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  •  09-03-2009, 17:00 3399539

    • Marcasite is online. Last active: 11-23-2009, 15:58 Marcasite
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    Sorrow, Vengeance, and Tears

    First off, let me say thank you to those of you who followed my last couple of fan fics on this site.  I wouldn't have kept writing them without you.  Also, I feel compelled to warn the readers that this is a more adult oriented tale.

    This story takes place after Sorrow's Lament.

    To new readers, welcome.  To old friends, welcome back.

    Ciao for now,

    ~Marcasite


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  09-03-2009, 17:04 3399541 in reply to 3399539

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    Prologue

    King Sabre ascended the throne of Albion on the bones of his friends and fellow Guildsmen.  Within the first year of his reign, only Blade, loyal and without scruple, and Briar Rose, the new Master of the Guild, remained.  Sparrowhawke and Whisper vanished on the road between the Necropolis and Snowspire, believed dead.  Scarlet Rose and her son died in the purge, the night of bloodshed that set the tone for Sabre's rule.  The Sorrowful Blade died that night, pulled to pieces by the dogs sent to chase her down, or so the stories go.

     

    Of the once mighty Guild, naught but memories remain...


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  09-03-2009, 17:09 3399543 in reply to 3399541

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    Shades of the Past

    In the distance, the roofs of Bowerstone reflected the sunlight and, beyond the city, the ocean gleamed almost silver.  Between the castle and the city, the land stretched, green and lush, with a few merchant carts visile on the winding road.  The songs of the birds filled the air and a fiddler played in the courtyard below, a traveling minstrel entertaining the servants while they worked.  Guards in black coats, Sabre's silver seal gleaming on their chests, patrolled the walls, pikes reflecting the light in blinding flashes.  A column of horsemen rode through the gates, armor jingling.  At their head, Blade wore full plate mail, black, and the Demon visaged helm he had recovered from the Necropolis hid his face.

    But she would know him no matter what he wore.

    From her bedroom window, Queen Elvira watched Blade pause to confer with his Captains, directing him with imperious dignity, his red cloak catching the cold winter breeze and snapping out.  Sabre's right hand, General of the Armies of Albion, Blade dismounted and handed the reigns to the stableboy, removing his helm as he strode across the inner courtyard.  Sabre had sent him to Knothole Glade, to harry the Reavers back into the sea.  The trophies hanging from his saddle proclaimed his victory, the heads of the Reaver Captains, hanging by their braids and beards.

     

    Blade was slim and far too pretty.  Clear and unusually pale blue eyes, features that were finely cast but a shade soft, ink black hair, and lightly tanned skin, he had been known as Mouse in his youth in the Guild but had taken the moniker of Blade.  By all accounts, he was the deadliest swordsman alive, the first to master the art of two swords since Twinblade.  Unlike Twinblade, Blade had also turned his hand to magic.

     

    She clutched her heavy robes more tightly around herself.  Of all of Sabre's servants, Blade unnerved her.  The most powerful member of the Guild to survive Sabre's purge, Blade's power rivaled that of her husband.  Despite the threat he represented, her entreaties to have Blade killed always fell on deaf ears and her last such endeavor had ended badly for her.  Sabre had told Blade of her demands at the dinner table, laughing as he told Blade of her fears, her insistence that Blade would betray him.  They had laughed together, Blade and Sabre, but Blade's pale blue eyes burned through her when he turned his gaze upon her.  Sabre's words had sent daggers of ice through her spine.

    "The oaths that bind Blade to me and me to him are more tightly woven than the bonds that bind me to you," he had said, dangerous smile and darkly delighted eyes.  "Any pretty little wench can be queen.  Only Blade can enforce my will."

    And to prove his words, Sabre had given her to Blade for a night.  She shivered as she remembered the humiliation and indignity of that night, that endless and degrading night.

     

    She had everything she had ever dreamt of: she was Queen of Albion, her husband was powerful and ruthless, eternal youth through the sacrifices at the Alter of Skorm that Sabre and Blade performed, sending innocents to the torments so they would stay young.  She had everything she ever wanted yet the lowest servant girl was happier, the most desperate of merchant wives knew more joy.

