This my first fan fic story be as brutal as you want
here it is

I woke up and was blinded by glaring sun the waves near me were warming to my body, I woke up, The waves felt smooth as silk and my body limp and weary hanging in the cold abyss known as the sea and my last known anchor to life was this floating barrel and the life that is still in my hand and heart.  My name is Kyle, I was an adventurer, some adventurer I am, My crew is dead a feast for the seagulls, my companions no where in sight.  I guess I better start from the beginning, eh?

"Hey Kyle wake up." I felt a thump on my forehead and the throbbing pain, I went back to sleep and pretended like that it didnt hurt but felt like a gentle and natural sleep.  "KYLE WAKE UP!!" This time I felt the full force of this person waking me up, It was James, my brother, a little forceful but still a faithful brother and a little goofy.  "Dads looking for you Kyle,"Said James
"Says he has something for you to do."

"Finally." i said, I got up grouchy and a little excited, I got my clothes on and left and the blinding sunlight met my eyes and the first thing I saw when the sunlight was the same Town square with the same boulder, and the sound of the waves greeting my ears, The town looked the same, thats Trill Harbor for you, I walked on looked at the others, everyone droopy and bored, the crate carriers nearly drowsy, the houses looked grey and dull, the ocean was the only colorful thing out their, tradition states that once a boy becomes of age he goes out into the world to bring honor and the name Trill Harbor to the world, so far none have except Caningan the Charger, a great hero that was born around when The Hero of Oakvale slayed Jack of blades, I was so intrigued by it that when I was nothin but a lad the size of that stump next to that boulder.
  "Now Sunny, why didnt you tap the boulder of Heroic Resolve." I turned around and Gregor walked towards me, An old Bard whos great great great great grandfather was labled the worst bard when the Hero of Oakvale was still around he was famous for his poems and songs of him, but now he has nothing to do but honor the tradition of the Heroes and the traditions of the village."Its just a boulder, a plan boulder that Caningan touched, nothing special." I said stoutly and dully.  He just smiled and his smile was warming and he said"Just a boulder? That boulder gave us hope for this village to continue."  I smiled in return and tapped the boulder, Gregor then said"Now do you want to come in for some chowder?"
"No thank you my father wanted me for something." I said and then I turned and headed toward the direction he was in.
   "Their you are Kyle." And the figure up ahead was my dad, tall and a little intimidating, but dull and kind at heart."Its about time I told you why I brought you out here."
"You need me to work?" I said and decided to grab the nearest net and got into the boat."No son, thats not why, your 17 and your almost a man, its about time I told you something."
Before he spoke an explosion came from the town and their was a monster from the sea."WE CAN TALK LATER, BUT FOR NOW GET YOUR BROTHER AND RUN!!!" He yelled, right when he was yelling he pulled his rifle and went to the village to fight.  I ran as fast as I can to our house and when I reached the village their, I saw the monster up close, Gregor told us about it, A kraken, it was black and had bladed tentacles and was armored by a strange steel.

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And their was a figure on top of it, I couldnt see the face,It was hooded, but all I saw was his clothes, A black malicious figure on top of it and a whip in his hand and the reins in the other.  He laughed but before I could here what he said a another man pulled me and yelled"KYLE WHAT THE BLEEDING HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE, GET YOUR BROTHER AND RUN!!!" but before he could say more a tentacle came and whipped him and the blood of him trickled on my face and my mood in total horror, I did what he said and found James who was under his bed"Whats going on? Wheres dad? whats happening"?
    "No time we got to go, NOW!" I grabbed his hand and we ran, when we exited the house we saw the bodies of the fallen that were killed by the Kraken, but we had no time for a enough description of it and I dont want to repeat the horror of it.  While we were running, we ran into Gregor, He was scared out of his wits."Gregor come with us!" He understood he got up and took my hand and we ran into the forest, and I could hear the echo of the dying and the wounded.  And the horror and fear of the sight right now, and the only thing we could see now in the forest was a blackened sky and the laughing of the man on the kraken.  I couldnt believe, Trill harbor was gone and it happened all of a sudden.  "What do we do now"? Said Gregor,"Everyones dead and we have nothing."


I know this isnt the best out of them all in these forums but this is my first one, but Like I said be as brutal as you want, if people like it I can contiune.

