was nothing more then a duel between adversaries but both he and I knew this was much more then that. This was a fight to the death, winner takes all of Albion and that was a fight I wasn’t willing to lose. For it would surely mean the damnation of all the souls who lived within the land.

    My whole live had been leading up to this moment and every movement I made, every syllable that I uttered past my lips would either damn me for a eternity or free me from this life of vengeance. With all those possibilities and the freedom of everyone in the kingdom riding on my back, I lowered my sword and raced towards what could possibly my untimely death and demise.

    As our swords struck and the sparks flew, I stared deep within his eyes, deep within his soul. The sights that I occurred upon as I dwelled there shocked me right down to my very essence and the relevance that I came upon was that. His reason for all this wanton destruction of lives was not for vengeance, power, love or greed, that it wasn’t for any of the usual reasons that fuel human desire.

    It was all for nothing, he did it because he wanted too, simply because he could, it sickened me. That she had died for no reason but to fuel his desire of death and destruction, I could not let such a corrupt, E v i l [Evil] being exist in this world for any longer, the decision was made. He had to die.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  11-22-2008, 9:13 3235919 in reply to 3235577

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    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    This is G o o d [Good]!
    http://www.gamestation.co.uk/Xbox360/RolePlaying/~r410289/Fable-2/

    ^Fable II 2/5

    Fable 2 is *** and I have proved why with much evidence.

    The Destroyers of Arzock and LH community rule!

    G o o d [Good]bye!
  •  11-23-2008, 5:10 3236833 in reply to 3235919

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    Thanks, all input is welcome. I will be writing the next entry soon.
    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  11-25-2008, 2:18 3239573 in reply to 3236833

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    (not sure if its as G o o d [Good] as the first entry but here it is)

    As the Katana sliced through the air near my head and I stepped back narrowly missing it cleaving my head from my shoulders. A conceited laugh crept up my throat and I smiled knowing the fact I was going to win. It had been predict by the Gypsy, herself and she had never been wrong before, so how could I lose?

    I felt the smile drain from my face as did the color, as the sword imbedded in my chest was removed in one painful move. I let out a gasp as my blood dripped from my body, "poor foolish Hero, did you honestly think you could defeat me?" he said with a smug smile, I stopped crawling towards my dropped sword as he raised his blade and stabbed me in the back a second time.

    "I can’t believe how utterly depend he was on you, he even believed the utter nonsense and dribble you fed him about being the One" He said turning to face the Gypsy as she entered the chamber. "You" I gasped pulling my self up with one arm, "you betrayed me? Why?" I asked shaking from exhaustion and pain.

    "I was trying to teach you, to trust no one," she said shaking her head sadly as she moved out of my view as the darkness began to descend. "He obviously failed that lesson" he laughed as my eyes began to flutter and I realised then and there, he had been right my oath of vengeance would be the death of me.

    As they’re echoing laughs slowly faded away and I stopped crawling in the darkness towards my blade, my head dropped from my hand and I let myself succumb to the ever-incoming death. A voice entered my pain-induced hallucinations, "Who do ya think he is? Graeve? Graeve? Bloody hell stop wandering off!" the owner of the irritating voice stepping into my view, I blinked at the bright glare from his torch as he pushed it into my face so as to get a better look at my identity.

    "Well whatta we got ere?" smirked the second grave robber, staring at me strangely, he stepped forward and pulled the first grave robber’s torch away from my face and grabbed my pack rummaging through it with a furious intensity. My words of hesitation on his part were quickly brushed aside as the grave robber found what he had been searching for within my pack.

    He pulled out a small medallion, and shoved it in my face, "is this yours? Is this yours?" he yelled in my face with a breath smelling strongly of whisky. "Yes, yes" I muttered weakly shifting away from his form of crude interrogation, my interrogator stood up and turned away from me, "what is it Graeve? Why does it matter if its ‘is?" said the first grave robber. "Why does it matter? WHY DOES IT MATTER? I tell you why it matters, it matters cause you idiot, Calve, you fool, its HIM!" Graeve screamed, "who?" said Calve confused.

    "The bloody hero, the one that saved my town from Balverines" said Graeve whispering, he sat down next me wearily, "oh" said Calve.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  11-25-2008, 20:51 3240600 in reply to 3239573

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    I sat up from the old broken bed I had previously been sleeping on, I turned and heaved my sore, battered and bruised body off the bed, the bed moaned in relief at having been relieved of my load. I turned confused, searching the room for clues as to of my whereabouts, the door to the room creaked open on old rusted hinges and I twirled around to face my unknown savior.