     

    "Is that Blade?"

     

    Her husband's voice intruded on her moment of self-pity.  She turned and saw him standing in the doorway to her private chambers.  He was dressed for Court, elegant yet deadly, his crown gleaming, his eyes burning.  Lust radiated from him as he approached and she let the curtains fall closed, lest he display her to the entire courtyard again.  She raised her chin and gazed down her straight nose, petulant mouth frowning.  His eyes moved down her graceful neck and came to rest on her bountiful breasts.

     

    "It is," she said, holding herself still as his hands roamed over her bodice.  "He brought the heads of the Reaver Captains."

     

    "I knew he would.  He has never failed me."

     

    She trembled as his hands unlaced the bodice and pulled it open, spilling her breasts free.  He thumbed her nipples, twisting and tweaking them.  "He will seek your approval, loyal dog that he is," she said.  "You should go to him."

     

    He pushed her robe down her arms, letting it puddle on the floor around her feet.  "I am king," he said.  "Blade will come to me."

     

    Sabre had been a beautiful youth, with jet black hair, lupine blue eyes, and features that would have been feminine if not for the manner in which he carried himself.  He had grown into a devastatingly handsome man, sharp featured and possessed of a swaggering masculinity that made her weak, even as he terrified her.  She wanted to resist, wanted to deny him, but she went meekly to the bed and tried to swallow her shame when Blade barged in, bold as he pleased.

     

    "I drove the reavers back into the sea," Blade said, his eyes on her.

     

    She flushed beneath his gaze, naked and helpless.

     

    "I knew you would," Sabre said languidly, toying with her hair.

     

    She turned her body away from Blade, hiding her breasts from him.

     

    "The Mayor of Bowerstone is coming to beg for coin," Blade said.  "To rebuild his walls and replace the guards."

     

    Blade liked to hear people beg, had made her beg.

     

    "And the people... are they clamoring for me," Sabre asked.  "Have they turned against him yet?"

     

    He ran his hand down her shoulder and turned her to face him, giving Blade a view of her as well. 

     

    "If you were to send troops and your own mayor, they would open their gates and welcome them in."  Blade made no effort to disguise the way he stared at her.  "Give them another season of raids, fire, and rape and they'll hang the mayor for you."

     

    Blade's eyes were on her when he said rape and she had to bite her lower lip to keep silent, trembling beneath his gaze.

     

    "Then we shall give them another season."  Sabre's deft hands guided her, firm and unyielding.

     

    She closed her eyes and braced herself but Sabre sent Blade away, laughing softly at her fear.  She felt the bed shift as he rose and dared to open her eyes.  He stood at the window, curtains open, gazing out.  She wished she had the courage to shove him through the glass.  He glanced over his shoulder at her, lupine blue eyes shining with dark amusement.  He looked away but she stayed on the bed, trembling and clutching the blankets to her, hiding beneath them.

     

    "You've given me three fine children," Sabre said.

     

    His words were warm but she did not fool her.

     

    "Two daughters and a son," he continued.

     

    She heard him walk back to the bed.  She did not look up.  She knew what he wanted and that it would be easier if she gave him what he craved before he took it by force.  She let the blankets fall and slithered onto her belly, raising her hips and reaching back with both hands to present herself to him.

     

    She had everything she wanted but wished she had never been born.

     

     

     

    Two of the apprentices were banging their swords together in the sallé, displaying the rudiments of hack and slash.  Three parts enthusiasm, one part skill, they were pale shadows of the Guild Warriors of the past, not even a Sorrowful Blade and Adelina had been at the low end of the skillset.  She sighed and leaned on the wooden rail, calling out pointers and encouragement.

     

    In the last few years, she had encountered a few individuals that might have restored the Guild to its old power and prestige but not one of them had been interested.

     

    In Oakvale, she had encountered a brother and a sister that showed great skill and promise, Garrison and Cameron Cage.  In Bowerstone, she had encountered two boys, cousins or brothers or something else, they would not say, that had filled her with hope and then crushed that hope when they refused to follow her.  They would not even give her their names.

     

    This is what the Guild has come to.  I should be ashamed.