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Heres part 3 if people are still interested

I could still smell the smoke from the village, Gregor shaking and James crying on my shoulder, I heared the wind in the forest it was whispering death and decay.  Soon about an hour I heard the howl of the Kraken and we waited for 30 more minutes and soon I said"Come on we need to pack up, we need to find something new."
  "The Kraken Tamer." Gregor said, he was silent nearly half the night. "I never thought I would see this him cause this destruction." I turned my head and James was on my shoulder and I asked"The Kraken Tamer?" This was pure news to me, all this death and I wondered."i will explain but now.......Kyle lets get back into the village I can show you in one of the books i kept." My head still staring at him and I said in my head"How can he check when his house was destroyed?", he then said"I can see the puzzlement in your eyes, but I will show you once we get back in the village." I soon nodded and we walked toward the village, we soon reached it and the sight was nightmarish, it was almost as equal as when Gregor told the story of Oakvale.
   Every house was burnt, villagers dead or dying, and some, their bodies were ripped, blood on the ground, and then when we stepped into the square some survivors came out and were looking at the horror, i didnt care for them, I cared for the body that was lying and leaning on the stone............It was my dad. I ran to him and Kyle came behind, his body was near perfect, except from the wound that ran from his chest, I know he had little time to live. He coughed and he wheezed" job boys," he coughed up blood and continued"Kyle I know I didnt have time to tell you this, but." he coughed up more and he clutched his stomach"I forgot to give you this." He pulled something wrapped in cloth, and I unwrapped ,"A guild seal." I turned around and Gregor was standing above us"I thought most were destroyed. A guild seal that means................."Thats right.............You................your brother are heroes."

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I looked for something to smack myself across the face with, A hero, they were suppose to be dead, my dad looked at me and said"They are not dead, it was a tradition in our family, your great great grandfather was one, their your great, it stopped their when your grandfather married, he knew it would come so, he kept the seal and decided when I was born whether or not I should become a hero." He took one long cough and continued.
  "Now you and your brother must step out of the shadow of depression and bring hope back to the world, every choice has a consequence, a hero has followed that moral code."He turned to Gregor"I trust-" He grunted in pain"You can teach them more about them can you." A villager cried at the sight of her husband and my brothers eyes were full of tears, and so were mine, he then turned to me and my brother and said"You boys have raised my spirits and have made me proud........." He grabbed mine and my brothers hand"Only wish your mother was here to see this.................both of you have me proud." and then with his last breath he smiled and then the life from his hands left and James was on him, Gregor, trying to pull James and comfort him, had a hard time doing it.
  I looked at the village and said"Gregor." He looked up"We need info on the Kraken Tamer."  He let go of James and said"Come." We followed him to his house, and it was literally destroyed, except for a trapdoor, that he lifted up and said"You boys coming?" I followed, James stayed at our dads body and was crying still.  We reached the bottom and in the rooms were old dusty books, dusty scrolls, dusty replicas of items back then.  This was like a scholars room.  He pulled the nearest book he had, and opened and said to himself"The Kraken Tamer..............The Kraken Tamer..........THEIR."  I came to him and looked down at the book and it was written in a strange language, probably Old Kingdom.
  "Okay Kyle, the Kraken Tamer." he took a deep breath and read"The Kraken Tamer, a man trained by the Archon himself to protect the seas from invading armies and pirates by giving him the power to control the most rare and most deadliest Kraken of all, The Bladed Kraken."  So that was what that Kraken was, I heard tales of the regular ones, but this was total news to me, I turned to him and said"why was he attacking our village?" He looked further in and said" From the uprise of Piracy in these times, he has destroyed and killed Pirates, that he became bloodthirsty, and had an urge to kill everything."
  "Is their a way to kill it?" I said hoping their was a hope, Gregor looked through the book, and turned and said"None." That was a hit that stayed with me, until suddenly Gregor said"Wait, their is, their was a page that was folded." I looked down at the book again, and Gregor read"The only way to kill the Kraken Tamer, is near impossible, but someone nearly powerful than the Archon can kill him and the true identity of what can is hidden in a Tomb deeper than the Chamber of Secrets in the Heroes guild, it is under the chamber of secrets and is the home to the most powerful texts in Albion."  I lifted myself up and said"Then its official, You, Me, and James have to leave Trill Harbor, we got to leave.................." I took a deep breath and a great challenge was ahead"We have to go to the Heroes Guild."

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Gregor had a grave look and then looked back to his book and said"Its near impossible." I turned to him when I went back up the ladder and asked"Why?"
"We dont have a ship, and the ones at Hook Coast are near impossible to get." Gregor said and then looked into my eyes and said"You know where a ship is do you?" I nodded and said"Yes."
  Gregor than got up and said"I'll gather supplies and some books." he grabbed an old bag from the corner,"You best be getting your brother." I nodded again and turned before Gregor said"Wait, I have something for you." he opened up a cupboard and gave a sword and a pistol, not in their best condition."its better than nothing, we need it just in case of Pirates, grab your brother." I went up the ladder and dawn was setting in, James was still over our dads body, he was still grim looking, I told him what Gregor told me and he said"I'll come with, that Kraken's not getting away."  I nodded and told him to wait for Gregor and lead him to the ship, I walked up the beach and looked on the horizon while i was at it,"The Mainland." I thought"All of this is new, I cant wait to see it."  I made it to the ship and the best part, it was a schooner, could hold 3 people, but could hold more.  James and Gregor came and we got into the ship, me and James pushed the ship into the ocean and we got back into the ship and set sail.  Gregor was in the cabin and had a map out and Said"We need to travel east, prolly be 4-7 day journey, got enough food and water for 6 days."  We nodded and then I said"we have extra and their is fish and me and James could still handle a net."
  Gregor smiled"Kyle, your just like your father."  I smiled in return and so did James.  James was on the bow of the ship and looking onward, he turned toward me and said"Do you think we can do this with only 3 people?" I was next to him and said"We need alot on the list, a crew, a better ship, weapons, and the knowledge to kill it."  James then went back in the cabin and turned towards me and said"Im going to bed." He went inside the cabin and the door was shut, I was at the wheel, and Trill Harbor was soon halfway a dot, but was still in sight.  When I was at the wheel, their was still one big thing that was on my mind, me and my brothers heroes, why didn't dad tell us, but then.........hes gone, and theirs still a long road ahead of us and our ship destined for the nearest port on the map I saw............Bowerstone.

