The heat was searing through his bones along with the wind ripping his flesh off of his bones ,every step aching like Archon was striking him down with the sword. he was walking to find his long lost brother Artemis. our hero's name is Domovoi ,Domovoi Butler on the top ten most dangerous men in all of Albion he would kill without mercy he knew how to reload his gun so fast it was like a balverine striking you with a speed attack this man had no training from any body he taught himself in all of the arts. Once a youngster named Leon and his dog Demon were taught under his belt everything Domovoi knew. But he still had to find his brother .then "BANG" it was a gunshot "was it could it be "Domovoi thought to himself he drew his gun then a little mutt accompanied him, and it was the apprentice"Hey butler, Long time no see, did you hear that gunshot"? yelled Leon "yes" replied Butler(im calling him butler cos it is more mystique than domovoi so i will call him butler from now on) "who was it " shouted leon "i dont know "replied butler "i will get Demon to hold and incapacitate them" yelled Leon "o.K do it fast thogh he is probably already on the move" called butler ."Done And Done" replied Leon. "kill him" Leon said to demon "Kill him Boy""AWAAROO" Demon Howled and demon was gone. to be continued

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Demon had gone, he was already halfway to the attacker he fired a shot at Demon, Demon jumped spun and lunged straight for his throat CRACK the attackers throat was ripped right out..he was not dead but he was reaching for his pistol "BANG " the man was shot Then the wind stopped howling like a balverine, Leon came running " boy" Leon Said Cutting off the mans arm feeding it to the dog Butler and Leon took his belongings and ammunition "aah a flint700 the latest pistol on the market"said butler stowing it in his bag "right lets bury his body so balverines don't come looking for something to eat" Said Leon . "Too late "replied butler reaching for the flint700 and leon unsheathed his master greatsword swinging it like a baton . the two men stood back to back staying readied for the group of balverines to attack "swish"a balverine attacked leon brought his sword through its hide then a giant white balverine covered in ice and snow came to attack them they quickly dodged butler put 5 shots into the beasts head it fell down and howled like a baby.Leon thought to himself "ill make that a set of amour for me it'll be damned near impenetrable"another balverine jumped this one wasn't as stupid as the rest it came down from the sky's quiet as a bird a whistling sound was coming from above. of Leon saw a balverine coming at him he jumped span around with his sword spinning like a tornado slicing the balverine like sushi .Butler shot the rest while Leon was busy tornado slicing a balverine. when Leon Landed Demon was happily eating balverine meat Leon said to butler "Hey that snow balverines hide, where is it im going to skin it and and make me armour to cover for my plate-mail armour". Butler replied "over there" "o.k"said Leon .2 hours later Leon had successfully created a snow balverine amour to cover for his plate-mail while it was getting repaired his boots were as white as snow along with the rest of his armour but the best part of his armour was the helmet he had scraped all of the balverines brains and eyes so it could be used as a helmet. "o.k Butler lets get some sleep " said Leon "AGREED" said butler to be continued

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* continued The next morning Leon and Butler awoke to the feeling of eyes thousands of eyes they were captured and sent to the arena while they yondered in the land of sleep. "What the bloody hell is going on here" said butler " i don't know friend but im sure demon can help us fight these Goons" "wha, where the hell is Demon !" Leon whistled as loud as he possibly could "AWAROO" demon jumped the gates headed towards the two men only to stand beside them in their fight" boy..But why didn't you wake us up eh" Demon turned to show Leon the bullet wound in his back "oh ...well let me fix that up" he touched the wound and the dog was then again fitter than a snow Balverine. Butler and Leon Drew their weapons to ready themselves for the attackers" well ladys and gentle men welcome to the arena where these two men will fight off a horde of Hungry Snow Balverines let in the beasts leon swiftly swung his sword around to meet the first balverines head slicing it clean off butler was already on the next balverine drawing his sword out of another balverines back whipping out his new flint700 pistol shooting another 2 balverines" Nice i got two dumasses with one bullet" Butler said to himself. leon told Demon to kill whatever annoyed him Except the crowd so Demon lunged forward jumped on butlers head up higher into the air only to meet another balverine, Demon grabbed the balverines throught spun around sending a dead balverine into the crowd. when Leon landed he summoned the power of the will to his command, sending lightning bolts shooting out of his fingers into the nearest enemy ,it died immediately (of course it did because Leon had mastered everything he knew.) the next set of enemy's were two dragons they were dark Black emitting a red smoke through their nostrils causing the arena to go into a pitch black status Leon used all of his most powerful spells and combined them to attack one dragon while Butler and Demon were dealing with the other one. Demon had Managed somehow to get on the dragons head so it would try to attack him with its Tail each time this happened Demon would Quickly dodge and bite the dragons ears , This was also a Vantage point for butler shooting it with a specially designed Gun that could blow apart a house Butler shot the dragon square in between the eyes 5 times on the fifth the dragon Fell down when it did this Demon Gouged out its eyes like a fat person eating Ice -cream the dragon Burst into Flames and was devoured by the pits of the earth.Demon sprinted towards Leon and Jumped onto the dragons face ripping out its eyes like a bear ripping apart a goat. The dragon bellowed out in pain then burst into flames,creating a pit of darkness for a short time just as it disappeared. to be continued someone post a reply please!!