    "As you can obviously tell I am at a loss here, because you evidently know whom I am but I do not know who you are" I said, sitting down on a near by chair feeling the pain from my back wound appear on and off. "I’m Graeve," said my savior abruptly, I wanted for him to go on but this seemed all he would say, I stood up from the chair and strided over to shake his hand, and winced when my battle sores were pulled.

    "My mind’s a little foggy at the moment, so I’m not exactly sure how you came to find me slowly dying alone" I said curious, "oh well bout that" started Graeve with a wince at the choice of topic, "we were robbing graves" said Calve entering the room behind Graeve. "You were what!" I shouted jumping up from my seat, both Graeve and Calve clamped their hands over their ears at my raised voice.

    "We were robbing graves" repeated Calve, "yes I heard that but why, what would ever persist you in disturbing the peace of the dead?" I asked angrily, "the what of the what?" said Graeve turning to face Calve, "you never said he liked to use big words," Calve said annoyed turning to face me.

    I sighed and spoke again this time using simpler words that I hoped my present company would understand, "why were you robbing graves?" I said pointing at them; Graeve pushed my hand away from his face. "Hey, every ones got to make a living, even us grave robbers," said Calve indignantly, he stood up and walked out the door with an annoyed look in my direction.

    I sighed and turned to face Graeve who seemed to be ignoring my question, "are you going to answer my question" I asked, he sighed before turning back to face me, "You saved a village in Westcliff from some Balverines last year, right?" he said staring straight into my eyes. "Yes, but how does that have to do with the here and now" I said curious of where this conversation was leading, "well it was my village you saved, my family who lived on because of you, that’s why I saved you last night, theres no need to thank me either, it was repayment plain and simple " he said turning to look out the window.

    "So where do I go from here?" I asked for once in my life I was unsure of the future, "well that’s you decision, but I figured you would probably go after the people who did this to you" he said getting up from the window seat, "what, revenge?" I said unsure. "Yeah, they did leave you for dead and all, why, don’t you want to go after them and see the terror in their eyes as you make them beg for mercy, but its as I said you decision" Graeve said leaving the room and me lost in my thoughts, unsure of what to do and where to go.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  11-26-2008, 6:27 3241003 in reply to 3240600

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    As I wandered through the forest, my mind wandered even further then my feet would ever take me. The thoughts were of her and her unnecessary death, how had our future and happiness ended so abruptly? My mind just couldn’t comprehend the fact I was living and breathing, existing in a world without her and that I would never ever see her, feel her, smell her or wake up next to her ever again.

    She had been my world, my rock, my soul mate and now because of some foolish vendetta she was dead. I fell to my knees in sorrow and lifting my head to the sky I screamed in pain, birds resting in nearby trees took to the sky at the sound of my torment filled scream.

    I stood up from the ground and shouldered my fallen pack, it heavy load forgotten I lifted one foot onto the road and turned to stare at my old home for the last time. The house was of no use to me any longer with her deep down in the earth; it only service was of that to remind me of what I had lost.

    The road seem to stretch far back into the horizon but this was of no matter to me, for the only thought on my mind was that of cold hard revenge, the kind of which had caused me to claim a oath of vengeance over her dead body.

    A trio of Highwaymen stood directly in front of me hindering me from my path of vengeance; I stepped towards them with a look of pure steel in my eye. It spoke resonating the silence that stood between me and them, it said move out of my way or prepare to be destroyed for nothing will stand in my way.

    The Highwaymen stepped towards me with a hint of menace floating in the air, I felt the laugh of contempt tickle my throat and I let it loose, watching the Highwaymen squirm in distaste at my obvious disbelief at the threat they presented.

    "You, why do you laugh?" said one of the Highwaymen stepping out of the formation, "do you find us funny?" asked another one also stepping towards me. "We are not a bunch of jesters here purely for you entertainment" snapped the third one raising his sword so it rested on my chest. I growled annoyed with this time wasting, my hand reached for my sword, unsheathing it I turned to the Highwayman closest to me and snarled at him, forcing him to trip over his feet into the other one behind him.