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Part 6 of the Vengeance of Kyle


Its been 3 days since we been out on sea, and their were rarely any fish, and a storm was brewing on the horizon James was at the ready and Gregor was still inside studying, hasnt put down a book except to eat.  Then like a gun shot the storm started, and thunder sounding like Jack of Blades Roar.  The Waves crashing on the side of the ship and James nearly was losing his balance, but still kept working to keep this ship a float and I did my best to keep it steady to its course, soon Gregor came out and he soon helped James with the ship, and Gregor had the strength I had never seen before, even for an old man, he was strong like an ox.
  We left the storm and I could hear the echo of the thunder still behind us, that put us behind scehdule.  We were beaten and soon James said"Ill take over, you need some sleep, you haven't slept for 3 days." I thanked James for that and Gregor was on deck helping out and breathing in the sea air and he was smiling.  I entered the cabin and the table was full of old dusty scrolls and books, even though he said he was taking a few.  The Cabin smelt like rotten fish and old rum.  I found the nearest bunk and slept fast and it felt , I dreamt a dream i needed, I dreamt that my family was together, my father right beside me and my brother and us Sailing the seas, then the dream changed and a man was pointing a gun at my face and saying"The last man............hm I guess you were nothing compared to the power of-" Then a boom came and Gregor was shaking me gently saying"Wake up, we reached bowerstone."  i woke up like I did when the day the Kraken came.  And the sun was greeting my eyes and the sight was wonderful, A huge bridge was greeting us and the sounds of villagers selling food, weapons, curios and so on.  A guard greeted us and said"Morning chaps, welcome to Bowerstone." I shook his hand so did James and Gregor, the guard then said"My names Derek, and your names are?"
  "My names Kyle." I said I pointed at James"This is James." and this is Gregor."  Derek nodded"Where did you chaps come from by the looks of it your on one of the islands, don't tell me..........." Derek was thinking and he said"Hook coast?"  I shook my head and said"Close but were near their, a village called Trill Harbor."  Derek said"Never heard of that village, but must be a great village to build that ship."  He eyed it.  Gregor than said"Derek, can you tell us where the ruins of the Heroes guild is."  He shook his head and said"Im sorry, but the guild was destroyed many years ago, the only remains is gone." I drooped my head, and so did James,"But." Derek continued"Their is a person in Bower Lake that can tell you, but why in such a hurry? You could stay here for awhile, get some clothes and food, and by the looks of one of you." He looked at James"You need a weapon." I looked at him and said"is their anything we can do to earn some money?" Derek paused and then soon said"Well we have a bit of problem with bandits near Rookridge, their leader is Crawler the Decapitater."  I looked at James and Gregor both nodded, I nodded and Derek smiled and said"Great, the reward is 10,000 gold."  I questoned him and asked"A price for that bandit, what made the guards put the price that high, they terrorized the traders on the road and raided Old town."  Well, finally some action, and James was smiling and Gregor said that he would stay and research more while we kill Crawler, its a start to. 