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i will!!! lol i havent read it yet, but i will in a minute then ill edit this edit: brill, you just need to work on the spellin and have a few more comma's but this is brillaint were did you get the name artismis from? was it from ice wind dale? lol why does everyone write about balverines? ah well i cant complain i done it in my fanfic lol. dear god another arena story lol lots of fanfics write about the arena

its the name of a greek god, also the name of a boy criminal master mind from the same book he got the name Domovoi Butler from

you got it im not good with names so i wrote down the first thing that came to my head

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*continued this part is M15+ (doesn't mean that if you are under 15 you cant read it it is just recommended not to) Leon and Butler had successfully defeated the dragons, they could hear the voices of the crowd yelling out in applause , the commentators voice saying "they did it folks they took out all of those balverines as well as the first two dragons we have ever captured folks". " Hey butler the gate is Open we can go now " said Leon "thank goodness "said butler sighing in relief. as they walked out of the arena they met up with the head man "leon said to the man "WHERE THE HELL IS MY 500,000 Gold you cheating Barstard you stole me ,my dog and my friend you woke us up While we were in the middle of the Arena you damned bastard arse hole twist Give me my money or i will shove this gun here that can blow apart a house in one shot up YOUR RECTUM, SO GIVE ME MY DAMNED MONEY YOU LITTLE ****" as leon said this sparks of lightning shot out of his hands.the man who leon just gave a bollocking was about 7 ft tall and he cowered on on to his knees pleading for mercy ,and leon replied "WHERE IS MY MONEY!" " o o o on th th th the t t t t tab b b ble. the man stuttered as he soiled himself on the spot. "thank you" replied leon ,as Demon walked past he barked in the mans face ,he fainted like a baby without oxygen. "Come on leon lets get out of here " said butler "agreed old friend"replied leon without his rage frenzy taking over . they walked for three miles to find a place called knothole glade "finally freaking civilization ". "I was getting sick of killing balverines "said Leon. " me too" said butler "grrgh" said Demon the men laughed ,the funniest thing ive seen all week said the men simultaneously. lets go get us a place to stay at. the men bought a castle with a quarter of the arena money .they got rested up and were ready for the next day the voyage to bowerstone. To be continued

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Pretty cool, not as gory/ detailed as I might like but hey Liking the story though, keep going

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artemis fowl references much...

*continuedremember m15+ if you dont like hearing things that arent to your liking. and sorrythat i havent been on for a while it is just because my dad unhooked the internet cable. happy reading The day was young with the sun shining the dog barking and the town cheering, but what were they cheering for? Why, the champions of the arena of course the champions names were Domovoi Butler of the Butler clan ,and Leon Xavier the last of his family left, he is at the bottom of his family tree , but he plans to change that. and of course the lovable, canine companion Demon his owner taught him well . Leon yawned “heey Buutleer nntum what are all those ayah people mmmm cheering for?’ “Got me beat” replied butler in a sarcastic tone, ”ha, ha ,ha, ha very funny said Leon with out the yawning covering his breath ,like a coat of snow covering the ground with is icy cold hands. Leon ,Butler and Demon walked out of there house to a giant mob, “ what exactly did we do last night Butler? “asked Leon “nothing” he replied with a tinge of hopefulness layering his voice ,like an Italian woman layering lasagna sheets. “o.k. if we didn’t then why are all these people here with pitch forks?” “I’m not sure “said butler, before they were interrupted by a little boy holding a sword saying “excuse me gunslinger could you please sign our stuff?” “sure ,why not Sonny “ said Leon without his usual macho voice “ my name is jack said the boy “ then the Crowd erupted with pleasure and started to form a line which started to look like the whole of Albion was there (it wasn’t though it was only half of Albion gathering to meet the legendary spell-sword Leon and the legendary skills-master gunslinger . At the end of the day they had signed three hundred and eighty three thousand pitchforks, breasts and you don’t want to know what else this was the total amount of things they had signed all day “well so much for going to Bower stone” Sneered Leon “ don’t worry well just have to get up early tomorrow” said Butler “ Make sure we tell Demon to wake us up at 3 A.M that is an hour before the ship leaves to Bower stone “said Leon “Don’t worry I will”” we will “ said the men simultaneously . they next morning the men awoke to a dog nibbling on their ears ,”o.k. said Leon Lets get up and go” “way ahead of yah” said Butler as he was packing up their supplies “lets get to the witch-wood docks as fast as we can o.k.” said Leon butler replied “I cant use my will I used it all signing those peoples belongings” just as he said that Leon threw him a vase of blue substance “what’s this” asked butler Will potion Drink it you will be able to use your will again cos my will came natural to me, mine replenishes slowly by itself yours was taught to you so to replenish it you need a vial of will potion the other reason you don’t normally run out of will is cos you eat lots of Fish “. “Aha” said butler inquisitively. “I will carry Demon you carry our supplies “ “Got it” said butler. Half an hour Later the men arrived at the dock ,the dog looked petrified like it had just seen a ghost but the men walked on board with their luggage and canine, the men went to go and pay for the trip but the captain said” why should I let such a great couple of champions pay aarrgh “ “because we can afford it “ said Leon in a sarcastic tone . The captain sent them down stairs to the galley to unpack their food, they also got comfortable in the lounge room it took them three months to get to bowerstone. But it was worth it. * to be continuedthe next part is already published but im not posting til i get some decent reviews (and klavande dont go sayingmore commas it gets very annoying for us writers