    "If you wanted to fight, why didn’t you just say so" snarled the only Highwayman left standing, he pulled his sword from his belt and raced towards me with it pointed to embedded in my chest. I was not going to be caught unaware again I thought, intercepting the strike at the last moment causing the swords to strike and spark. The technique brought forth the memories of the last battle I had fought using the same technique, but this fight will not end with my death I thought, no it would not end the same.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  11-26-2008, 10:46 3241161 in reply to 3241003

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    Nice.
    Dont reply to me,as im only here once.
  •  11-26-2008, 21:21 3241796 in reply to 3241161

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    To any who may care, i am going to try and write a big entry. Hopefully a G o o d [Good] one too, if its bad, all i can say is sorry. All postive comments and helpful hints welcome. So please post. If you like my work tell me.
    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  11-26-2008, 22:46 3241833 in reply to 3241796

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    I stepped away from the piled bodies of the recently slayed Highwaymen, no longer would they terrorize the nearby travelers and towns. I had not completed the task in mind for justice or for G o o d [Good], my actions had been fueled by a more E v i l [Evil] intent. I turned my back on the still warm bodies, they were not of my concern any longer, I continued on my way down the windy road towards the lowering sun.

    As the night crept around me silently, with cold whispers I stopped exhausted at empty abandoned camp, I lit the fire with cold numbed fingers that shook almost lighting my hands with the match. As the fire cackled merrily, I sat back staring into the flames mesmerized by their glow and intensity. I failed to notice the intruders that had entered my current abode, they stood at the corners of the fires warmth, as I felt the tickle of sensors at the back of my neck begin to tingle I twirled around to face the stranger.

    The shrouded strangers bowed to me before situating themselves opposite me in front of the fire. I watched them warily incase of any hidden attack, but their calm almost statue like frozen state shocked me more then any attack they could have thrown at me. I was surprised when they reached within their cloaks, pulling out a blade of pure blue Obsidian steel the kind of which had never grace the lights of the modern day and age.

    The Katana shone with a strong intensity, with a spark and flash that blinded me momentarily they were gone taking away the fire with them. Left alone in the cold and dark unsure of what had just occurred I reach over the dead fire towards the dropped weapon that still shone in the dark.

    Picking up the odd blade, I examined it for any marks or amulets that would reveal its true nature to me but the blade remained as much a enigma as the identities of the strangers. Sheathing the sword in my pack, I stood up from the campsite, as it was no longer secure from enemy attacks I could stay no longer and would have to continue on my way.

    As the sun rose slowly in the sky, I wandered through the empty haunted village I had came upon while stalking through the woodland that smothered the road. The crisp burnt shells of buildings sat emptily on the edge of the excavated woodland, their sad soulless presence pressed down heavily on my conscience. They were not of much importance to me but they’re pain and suffering still pained me and was too much for my still hurt soul to bear.

    I walked away from the empty dead village into the surrounding woodland, the path I took was long and hard, the big sharp rocks that decorated it were vast quantities. As I cleared through the woodland back to the road I had been previously traversing on, I stopped at the small mound I came upon that sat situated in front of my path. I stepped back away from the obvious newly dug grave and tripped on a small tree root, falling off the jutting out cliff face. I tried with no avail to grasp a tree branch or root to halt my descent but this day seem to not be mine as I continued to fall faster and faster towards the jagged rock that lay below, was this to be my end? Was this to become my untimely demise? With my oath of vengeance unfulfilled?

    As I fell into the swelling river, descending deep within its depths, my thoughts turned to the hated Gypsy, who had betrayed me, her punishment would be far worse then my enemy’s. Her fate from now until either she or I died would be forever linked because of a simple action, her betrayal.

    I resurfaced further down stream from where I had entered the river, it banks swelled with turbulent waters that hid many secrets within its murky depths. It was not my intent to uncovers it secrets, so the mysterious waters placed me on a near by shore surrounded by a wild untamed jungle.

    I exited the water more calmly then I entered it, and turned to smile at its shining surface, I flipped the remain gold coin from my water filled pack in the river as payment to the river god for my safe journey through the river. Turning on my heel I entered the loud and noisy jungle before long all sight of the river had been swallowed by the trees of the jungle and I was yet again lost and unsure of where to go.

    I wandered aimlessly through the smoky trees; sometimes turning in countless circles around nameless trees that stretched high up into the sky and choked out all the light from the sun. Leaving behind a hazy warm darkness that seem to poke and prod at my presence, as I finally walked upon a small stray ray of sunlight I ran towards it with the same desperation of a man dying of thirst.