     

    Some days, she lied to herself and swore to her reflection that nothing she did would have changed the inevitable.  Sabre was King.  Bow to his will or die.  Some days, she faced the hard truth that she should have fought beside Scarlet Rose, her son, and his witch.  She should have gone to Snowspire with Sparrowhawke and Whisper.  She should have done something beyond sitting in the castle and training children into mere shadows of those that had come before.

     

    So many regrets and nothing to be done about any of them.

     

    She heard the gaggle of courtiers and the false laughter of the parasites that clung to the Prince and the Princesses.  Straightening and ordering her apprentices to stop, she turned and bowed to the approaching royals.

     

    Prince Talon, heir and eldest of the Royal Brood, wore black leathers and one of his father's swords, an obsidian longsword with two augmentations melded into it, fire and lightning.  He had his father's features, the haughty and handsome cast to his features and the ink black hair.  His eyes were closer to his mother's clear bluish gray than his father's dark blue.  Tall and strong, he had been trained by his father and by Blade. 

     

    Princess Eliana and Princess Liara were twins, three years younger than Prince Talon.  They had their father's dark coloring, raven hair and dark blue eyes.  Their forms were pleasant, not too full or soft like their mother but with womanly curves and rounded breasts.  They wore quartered skirts with leather pants beneath, boots, and bodices, all in shades of black and red.

     

    "G o o d [Good] morning," Briar Rose said, meeting their eyes boldly.  "It is an honor to stand before you."

     

    The three royals were surrounded by the sons and daughters of wealthy merchants, mayors, and of the new aristocracy.  Simpering sycophants and desperate to earn favor, they looked down their noses at her.  She placidly returned their looks, her eyes depthless as the sea and twice as mysterious.  She took comfort in the knowledge that she could slay them all with hardly an effort and ignored their disdainful gazes.

     

    "Are any of your apprentices worthy of the Royal Guard," Prince Talon asked.

     

    Briar Rose shrugged.  "It is too early to tell," she said.  "Some have shown promise but it will be years before any are ready for the oaths or the Seal."

     

    Prince Talon leaned against the rail, his back to the apprentices, eyes too sharp and knowing.  "In the last ten years, none of your apprentices have earned the Seal."

     

    "Guild Warriors are rare," she countered.  "If your father wanted another generation, he should have left more of them alive to breed."

     

    Shocked silence descended over the flock of colorful sycophants and the two Princesses advanced a step.  They had been trained, just as Talon had, and Briar Rose wondered if the three of them would attempt to kill her today but Talon laughed.  The sycophants stared at him but his sisters retreated that same step and the violence hanging over them dissipated.

     

    "I suppose he should have.  I've heard many tales about Whisper and the Sorrowful Blade.  By all accounts, both were inspirational beauties and quite skilled on their knees."  He gave her an altogether uncomfortable look, speculative, undressing her with his gaze alone.  "But those tales do not mention you, Briar Rose."

     

    "Your father never had the pleasure of me," she said.

     

    Something in his eyes told her that he meant to and that thought set her heart hammering against her ribs but not with desire.  She had none for this prince nor his father.

     

    "Pity that," he said.  "You of all people should know how important it is to breed.  Perhaps you should have whelped your own brats to bolster the Guild numbers."

     

    The silence stretched but the Prince chose to end the moment, turning and striding away, taking his sisters and their flock of courtiers with them.  Turning back to her apprentices, Briar Rose shivered despite the heat of the day.

     

    So many regrets...

     

     

     

    Adelina the Sorrowful Blade carried so many regrets.

     

    She should never have crowned Sabre.  She should never have allowed Sparrowhawke and Whisper to travel on Sabre's business to Snowspire.  She should never have trusted her mother's safety, her brother's safety, to Sabre.  She should have killed him when he slumbered beside her, all those times Sabre had slept so peacefully after taking her.  But she did not regret bearing his child.

     

    There was no doubt that Hawke was Sabre's son.

     

    Hawke had his father's eyes in a face that was more hers than Sabre.  She watched the children she had taken in, the heirs of the bloodlines that carried the power of the Guild:  Garrison and Cameron Cage, Twinblade's children by one of the female bandits that had fought for him; Sparrow, the younger sister of Raven, who had been her brother's Guild Trained sorceress; Kestrel, her brother, fathered in rape by the Bloodraven; and her darling son, Hawke.