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· continued The men had been on the ship for ninety days and eighty-nine nights they heard the ship dock up and the captain said “Land Ahoy!”. The men sighed in relief they had not eaten any fresh produce in two months they were famished, their food had run out two days before they had made land, because of rats. The rats had been exterminated by demon , eventually. They went to the general store to stock up on supplies they the bought another castle but this time in Bowerstone , they had used up 250,000 gold in the time they had won the arena money but it helped that they hadn’t been able to spend it otherwise they would have never been prepared for this next event…. They had come across some old ruins the men looked at them and followed the path down to them they couldn’t get in the front door at all. “What are we going to do if we cant get in here” said Leon “Ruff,Ruff” barked Demon Butler was examining the big cavern about 50 Feet away from the Ruins main entrance .“What about over there” Asked butler inquisitively. “What, Where” Said Leon “Over there” Replied Butler “Oh, there I didn’t know where you were talking about, I didn’t see it because it was covered in vines” replied Leon “Whatever” said Butler “Lets Go Through” Said Leon “Lets not” replied Butler “What? You were the one who said it in the first place” said Leon ,”Yeah but I just remembered a Story about a hero my mum used to tell me about and this is the guild where he was taught that will stuff and how to wield a sword and bow this door is what they called Demon doors” “ghhruufghff?” Said Demon “ No not you Demon , these doors have magical powers and this very Demon Door was the door that held the evil dragon form of jack of blades the Legendry evil Super Villain, I never want you to witness the drawings of these battles my great, great, great ,great, great , great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, Grandmother drew these pictures were horrific I never want you to enter these caves” “GOT IT” Said Butler with great incentive and meaning. “Got It” Replied Leon . “Lets go home” Said Butler “lets” Replied Leon. The men walked along the Brightwood intersection and butler said out of the blue “this road used to be called the Lookout Point” and the men strolled to their new home .Albion. * to be continued

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I am speechless............................................................................................................................................ is so.......FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG i love this storY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

youre being modest L.O.L nah thanks alot im working on the next part now and im out

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wats modest? But this is a good forum. Just a tip though, you should never have qoutes bump. Example(wrong way): I said,"Cheese is great!" "It sure is" boby replied! Example(right way): I said,"Cheese is great!" "It sure is" boby replied!