    The light did not fail me and I fell to my knees in praise as salvation was delivered to me in the form of a small gap in the jungle’s trees, I exited the jungle stumbling on the road, gasping for fresh cool air. As I rose from the ground, I groaned at the sight of the pistol pointing at my face, of course I thought, of course I just happened to come upon some desperadoes as I leave behind a area that has left me weak and distorted.

    "Come with us quietly and you will not be harmed, resist and you will be struck down" said the soft voice of the Bandit holding the pistol pointed to my face, " and what if I chose the third option?" I asked standing up from my position. "What third option?" said the Bandit confused, "this" I cried whipping out the Katana from my pack and slicing the leader’s head clean from his shoulders.

    I stood tall and raised my blade high above my head as the Bandit’s body crumpled to the ground soiling it with its blood, I raised my foot and placed it firmly over the Bandit’s corpse, "Now who next?" I said with an E v i l [Evil] smile, the remaining Bandits took off screaming into the Jungle. I let them go they were of no concern to me and all my energy had been used up pulling my sword out and struggling to stand without collapsing from pure exhaustion.

    Dropping my sword, I collapsed to the ground, I struggled wearily as I felt my body lifted, my mutters and mumbles to cease were ignored as I was carried of the road and down a bumpy track to a hidden cabin deep in the jungle.

    My fever chose the moment, my captors placed me on a bed, to strike my worn out body. As the sun rose the next morning my fever had peaked and my parched throat was relieved of its dry state, although the energy was drained from my body. I still struggled to sit up and soon an unknown person rushed to my aid helping my sit up so as to face my unknown saviors.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  11-27-2008, 2:00 3241931 in reply to 3241833

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    Very interesting indeed. There are quite a few spelling and grammar errors but the story is there and that is what matters.

    Continue on, though in the future (and with what you've written so far) you should run it through Microsoft Word or some similar program for a spelling and grammar check. It doesn't catch everything, but it's still pretty G o o d [Good].

    Live or die. Who really cares what happens after that?

  •  11-27-2008, 2:29 3241936 in reply to 3241931

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    Lol, I do actually write my stories in Word, although it doesn't catch all my errors its still G o o d [Good]. I’m just happy I don't have any problems with that code thing that effects some people. Thanks for the advice; thought the grammar problem that is probably me, I never was that G o o d [Good] with grammar. I'll try and keep the spelling errors to a minimum.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  12-05-2008, 19:12 3250599 in reply to 3241936

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    The man situated directly in front of me extended his hand so as that the usual common curtsies would be exchanged. I ignored the hand hovering in front of me and instead chose to glare at him with a raw anger that burned within my throat burning it with it acid filled bile.

    "You act as if you did not want to be saved" he says with a curious look in my direction, I turn away from his stare and look out the window, staring into the dark, murky woods. "Would it shock you to know that I in fact did not want to saved?" I said with clenched teeth, I turning to face him so as my anger could be directed. As I turned I tore my old wound open causing me to cry out and fall from the bed, from the pain that burned through my side as if hot pokers were being merciless inserted at the one time.

    His assistant leapt to my aid, helping me back to the bed, I struggled against his grip, swearing and cursing. I pulled out of his grip and threw myself back onto the bed, gasping for air as I struggled and wheezed like a fish throwing itself upstream.

    I sat up on the bed and turned back to face him, "I did not ask to be saved, how did you not know I didn’t plan to die there, alone" I snarled spitting at him. He wiped the spittle from his cheek and turned to stare at me with his intense blue eyes, "but it was not of your destiny to die alone, friend" he said with an old smile. "What would you know of destiny, you live alone in this dirty old shack at the edge of a merciless world, so don’t you talk about destiny!" I screamed at him.

    "I know enough about it to tell when one has been burned by its hand and you my friend most certainly have been touched by destiny, its blazes like fire in your eyes and whispers like the wind in your future, I can see that much but the rest is unknown" he said touching his eyes. He bowed to me, then turned and exited the room leaving me alone with his assistant, who turned to me and sat on the chair opposite the bed, I had the unmistakable feeling I was being guarded, from who or what exactly I didn’t know.