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  I followed the note and it said the the way to Rookridge was through Old town.  I witnessed the transformation from well civilized citizens to armed and tough looking.  The buildings were not well done but could hold,  the nearest thug then grabbed me and dragged me into an alley and said"Alright you ***, give me everything you have, Nicky the Nickname needs your weapons for his for more of his thugs!" I pushed him away and said"Bring it on."  I pulled my sword out and was ready to fight, he charged at me sword waving and then I stabbed him and he fell in his own puddle of blood, a nearby guard looked at us and said"Eh take what you want from the body, at least one bloody criminal is off the street."
  Their was one thing that caught my eye only, six gold pieces, I looked at it, and then something bumped into my leg.  A young girl around thirteen was leading her brother around nine.  She then looked up at me and said"oops sorry sir." she bowed and asked"Do you have any gold or food?"  I looked at the gold and said"Here six gold pieces." she went ecstatic about it and looked at her brother and said jumping up and down"Oh Thank You, Thank you sir," She then left and then turned around and said"Your new here, my names Rose." She curtsied, she then indicated her brother"And this is Sparrow."  I then waved and he went behind her back, a little afraid.  I then said"Hey Rose, can you tell me the way to Rookridge."  She then said"You helped us, heres the way to Rookridge, just follow that gate." She pointed at the direction of it.  "Thank you." I shook her hand and then a shady guy came up to Rose and said"Oy lassie, this is the second time im going to offer, you interested in our offer still?"  Rose then turned on him and spat pure venom at him saying"Listen Arfur you creep, my answers no still."  He then pulled a gun and said"You better reconsider."  I pulled my sword and pointed at his chest and I said"She said No, back off, and where im from threatining a kid gets you killed"  He looked at my sword and then said"Your Lucky Rose, lucky this sod was here to save you, your lucky." and he left.
  Rose turned to me and said"Thank you sir, by the way I didnt catch your name." I wouldn't hurt to say my name"My names Kyle." 
"Well Kyle, I hope your journey goes smoothly............Come on Little Sparrow."  Sparrow looked at me and said"Thank You."  Rose was astounded and so was I.  But it felt to help people in need.  Seems this age needs a hero and the sooner I finish this bounty the better, Crawler...............your death is coming and I ran towards the gate and up the path to Rookridge, and the winds and trees were whishing by me.  and then bout a day later, I made it to Rookridge, and the first thing I saw was the ocean and a building on top of a cliff in the far distance and then, a trader was running up the path saying"Run, RUN, Crawlers bandits are chasing me!!" and he ran and all of a sudden two bandits then looked at me and said"Look here, new meat, time to cut em up."  I pulled my sword and charged at them, the first I jumped and cut off his neck and blood sprouted from his neck.
  The other bandit still sword drawn, said"You litte crap, thats was me best mate." and he charged and I parried the blow and stabbed my sword into his neck." and the bandits fell.  That felt great, two more bandits dead and the road a little safer.  I continued up the road and picked up the bandits rifle and went up the road.  I reached the road and saw the camp, i took cover behind the rock, and surveyed the camp, their were five bandits and one came near my position, and said"Guard duty sucks, eh Roy?"
"Yeah, why the hell does Crawler want this road patroled, I mean whats going to come up, the traders dead, and Troy and Kal might be coming back."
The first bandit closest to my position went"So when do we ransom the prisoners back."
The other one turned back and said to his partner"Once the Fairfax bloak, comes and bring us our gold, Lady Fairfax and his precious daughter are returned safely, ah well, might as well get back and drink the rest of the mead."
"You said it." and they went back to their camp.  I took my rifle and aimed it at the closes bandit their was and then I fired the shot...........I pulled my sword and thought"This gonna be one hella of a party."

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For the Faithful readers intersted in the Vengeance of Kyle. Heres part 8


The bullet hit is mark true and pure to my aim.  The bullet pierced through his head and the skull and brains went through, the other bandit looked around and pulled his rifle, he saw me and fired and took cover behind a rock.  I reloaded my bullet and waited, like the hunter and its pray, a cat and mouse game.  I waited and the bandit became foolish and stuck his head out, and shot and before he could get back behind his rock, i put a bullet through his heart and he fell.  I reloaded again, and proceeded to the next rock and I can could hear a woman yell for help and the jingling of the bars, and a bandit laughing saying"Soon, were gonna have some fun with you eh?"  He looked at the other bandit said"When did Lucien ever bag a woman this ?" they walked away and i could see the cage and soon a huge bandit with a huge axe came to the cage and he said"Well look ere, your almost ready and it seems that your daughter will recieve another look at what will happen." She then spat at him and Crawler unlocked the cage and slapped her.
  That was enough, I threw a rock at him and he yelled"WHO IN THE BLOODY HELL THREW THIS ROCK ERE!?!" he then saw me and said"Their you are you little sod."  he chased me and then I ran far away from the camp, hoping Crawler would die and I could escort them back to Bowerstone.  I reached at the crossroads near the bowerstone road and I drew my sword and he drew his axe and said"You little ***, you killed two of me men, and know your taking me away from a pleasure."  He then cleaved a hit unlike I have ever seen.  I rolled out of his way and he cleaved another, I rolled again, I needed to read his movements.  Before I could, He slashed at me and salsh that could cleave my head, and he hit a tree.  His axe was stuck, and I slashed at his arms and he howled in pain and he pulled away from his axe and he threw a punch at me and I managed to block it, his eyes full of crazed psychopathic, deathdealing. 
  I got to the tree where his axe was stuck I tried pulling, it was jammed, he pulled his gun and said"You are a lucky little scab, now your blood will run these roads, I pulled the axe right in time and I cut his arms off.  He howled in pure agony.  He got on his knees and said"Well you got lucky, what are you gonna do, take me to the bowerstone guard?" He laughed and spat while he was at it.  The fury in my head, of him trying to take control of a woman, but then justice will be dealt and I took my sword out and pointed at his throat and said in pure anger"I have a few things to do, you will come with me to bowerstone and you will be seen to justice." He looked at me with fear and said"Alright, and by the looks of it you want another thing." He read my mind and I smiled and said"Most bandits I met, their morons, but your the exception, but the other thing I want if you can understand is that you, the girl, and the woman are coming back to Bowerstone, the two will go back home, and you........you already know." He agreed and then I followed him and the bandits readied their weapons and he told them to stand down and to let the girl and the woman go.  They were shocked at the sight of Crawler his hands severed, and excited that they were free.  We then headed back to Bowerstone and Derek said"Well done, your more than I expected, you brought Lady Fairfax and his daughter and you caught Crawler and brought him alive, I believe Lucien would want to see you personally."  I followed him and I was excited for the deed, and then a villager overheard Derek and said"Well done, Kyle, Hero of Trill Harbor." and it seems word has spread through where I came from, I couldnt help smiling.