     

    In the days before Sabre's reign, she had helped shake Albion with four trusted friends, five after Blade had joined them.  In the days to come, she would lead and guide these five against Sabre.  Her lament carved into his bones, his crown taken, his dreams burned to ash, she would see Sabre dead.

     

    No matter the cost.

     

    She turned away from the window and looked around the house.  It had seen better days but it was hers now.  It had cost a fortune but she counted every coin as well spent.  On the bannister, she traced her name and the names of her friends, even Sabre's, remembering the day they had carved them there.  She walked up the stairs and into the Master Bedroom, remembering the wild carnality that had filled the chamber.

     

    I plot your death in the house you once owned, old friend.  I dream your death in the bed we all shared, old lover.  I train my fighters with all the tricks you ever showed me, snake.  You'll get what we served Maze.  You'll get what I gave the Bloodraven.

     

    She reached beneath the bed and closed her hand around the hild of the Betrayer's Blade.  She had thrown fortunes into the fountains at the Temple of Avo, buying blessings, buying youth, buying time.  Still young, still strong, she unsheathed the blade.

     

    I'll give you fire and blood.

     

    "Mistress?"

     

    She turned and looked at the young woman standing in the door behind her.  "What is it, Sparrow?"

     

    Sparrow wore her blonde hair in braids and her blue eyes were the color of the deep sea before a storm.  A gold stud pierced her upper lip near the right corner and small gold hoops pierced both her ears.  "We located the cellar entrance."

     

    "G o o d [Good]."

     

    Adelina followed the girl into the back of the house and into the cluster of trees.  The boys had been digging and she looked down at the rotted boards.  At her nod, the boys pried them up, revealing the stone steps, covered in moss, that led down to the secret cellar her friends had dug out, back before things went sour, before she knew Maze had betrayed her.  She led the way down and shivered as the webs broke across her face.  Following her down the steps, Hawke raised the lantern higher and illuminated the small room.

     

    Dank and musty, rank air tickling her nose with rot and decay, she allowed herself a smile.  The weapons had been too powerful to risk falling into the wrong hands, too powerful for Sabre to risk giving them to any of his followers, too powerful to destroy.  So they were hidden away, kept safe for any future need.

     

    Did you think I did not know?  Did you think no one whispered about it to me in the dark?  Did you think that the secrets shared with Thorn and Sparrowhawke did not find their way to me?

     

    She opened the first chest and lifted the first leather wrapped bundle from its depths.  Unwrapping it slowly, she revealed the Dollmaster's Mace.  Her breath caught in her throat and she laid it back in the chest, on the other leather wrapped weapons.

     

    "Take them upstairs," she said softly.  "Hide them in the house and seal up the cellar."

     

    She rose to her feet and stepped on a spider that scuttled past her foot.  None of the weapons were a match for Avo's Tear and she did not know a sorcerer powerful enough to summon the Sword of Aeons but they would be enough.  She had known Sabre since he was a boy, had studied him as a man, and knew better than to challenge him directly.  She had waited far too long for her revenge to rush it at the last moment.

     

    He needed to suffer.

     

     

     

    Sabre gazed down at the Map Table.

     

    No quest cards littered its surface, no Guild Warriors clamored around it.  He ran his hands over the contoured surface of the table, tracing the mountains of Knothole Glade and tracing the path to the Arena with his fingertip.  The apprentices no longer lived in the castle, relegated to barracks built against the west wall of the keep.  Briar Rose lived in the Tower of Maze, where he could keep an eye on her at all times.  Sometimes, he thought he saw the faces of those long dead on the guards that patrolled his grounds, Sparrowhawke and Thorn for the most part, sometimes the Bloodraven.

     

    The Seer tells me that an old friend is coming to kill me.

     

    He traced the contours of the path through the Darkwood.

     

    She tells me that my sins will send me to rot in my grave.

     

    He touched the small town on the cliffs above Oakvale, Twinblade's Dell.

     

    But I've killed all my old friends and she told me it wasn't Blade.