    I turned so as the assistant faced my back and could not see the tears that I failed to stop from cascading down my cheeks. Oh why had she died I thought letting out the moan that had been creeping up my throat and I ignored the sound of a chair being scraped against the floor as the assistant exited the room so as to leave me alone in my misery.

    I flipped over on to my back and stared at the ceiling of the room, its solitary light that hung from the center, blinked solemnly at me before flickering then dying. I sat up from the bed, I would not sit here and slowly wait to die, no I would get up and continue on.

    I had not almost died in that empty soulless chamber to wait out my days here with no company but that of an old man and his assistant, had I not sworn a oath of vengeance over her body that I would avenge her death? I could not stay I had to go on.

    I grabbed my pack and climbed out the window leaving the shack far behind, I did not see that old man as he stood beside his assistant staring at my back as I continued on my way. I was to focused on my path to hear the words, he whispered to the wind "Light bless that man, for if he should fail then all hope is lost," his assistant nodded once and turned away from the window, exiting the room, "G o o d [Good] luck hero, cause your going to need it" the old man whispered closing the door.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  12-16-2008, 18:16 3259509 in reply to 3250599

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    My descent down the jungle-choked path was strangely empty of further interruptions and distractions it seemed surreal, almost a façade, as if I was staring at the world through a pane of glass.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  12-18-2008, 17:42 3261233 in reply to 3259509

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    i shall write a longer entry today,
    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  12-20-2008, 20:07 3263071 in reply to 3261233

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    I strode down it with my pack banging repetitively against my back, a sound muffled by the bushes suffocating the path, reached my ears and I stopped watching the bush, certain it proved no threat to me. I continued and halted midstep at the breathtaking sight of the raven-haired beauty that graced the road ahead of me.

    Her confused almost bewildered expression tugged at my heart, she provoked memories of her and how she had died, I shook my head and willed away the tears that stood to fall from my eyes, this was not her, she was dead and still, deep in the earth, this girl was nothing but a distraction and I did not need that.

    I stepped towards the girl and continued on down that path, as I reached her I sidestepped around her and kept on walking, I had reached the bottom of the slowly downward sloping hill, I stopped at the sound of the roar and the scream that accompanied it. I turned and was greeted with the sight of the girl now fight a group of Balverines, they had surrounded the girl and were now taking in turns to slowly push her towards the nearby trees.

    No doubt she would be their next meal if I didn’t stop and assist her, but my journey had already suffered far too many setback and could not be halt much more. Decisions whirled in my mind, stop and help her or let her die and face the guilt. I sighed as I strode back up the hill I had but recently been traversing down, as I pulled my sword from it sheath I felt my anger and hatred burn through the blade and I channeled the rage as I raced towards the girl and the Balverines.

    She leapt aside as I ran into the thick of the group, swinging and chopping I slayed the Balverines in a manner of moments, she turned to me and let out a howl rather then the cry of thanks and gratitude I had been expecting. As she transformed into a large battled scarred white Balverine I cursed my G o o d [Good] nature, damn it and miss leading me. I raised my blade and charged the beast, it roared straight into my face and swiped with a large claw at my head, trying to cleave it from my head, how had this become the norm for me, I wondered.

    I lowered my blade and slammed the foul beast to the ground, raising my blade above its head I moved so as to strike it through it hard and thick skull, as my blade descended towards its target and the creature doom, I stopped and stared into the girl’s eyes, the Balverine had transformed back into its human disguise, never had such a thing happened before. The girl stared at me with icy blue eyes that mirrored that anger and pain of the beast I had been fighting moments before.

    "Why do you fight me hero?" asked the girl, "you were trying to kill me" I cried shocked that she even had to asked, "would I not have a reason to, you slayed my family for no reason" she said getting off the ground and out from under my blade, the tip followed her heart and I cautiously watched her for any provoked attack.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  12-30-2008, 23:02 3269065 in reply to 3263071

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    ‘You will not break my spirit, hero" she hissed spitting at me, I took a cautious step back and pulled my handkerchief from my pocket, ignoring her I proceeded to wipe the spittle from my shirt. I sighed, she continued to ignore my claims and accuse me of slaughter, murder and kidnapping, how had I followed down this path of anger and hatred, the answer seemed to escape me.