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Part 9

  Death came swift to Crawler,  A crowd was gathered at bowerstone square and he was killed by a firing squad, every bullet hitting his flesh, and more blood coming out.  I ignored the scene and James was watching he looked at me and he came towards me and said"Well Kyle, looks like you bagged alot of gold, and by the looks of it, the Mayor wants to give you the reward personally." He smiled I nodded and he followed beside me, and the transformation of middle class buildings, changed to well carved, noble, and highly rich houses and from the sight we saw a sight blooming, it was amazing,"Castle Fairfax, Lord Lucien knows you are coming, Jeeves will escort you and your brother to Lucien." Derek said and he left from their.
  I followed Lady Fairfax and her daughter and they reached the castle doors and they were open right away, an old man about his sixties, gray haired, his features wrinkled.  He was ecstatic and said"My lady and Mistress, welcome back, I trust this one must be the one that brought you back." I nodded and he said"Lucien is expecting you and he wont have a hassle of your brother being their, and My lady." He looked towards Lady Fairfax,"Your Husband, will want to see you, posthaste." Then for the first time I have heard she said"Very well, sweetie." She looked to her daughter."Go play in the garden for a while."
  "Yes, Mum." and she ran to play with her friends, Jeeves than said"Very well, follow me both of you."  We walked right into the great hall, and the halls were amazing, suits of armor aligned the sides, and the flags amazing, and the sight was still beautiful. "In his late twenties a man was sitting on his throne.  Got up and ran to his wife and he said"My sweet wife, you came back." he was crying with joy, ann Lady Fairfax said"Yes, my love, im back thanks to this man." She looked toward me, Lucien came toward me and said"Word has spread fast, the heroes returned they yelled, well." He looked me up and down and said"I see the rumors are true." He then smiled and said"By the way young man, you look a little young to be a hero, whats your name."
"My names Kyle, My lord."
"Kyle, you have brought that twit Crawler back to Bowerstone, as promised heres the gold, and I also raised it from ten thousand, to thirty." I could have smacked myself across the head with a hammer, a twenty thousand bonus."Also," I could sense more news"You have brought my wife and daughter back, and im in your debt, is their anything I can do Kyle?"
"We need a ship my lord and a crew, were hunting a Kraken that destroyed my village." I said and added quickly"My lord."
He scratched his head and said"I could give you a ship no strings attached, but the crew.........the crew you need to travel a little farther."
"Where My lord?"
"Bloodstone, those thugs can send themselves to their own death." He said and he also asked"Out of curiosity, what Kraken are you hunting?"
"The bladed Kraken, My lord."
He grabbed his heart and backed away, he landed on his throne and said"The Bladed Kraken, I thought they were extinct."
  I said"They do exsist my lord, a friend of mine that is travelling with me says that a Kraken Tamer."He took a long deep breath and said" It will be done, the ship will be finished in two weeks, by the way I could have sworn I saw another young man with you."  I looked around and this was the first time he said it and the first time I noticed, where is James?

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Part 10

  I had permission from Lord Lucien to look around the castle for my brother and the views and statues were amazing.  I went up to his bedroom and I found him stuffing something down his shirt."WHAT ARE YOU STEALING?!??!!?"  James then dropped whatever he had and saw it was a gun, a short barreled gun bronze and red on the trigger.  I then was angry"Lucien gave us hospitality and you dishonor what hes doing?"  He looked down his feet and said"Yes, Im sorry."  He then put it back"You can have it if you want." His wife was behind us staring at us.  She was beautiful, fair, and pure, James then said"Thank you." and we left the room, then she said"I never had a chance to thank you personally." she was mainly staring at me and then gave me something, clothes, the shirt was red and brown, red on the large part of the shirt, brown on the collars, the bants were blue and from what she said, they were called "jeans",  then boots that had flames and were black, and the gloves were really cool, all black and had a emblem on the elbow and from what she said they belonged to the Brodicans.
  She then turned to my brother and said"That pistol belonged to my great great great great grandfather Wicker, he prized it above all else, called it the Red Dragon, only one was made."  He bowed and we waved bye.  Then we met Lucien who said"Okay the ships will be ready in a week and thats the news."
"And the Bad news, my lord?"
He was uneasy"in about a week
James and I were puzzled"Oakfield?" We both said in unison
"Its on the rookridge road, where you found Crawler Kyle." He said.
We thanked him and we waved bye, we traveled the road and it seemed my name has traveled as and they cheered and they yelled" luck, Falcon!!"  Falcon.............Catchy name, and we soon entered Bowerstone market and their were drunks outside the Cow and Corset and they said"Look ere, twins, a midget and a lad, how bout we beat up the midget?" He asked and his friends, and they threw a bottle at me, and soon James pulled out his gun and shot it, the drunks were afraid and angry, and they left and James then said"Wow that was my first shot with a gun."  A villager laughed and said"Skillful, you should be a Wicker again."  He smiled at the name and James said"Wicker, catchy." and soon we had names, mine was Falcon and James was Wicker, we were soon known as the"Honor brothers.", and also it was catchy to.