· Continued chapter 7 the curse of the black beetle berry the men had had a good night sleep and they had finally made it to the promised land Albion the men had little to worry about considering that they both stood at least 6ft 11 just one inch short of 7 ft tall. In this land they were considered giants and heroes the ridded the land of witchwood from its white balverines and snow balverines all that were left were the pathetic brown balverines which could be held under control but not defeated because they bred like the Catholics and they were smaller harder targets to hit but they were also stupider. We11 our heroes woke up and made breakfast balverine bacon and chicken eggs One of he most expensive delicacies in all of Albion but they came cheap for these heroes because they were the ones who supplied the butcher with the balverine meat so it was pretty cheap for them. “morning butler “said Leon “mornin’”replied butler “ruffruff”replied demon as he got back from a morning hunt he ate a sacred berry and began to talk “where’s my bloody bacon and eggs” both Leon and butler spat out there food “wha-wha” Leon stuttered butler replied hastily “babafigtibicaticabicaflica” so fast it was unable to be deciphered “yes I can freaking talk” “what the hell did you do” Leon stuttered. “I ate the black beetle berry ,and for you that means I can talk and you aren’t having trouble hearing me yes I found it on the hook coast merchant ship and I recognised it so I ate it, it was disgusting but hay I can talk Albionite now” explained demon thoroughly “so you can talk now” “yes” “cool o.k. do you know how to get into the guild of heroes?” “yes” “well can you get us in then” “yes, but for a price” What!” retorted Leon “I was just kidding yes ill take you there right now hold on to me ,the both of you” “o.k.” the men hastily said simultaneously . there was a bright red light which was then replaced with a sparkling blue light that hummed like Avo himself then their current surroundings were replaced with a room with a map of the old Albion on it there was also a little standing podium like thing that looked like the one the men were standing on except that it glowed a dull-bright green Leon walked over and stood on it and all of a sudden a whole heap of options were in front of him he pressed the one that said manna and chose a new spell he hadn’t heard of called enflamebeserker it explained that this spell made the user go into a frenzy that he could control all fire and he was surrounded by a blurring flame that burnt every enemy that attacked him. Leon tried out the spell “WOWOWOWOWOWOWOOWOH!!!! There big guy are you trying to burn this place down again” said Butler “what you know about the history of this place” said Demon “yeah, my mum used to tell me stories about my great, great,great,great,great,great,great,great,great grandfather Thunder he was one of the most famous arena fihters””wow my great. Great. Great. Great. Great. Great. Great. Great. Grandfather Orpheus he also fought in the arena so did his mother scarlet robe but he also single handedly defeated jack of blades and another cool thing I have the archon bloodline” then in a blue flash the greatest of all guild members appeared it was the guild master “cough,cough,cough I swear that this place is going to the dogs” “oi im a dog and more intelligent than both of these buffoons” “o.k. point taken old friend” “What! you two know each other” “of course we do I bestowed the fifth god gate guild seal within this dog., he has infinite knowledge now he can speak he can be your animal guide and I will give you the fourth and third guiold seals these two guild seals are the fourth and third ever made therefore the bestow in them the ancient bloodline this which Leon already has it will unlock you bloodline power”. *to be continued

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That last paragraph was hard to read but I liked this chapter. Demon can now talk.

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wats modest?

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/modest

*continued Previously on in the end there was a new begging demon could talk, the guild master came back and most of all Leon got a new spell. “What, it will unlock the power within my blood” “precisely” said demon and the guild master simultaneously “o.k. That still gives me the creeps talking to a dog” retorted butler quickly “oh and butler” “yes?” asked butler “its about you’re brother” “yes?” “He, he, he’s dead” “wh-wh-wh-wh-what I thought he was kept in bar gate prison by jack of blades great, great, great, great, great, great grandson Lucien” sobbed butler quietly “he was but he wouldn’t reveal you’re location or Leon’s location because he knows that you two” “erghhemm” “retorted demon “sorry you three” “thank you” said demon “are the only ones who can defeat his cruelty over Albion but you’re brother also had time enough before Lucien captured him to teleport something here it is a package” butler went to open the package a blinding flash of blue red and green swept over Albion and all four men were knocked unconscious when they awoke they found themselves not I a room with the maximum amount of people there are four but a bright people filled room with people wearing white robes carrying swords, bows and rifles the heroes guild was once again restored to its former glory the sun was shining the sparrows were chirping and both of our heroes ancestors had giant statues of them selves of Orpheus Robe , Scarlett Robe ,Whisper and Thunder in fact there was also a room which a very old woman lives in her name Theresa Robe Leon rushed to her side filling her body with power and making her look as if she were 22 again she also regained her eyes and ability to see through them she was Leon’s only Family. Except butler kind of but, he can have a lot more of his bloodline unlocked through Theresa . *To Be Continued next part getssaucyL.O.L enjoy

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Ewww!!!! Butler And Therasa????

there not related im saying that Leon is related to Theresa ,and Leon can unlock the powers of the archon bloodline within him with the help of theresa do you unnderstand goodintaag

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hey everybody the next post is going to be great and post the replies pleeeeze

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does anyone actually want to hear the next chapter or not post your thoughts

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and klavande dont go sayingmore commas it gets very annoying for us writers

Why? If you are a 'writer' you'll only be taken seriously if you have basic grammar skills.

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OMG I <3 dis gaem guys!