    I sighed again before stepping towards her as the left side of her face twitched I froze and tried to step away from her while still keeping both eyes on her, I turned and started to run as she bent down in agony as she began to change back into a Balverine. This just was my day, my year my life I thought as I raced through the jungle while being chased by a very angry white Balverine. I wasn’t a coward I knew that but when one is in a weakened state and a fully refreshed murderous Balverine is coming after you, my only advice is RUN! Run fast and away, very far away.

    I thought as I took my own advice and picked up speed as I tore through the jungle, I heard the crashes and thumps as the Balverine behind me tossed trees like they were matchsticks out of its path. I felt my heart begin to beat against my chest as if it seeked to escape, at this moment I wouldn’t hold it against it, if I was in its position I would too.

    I stopped running and turned around to face the Balverine as it charged full speed towards me. I bent down and pulled up a fallen tree branch that extended longer then my arm, pulling back I flung the branch in the arm towards the Balverine. It flew through the arm swifter then any arrow, straighter than any spear, it seemed to pick up speed as it reached the halfway mark between me and the Balverine.

    The Balverine’s face turned white, if that was possible I thought, realising how funny that would have been if this wasn’t a moment that could end with my bloody and horribly painful death. The branch struck the Balverine’s chest, it slid clean through embedding itself all the way through to the other side of the beast, I pulled my hand up to let out a victory cry but stopped as it began to change back into the girl.

    I stepped towards her and stopped as she turned to face me, she had tears cascading down her face and it was all I could do to stop mine from falling. She let out a racketing sob and leaned towards me, I bent down to let her whisper in my ear, failing to perceive that at any moment she could kill me. She let out another sob and said with a wavering scared voice, ‘Is it scary?" she asked, I leaned away from her confused, "is what scary?" I said.

    "Death" she said as another tear rolled down her cheek and I realised for all that the fact she had an E v i l [Evil] beast breathing in her chest, she was still human and still scared as hell. What could I do, lie to her and say no it not scary, or just take a chance and tell her the truth that it was horrible all fire and brimstone where she was going.

    "Yes, its scary, it was the most terrifying thing I ever experienced, as I lay there alone in the dark all I could think was how scared I was" I said taking her hand, I leaned towards her and stroked her head, it mattered not that a moment ago she had been going to kill me and scatter my remains all over the jungle. She leaned towards me and whispered before leaning away and closing her eyes.

    As I walked away from her cold corpse, the words she had spoken before she died continued to come back to my mind, running themselves over and over again as if she was following me on my journey and whispering them in my ear. I couldn’t forget the last thing she had said, "thank you.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  12-31-2008, 4:14 3269231 in reply to 3235577

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    It shocked me that the only words of kindness or words of thanks had been taken from the lips of a white Balverine whose family I had innocently slaughter under the impression that I had been rescuing the girl, the Balverine had inside. I couldn’t for the sake of me, figure whether the disease or curse, was that the girl could transform into a Balverine or that the Balverine could transform into a girl. Thinking about it only proved to further confuse my mind, it was better if I just put it far out of my thoughts.

    I stepped over the road’s edge and onto a rough carved path that curled and cut through the empty field, as I stepped towards the roughly constructed hut that was situated in front of me. I felt my head start to ache and throb, what is this sensation, I thought as the pain and intensity of the headache increase, as my head began to feel as if it was going to explode. I dropped to my knees in submission to the pain, as I raised my head everything blacked out and darkness surrounded me.

    A figure swathed in shadows and cloaked in sadness stood perfectly still in front of me, I raised my head to stare in wonder at this figure of mystery and perfection. The image wavered and disappeared into nothingness as I raised a tentative hand to touch its surface, My hand wavered too as I reached with a drug induced mind to stroke the cold grey walls. Where was I, I wondered with a very confused but bemused mind, I heard a mutter and loud shuffling sound outside the door of the room I was currently in, I began to sing in a low voice as the door began to slowly open on well oiled hinges.

    I threw my self away from the Wraith as it entered the room, it rose and began to step closer and closer to me, NO it would not take my soul I thought frantically searching the room for a weapon against the beast of burden that had taken the face of my dearly departed wife. It was not her, I thought, it lies, it lies "IT LIES!" I screamed, twirling round to face the spawn of hell, "Darling, it me, can’t you see that" she pleaded stepping towards me with outstretched arms as if to smother me with its vile body. "She DEAD! Don’t you get that, dead! D E A D, DEAD, YOUR DEAD! Oh god you’re dead" I sobbed collapsing on the stone cold floor.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  01-20-2009, 0:56 3288745 in reply to 3269231

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    As I slept I dreamt of times long pasted, ones such as when I was younger and less foolish. "Roll it, roll it, just roll the BLOODLY DICE!" roared Charley, banging his fist on the table causing the dice to roll off and under the table. "Well look, what you’ve gone and done" I said shaking my head in disbelief, "I was about to roll it, when you went and started to rant about rolling" I said as I bent down to retrieve the dice from under the crooked table. "I’m sorry, but you take forever to roll" Charley said sitting back on his seat, it groaned under his weight but failed to collapse which I considered a G o o d [Good] sign.