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i havent read it all because of the poor grammar.some of it just dosent make sence. sorry.

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I know just let it die.

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Jodokonthefirst:

I know just let it die.

No, don't "Let it die" it has HUGE potential, I would suggest reviewing it and changing the grammar etc nd reposting a revised addition, in all seriousness you could be great your very faithful to you story and so you could write a superb Fan Fiction, Don't Give Up!

Ok thank you for the boost, ill keep thinking of more. The Vengeance of Kyle will continue bad grammar or not.

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jus read over it a few times after you've written it. You wont get allt he mistakes but you will get the bulk of them

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Already reading it over and looking over it.

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Part 11
Okay here we go, ill do what I can to do my best on my grammar

  We arrived at the Cow and Corset, the scene of the inn, was full of rowdy men wolf whistling barmaids, a bard playing his lute, and a man being thrown out by a big man whom I guessed was a bouncer.  We soon asked the barman if he saw an old man, he said was on the second floor second door on the right.  We climbed to the top and found the door the barman told us.  We entered and the room was full of piles of books and a mound of scrolls, and I dont know why, but a musket in the corner.  An exhausted Gregor was drooling on the table, a book that had a picture of a blackened tall tower and an old map of Albion.
  "Wake up Gregor," i said shaking him gently"we gotta go." He woke up and yawned a loud one, Gregor got up and said wearily"What happened? why did it take you so long to explore the city." I explained everything with arriving at Rookridge and to the meeting with Lord Lucien."So, we got a ship but we need a crew?" he said, I nodded my head and Gregor then picked up his musket and I soon asked"Where did you pick up a musket?" he looked at it, it was long barrel, an iron sight and gilt gold along the butt of the gun."I picked it up in the ship, I gathered everything and saw a trap door, I opened it and something wrapped in cloth and dust was in it, I took it and unwrapped it at the room." James looked a little uneasy in his eyes, him thinking"Why didn't I stay behind with Gregor and help unpack?"
  We packed up and James said"Alright and were off." Gregor then picked up the last of the supplies he looked a little happy and reminded James"Don't forget we need to go to the Heroes guild, the boat won't be ready for quite some time." We agreed and headed off across the stone bridge and saw more ships coming in, when the ship docked, a strange man with blue cracks over his skin came up and a company of guards escorted him to Lord Lucien.  "A will user"Gregor was amazed"This is incredible, I thought I would die without seeing one, but now my dream is complete." I smiled and we moved on through the gate and down to the lake.  Took us about one to two days to get there, but we arrived, A lake glistening in the sunlight and also a few boats on the river, some with lovers, some just alone with a fishing pole, we kept walking forward until we reached a camp with a wooden barricade, a man with a handlebar moustache soon said"Open the gates." the gates opened slowly and a sight that greeted us, men and women dancing, some near their campfires, children playing and listening to the story from an elderly man,
  "Okay lets split up, find the location of the Heroes guild and be on our way." we nodded and splitted up, I asked around hoping for an answer, but most was didn't know, every time that I asked and no imformation, I saddened, the last near a tree, crossed knees and leaning against it and by the looks of it, sleeping.  Her eyes clouded, a strange and mystic feeling near her, she looked like a seer. I came up and she said"I know why you are here." I stopped right in front of her, she got up and said"Your a hero arent you little falcon?" shocked and happy I said"Yes ma'am." She looked up and said"My names Theresa." i shook her hand, I then asked"Do you know where the Heroes guild is?" Theresa then pointed to a tall stone hill and then I asked"How can you see when your blind?" she smiled and said"The world doesnt need the naked eye to know where the truth is." I sorta understood what she said, but then she also said"Come, gather your brother and the old man, we'll go." I nodded and we then found Gregor and James and I soon said that Theresa knew where it was, and we soon headed off.  While walking, I heard something pulsating beneath my feet, and by the looks of it, James felt it to.  The feeling felt warm and I felt it calling me, it was weird and warming at the same time.
  What was it? What will happen if we enter? What will-."Were here." we arrived at the site, there was nothing, nothing, I was afraid that she mislead us, then she stood in the center and activated something and she soon vanished still in the center,"Don't be afraid, stand in the center, I will tell your companions what to do." I stood in the center and soon felt my self light and woozy and I fainted. I woke up and James and Gregor were amazed, Gregor was twice as ecstatic. A room full of mosaic paintings on the wall all of past events, one with a scorpion and two people fighting it and the other with the same man as in the scorpion painting holding the guild seal above his head. "Welcome to the Chamber of fate."  Theresa said standing near a pile of rubble, then I felt it, but this time the echos and the pulsating feeling felt warmer, it was close.