    "Be that as it may, but you still have to control that temper of yours, one of these days your going to get us thrown out" I said grumbling as I shook the dice in one hand and sipped my ale in the other. "You’re a G o o d [Good] friend, Charley but a horrible game player" I said ducking the swipe Charley took at my head, "hey, don’t shoot the messenger, I was only speaking the truth" I said ducking another swipe, I got up from my seat and weaved my way through the filled tavern.

    "Can I have another Golden Ale for my friend and I" I called out to the Barkeep over the loud hum of the noisy tavern, " another WHAT?" roared the Barkeep over the noise. "Another GOLDEN ALE" I yelled as the noise abruptly disappeared, "no need to yell, friend, now what can I help you with" said the Barkeep leaning over the bar. "Uh, I would like another Golden Ale for my friend and I" I said pointing at the golden label drink, "sure, two Golden Ales coming right up" said the Barkeep walking away.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  04-03-2009, 20:35 3321476 in reply to 3288745

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    Dropped out of that memory and into a dark twisted dream of fear that bleed like rain onto the dark recesses of his mind.

    A sound. Any sound at all. There was nothing. Empty heartless silence. A scritch. A scratch. Then silence again. He banged his foot, till it bled, against the solid and unrelenting wall.

    Bang. Bang. Bang! Silence. A sob. A sigh. A breath and… a exhale. He couldn’t scream, it would exhaust him to speak or raise his voice. Then it came out of the darkness. A laugh. Low and cruel. With the slightest hint of hysteria.

    "Help me!" "Oh please god, help me!" his words echoed round and round, like a broken record. But no answer replied his cry, and again it crept in with the silence. That feeling. Again. Always there. Watching. Waiting. Seething. Sating. Siting smugly at the back of his throat.

    A breath. Then another. A third. Followed by a fourth. Complimented by a large exhale. In and out. In and out. In and out. In and out. In and…out. Choke. Cough. Gag. Silence. In and in and in and…out. "Help me!". A scream. A cry into the darkness.

    A laugh. Low and menace. A cackle. A stab. "No one’s coming to help you". A hiss. An intake. Silence. "No one can hear you!" It laughed again. Cruel and cutting. "You’re buried deep within the earth, down among the worms!" It cackled at its joke.

    "Down. Down. Down. Among the dead men" it sang. Hissing and spluttering. Hacking. Coughing. Its final words the sound of a dead man. When will they know? When would they understand? What it was like to already be dead before you’ve died.

    Entombed within your own grave. But still alive. Still thinking. Breathing. Beating. Living. Screaming.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  04-10-2009, 4:55 3324515 in reply to 3321476

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    He sat up abruptly in the cold and tight confines of an unknown bed within the surrounds of a strange and enigmatic room. Where was he? he wondered, shaking his aching head and the throbbing pain that sat behind his left eye intensified ten fold within that single moment of movement. He hissed and grabbed his eyes clutching his head in hopes of disappating the pain by mind power alone. This wasn't a feat that could be possibly pulled off even by a seasoned master and the act of course failed miserably and he sank into the strangling embrace of the bed.
    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  04-16-2009, 4:47 3327286 in reply to 3235577

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    this is G o o d [Good] stuff...keep it coming
  •  04-17-2009, 1:25 3327662 in reply to 3327286

    Re: The oath of vengenace.

    (ThanksSmily [:)].)

    The room spun as he rose off the bed. It’s white twirled with the mingling black of the open door. Black. White. Black. White. It slowly began to stop and the merry go round of colours, trickled into white surroundings. White bed, white sheets against a white wall that was off set by a white ceiling, he leaned over the bed and stared at the very gloomy looking white floor. It was all too much; he was beginning to feel just the slightest bit of apprehension creep in as the doorway was filled with the form of a rather opposing looking individual.

    The man or woman, he wasn’t entirely sure of the individual’s sex or origin. He blinked and leaned back to take in the entire height and stance of the odd sexless person. It stared at him, with black eyes avoid of pupils, its lash less eyelids blinked several times and it looked at him doe eyed before crashing forward. "TIMBER!" roared a voice behind it, as the person smashed onto the floor, a small pool of blood oozed out from under it face.

    A man of very small stature stepped over the fallen foe and walked up to the bed. It stopped and stared with a furrowed brow at him. Its bright green eyes blinked quickly and its small face broke out into a big joyous smile. "My dear fellow, I’ve found you!" it jumped onto the bed and wrapped its arms around him; its arms didn’t make it all the way round his muscular girth.

    It sat back on its heels and watched him excitedly, slowly rocking back and forth. It blinked and looked confused at his absence of words, of joy, of anything really. "Well?" it asked confused sitting back looking rather taken back at his silence.

    He turned his head and stared back at the little fellow, he shrugged his shoulders tiredly and rubbed his head.

    "I’m sorry, but I really don’t know who you are" he said with a nervous cough, turning his head away from the shocked expression. "What!" cried the man, the surprise on his face mirrored by that of the one within his voice. "How can you not know me, Jack? Its me, Shamus, your old buddy and pal" it said with a sad face and what looked like the beginning of tears in its eyes.

    "My name’s not Jack" he hissed harshly, turning away from the spectacle of a man. He swang his feet over the edge of the bed and stood with shaky feet. He walked to the edge of the room and stood in the dark empty recesses of the doorway, turning back to the odd fellow who had saved him from a unknown fate, he sighed, "Are you coming, or what?" he said with another sigh, unsure of what he was getting himself into.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
  •  07-03-2009, 9:11 3370890 in reply to 3327662

    The End.

    The small man hopped off the bed and raced after him on rapid steps. The darkly lit hall, narrowed out at the end, he walked with cautious steps down toward the illuminated doorway at the end of the hall. The walls of the hall, swirled with shadows of lurking inhabitants, Faces of gruesome proportions perturbed from the depths of caverns unknown.

    The man and the small stranger, walked further and further into the depths of the future unknown. They’re shadows mingled with that of the dark recesses that crept within the hall. Hauntingly beautiful sounds echoed from portal less rooms and the possibilities of entrance to such remained all but a mystery.

    He walked outside of the strange building and stood still watching the sun rising over the horizon. He turned to face the small man and stopped; speechless he stared at the gun now pointed to his heart. "What has brought about this?" he cried raising his hands in the air above his head, the fear showed in his eyes. The man smiled and lowered the gun; he breathed easier but stopped as the bullet lodged itself deep in his heart.

    He dropped to the ground and choked. Coughing. Hacking. Wheezing. It was a strange feeling he thought, struggling to breathe because your own blood is pooling up you’re throat. He dropped to his knees and stared the man in the eye, the gun smoked slightly and the man blew on it. He turned to walk away from him and stopped, "He says G o o d [Good]bye, you’re a fool and she didn’t die, it was all a lie to get rid of you" his words threw him and he stopped staring at the ground.

    His breaths became heavier and he closed his eyes as the tears welled up. His heart hurt, from the bullet or the betrayal he did not know. Open his eyes to stare at the sky, he howled. All he had been through. All he had done. For her and the truth being, it was all a lie?

    His heart stopped before he knew and the tear fell before he took his last breath. Open his mouth and closing it, his dead eyes stared emotionless at the sky and he was gone.

    The little man thought as he walked back up the hill, the end it’s the end of what we know, of what we’ve seen and of what we are. What can I say that hasn’t been said? What can I do that hasn’t been done? Do I know that this is the end?
    I’m not sure that I really know. All I can say is that, if this is the end.
    Then we’ve just begun, we’re not even at the middle yet,
    so how can this be the end? All we’ve done seems so insignificant,
    compared against what’s to come. All that we’ve run from, all that can be seen,
    all that we are is nothing, compared against what we are to become.

    Our future unknown, unseen, unheard.
    Search our souls to find an answer, but it not the one we want to find.
    Silence is lost, truth is unknown and all that we know is that this is…. This is…. This is the end.


    If I fall will you promise to catch me?
    If I cry will you promise to hold me?
    If I love you will you promise to never break my heart?
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