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  Part 12
 
  The echos and the pulsation I could hear was so close, it was filling me with memories..........memories of the heroes that die, I saw the death of the apprentices in some of the most grisly manners, the cheering of villagers burning the guild, and some of the heroes running away,"You saw the burning of the guild." It suddenly stopped, I was back to myself in the Chamber of Fate.  Theresa was near me her hand on my shoulder, I can feel the sweat, I never noticed it till I awoke.  She had pity in her voice,"A terrible event that happened, The Heroes became selfish and fearful with the lack of nothing to fight or quests, the citizens became tired of them, they went in revolt of this, and burned everything to the ground." She looked at the mosaics, took a deep breath, and said"Now, the only oldest room in the guild still stands........but is it?"  Gregor's attention broke away from the paintings, James got up and looked towards Theresa.
  "People think that the Chamber of Fate is the oldest living relic of the Heroes guild.....but it wasn't." She took something out.........The same seal I have.  She put it in the center of the big seal and suddenly, the floor shifted in the middle,"Get on." Theresa beckoned to us, we got on right on time, we went down and soon in two minutes we hit the bottom and the sight was astounding, This room was huge, bookcases that touch the sealing and a tomb at the end of the room.  Gregor nearly fainted from the sight, James looked in astonishment, Gregor grabbed the nearest scroll and started reading.  Theresa's hand glided along the bookshelf and grabbed it and she said calmly"Here it is." Gregor grabbed it and started reading, in ten minutes, Gregor soon yelled in excitement"Here it is the Bladed Kraken!!! It says that-" But my attention was focused on the tomb, the echos were tearing my head, the pulse felt warmer and warmer.
  I was close and the tomb was crafted in pure white marble, gilt gold, and the figure's depiction was in armor, one shoulder was in spikes, the other was blunted and his helm looked like a knights helm, the sword, the sword was the figure of a tear, and a holiness illuminated from it."That was the greatest hero that ever lived, my brother."  Theresa was beside me I said"Thats your brothe-?1?" She had a little tear coming from her eye"Yes, I knew him after he tossed the Sword of Aeons into the vortex, I was traveling and was spending most of my time with Palgan, a will user."
  She then turned to me and smiled a little and said"and it seems that the tomb has chosen you, put your hand on the tomb." I did, I was cautious at first, I still was, my hand soon felt the smooth marble and then something felt wonderful.  I felt power, more power than I have ever had for the first time, it felt like I could fight anything in the world. Gregor and James came and watched, both were afraid.  I took my hand off, Theresa soon said"It is done, the power that you have felt, is the power of a hero." It was wonderful, it felt like I could destroy an army with one slash, then the tomb still flashed, and Theresa soon smiled again"James...........put your hand on the tomb." James did and felt the same thing.  We felt the power, it was wonderful, we felt truly like heroes, and let me tell you it was the greatest feeling ever.

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Part 13

  Power........So much I can feel it, coursing so much through my veins.  We were vigorated, so much.  Gregor soon went back to the scrolls and continued to study, us we then looked at each other cant believing this happened to us.  Theresa soon said to us with a grin"You know have the power of the Heroes, this is a great responsibility for you and James." She turned to the tomb and nodded and continued"When you touch the tomb, not only have you become stronger and better with a weapon, but you unlocked the building block of the Hero, Will."  She held out her hand and conjured a little flame, it danced a little in her hand it then traveled around us, it felt warm and full of life, she then threw up a piece of parchment and the flame then incinerated the parchment.  We looked at our hands and felt it, life skipping through our veins and I looked on James and he had two little blue marks across his eyes, not totally blue, but a pale shade of blue.
  Theresa then explained to us that we needed to train through the ways of the will, she then introduced us to the principal will power, lightning.  I went up first, I tried the first seven times, only could create a spark, than I sent a big spark of it and destroyed a target she placed.  James soon tried and got it the first six times, he accidently set aflame part of my shirt, I put it out and felt relieved.  Gregor than jumped for joy and yelled"THE ARTIFACT, ITS IN OAKVALE!!!!" Theresa looked a little uneasy, she then shed a tear, but we didnt take notice, i dont know what happened to that village, but I felt guilty.  She then turned to us and said"now that you have the information I could teleport you to Oakfield right now, from what I heard, thats where your ship is."  We nodded and she did, we stood at the center of the guild seal, and she then teleported us now, I felt a pulling sensation and soon I landed on heavy ground, I felt a thump on my hand and thought"Never teleport again." James was throwing up and Gregor was lying on the ground saying"I'm okay, get me some wine and ill be up."  I got up first and what a sight to behold.
  Their was a peaceful tiny village all bright, the fields were blooming with a bountiful of crop to feed one family for five years.  The buildings filled with joyful people and strange hooded people.  Gregor got up second and was taking it in to, then James did the same, we walked down the road and approached an inn."the Sandgoose is still booming eh?" I turned my head and the barkeeper and a well dressed man were discussing"Aye mate." the barkeeper said.  The well dressed man said"Can you help me keep an eye out on men that Lord Lucien sent to get their ship?"  I stepped into the bar and said"You were looking for us?"  The man jumped alittle at my voice and seemed a little afraid of my apperance, his voice skitted a little while he was talking"Yes and........who might you be sir?"  I looked and they both nodded and I said"My names Kyle, I was sent by Lord Lucien or was advised by him to come here early."
  He soon eased up and said"We have some news."  I felt uneasy and thought"theirs going to be a drawback I can tell."  He continued and took a deep breath and said"The ship is ready for you to use." James and Gregor smiled, I had suspicious feeling and said"And the bad news?" He then returned to frightened state he was when he was talking to me and said"The bad news the bridge is out and............" and he was on the verge of vomitting"Shadow cultist took the suppliers when the bridge went out."  I knew it but................Shadow cultist, this is new.

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Part 14

Shadow cultist.........I heard of them, Gregor told the story of a chapel in a place called Darkwood, the location was powerful and pure aura of darkness surrounded, but I asked"The ones in Wrathmarsh?"  Lucien's servant shook his head and said"No they were destroyed about a hundred years ago or something like that."  Soon I said"We need the suppliers so we can set sail,where is the building they were taken to?"  the man said that if we leave Oakfield it is the first building in Rookridge on the right and we cant miss it.  We decided that me and James should settle the situation and we set off down the road the wind in our face and the cornfields zooming past us and the rest of the crop whistling in the breeze, it seems that the power from the chamber increased our physical prowess.  In about sixteen hours or so we reached Rookridge, and soon we saw the building the man was talking about, it was surrounded by an aura, and I felt a little woozy and James...........James looked like he was ready to kill.  I soon was about to discuss the plan with James, but he rushed forward with a sword in his hand and I chased after him, soon we reached the gates and a man in dark robes and an orange mask with a long nose said"Are you two interested in joining-" But was cut down, I was next to him and I was furious I yelled"James why did you rush him, we needed a plan not an-"  then a dark howl vibrated and flowed through the air, and soon dark figures came out of the ground and swords came out of their hands, and auras emitted from their bodies.  I pulled out mine and James was at the ready and soon they charged and they yelled a malignant howl and cultist came out from the well and started chanting.  I didnt notice the courtyard that well..........but seems like shadows came from everywhere and soon the everywhere.  This is gonna be one hell of a fight.

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Part 15

The howl of the shadows were fearful, their eyes full of and full of malice.  Me and James took out our swords and began, the first shadow leapt at me and slice it in half and its remains vanished into thin air.  Soon another leapt at James, he stabbed one and shot two in the process, the description of the battle could fill a book, but i would rather cut it to the chase.  The last remaining shadows, were kept alive by the cultist, James aimed his gun at the one at the right and mine at the center, they fled the scene and into the well, and finally I could take a long look at the place, full of bodies hanging, the smell of death and malevolence was in the air, a poison to the innocent.  We soon entered the well and about five or ten minutes, we reached the bottom and soon I said"Hide." and we ducked behind the stairwell.  "My dear brother what are we to do  with the fresh batch of prisoners?" A cultist voice was echoing down the corridor,  I put my finger to my mouth and we moved slowly down and soon caught sight of another cultist and what looked like an elite member of the temple,"That is up to our Master, but for know the prisoners are kept safe in the cells, until the time comes, blood will run."  They both laughed, both and hollow, we then nodded and James said"I'll take the left side you take the right side."  I headed right posthaste, one of the rooms was a storeroom nothing special, except the supplies that were being sent.  I checked the next room and I saw a cultist facing a bunch of prisoners preaching to them in an tounge, I crept up to him got my sword out and said"You got ten seconds to let these prisoners go and to tell me where you hid Lord Luciens suppliers."  He soon let the prisoners go, shocked to be free and they ran like dogs with their tails down.  I put the sword to his neck and said with ferocity"Where are the suppliers?"  He laughed and said"You will never find them, the shadows will have a feast and blood will run across these walls and their entrails hanging."  I then slitted his throat and watched him fall, we met in the main chamber and met James and said"This is gonna take forever, any luck?" I shook my head and he soon leaned on a switch to his left and said"Dang it."  and soon the lever switched and the wheel which was behind us moved, unveiling a dark passage, and which there were horrid screams and then a blood chilling laugh, something I could never get out of my head.

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