     

    He turned away from the table when the doors opened and a dozen guards marched three dozen slaves into the castle.  He smiled as he moved down the line, gazing at the pretty girls that trembled in their chains.  Here was a Whisper, and there was a Sorrowful Blade.

     

    "Wash them and take them to my chambers," he commanded.

     

    Then he turned his attention back to the Map Table, troubled by the Seer's words and trying to remember anyone who might have survived his purge.


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  09-03-2009, 19:49 3399608 in reply to 3399543

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    Woo! New story! This just made my day honestly. I've been waiting for something new to come from you.Big Smile [:D]

    I didn't see anything that bothers me, which is always G o o d [Good]. I can see what you mean by it being more adult though. It's going to be an interesting tale and I can't wait to see what comes out of it.

    Keep up the G o o d [Good] work!Up [:up:]
  •  09-04-2009, 16:28 3399964 in reply to 3399543

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    I have to say I do like this story, especially because Briar Rose is in it. I think she's my favourite Hero!
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  •  09-04-2009, 21:01 3400106 in reply to 3399964

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    You're back! Big Smile [:D] I've missed your work.Smily [:)]
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  •  09-04-2009, 22:50 3400142 in reply to 3400106

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    Glad you're back. Gonna reread the other story tomorrow.

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  •  09-05-2009, 2:17 3400205 in reply to 3400142

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    G o o d [Good] to know you're back in business, I look forward to any additions.
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  •  09-07-2009, 0:38 3400942 in reply to 3400205

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    Marcasite is back...sweet. This story looks to be better then the first.

    Up [:up:] Now I can obsessively check this story for updates like I did the last. Hope all stays well during the writing of this story. 


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  •  09-08-2009, 1:50 3401426 in reply to 3400942

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    nice to see you back, your fans have been anxiously awaiting your return....
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  •  09-09-2009, 0:53 3401736 in reply to 3401426

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    Another great story, as usual. Im looking forward to this one.
  •  09-09-2009, 16:28 3401899 in reply to 3401736

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    Thank you for the kind words, everyone.  It feels great to be back and I'm sorry I stayed away for so long.  I am hard at work on Chapter 2.  I hope to have it up in a few days.

    Ciao for now.

    ~Marcasite


    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  09-13-2009, 17:54 3403405 in reply to 3401899

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    Gazing Into Darkness

    Garrison Cage stood on the balcony and looked out into the slums of Bowerstone.

    This is where it all began, a pack of Guild Brothers and Sisters planning great things only to be betrayed by one of their own.  He looked over his shoulder into the bedroom he shared with the others.  Is anyone in our group false?  We are united by vengeance and such alliances are fragile at best.

    There were five of them, six counting the Sorrowful Blade.  He did not want to believe that any of them could prove false but none of his friends had ever believed Sabre would use, abuse, and betray them.  Kestrel and Hawke, bound by blood to the Sorrowful Blade, himself and his sister, Cameron, owing the Sorrowful Blade their loyalty, as their father had been loyal to her brother, and Sparrow, seeking vengeance for the murder of her elder sister.

    Dirty children ran through the narrow alleyways, playing and fighting and living in the filth they would die in.  Guards, surly and disinterested, patrolled in packs, just as bad as the predators that lived in the slums.  Young women hid from them, boys cleared the narrow roads, and the guards swaggered through the slums like Lords.  He let his eyes turn to a pack of older boys, the head bullies in one of the local gangs, watching as they collected coins, trinkets, and food from the younger children that worked for them.

    I know why we live here.  You keep us angry and hungry for revenge.  You shove the suffering masses into our faces and all but shout, "SEE WHAT HE HAS DONE!", making sure we never forget that Sabre has to die.

    He watched as the bully-boys smacked one of the smaller boys around, a dark boy with his hair in tight braids.  He listened to the shouts and the curses, the threats that the boy would learn to work harder.  A hard punch and the boy fell into the mud, bleeding from the mouth and nose.  The older boys dragged him into the shell of a house across the narrow street from Garrison.  His hand tightened on the hilt of his longsword.

    "What are you doing?"

    He turned and released the hilt, surprised to see the Sorrowful Blade just behind him.  "I was going to help that boy."

    The Sorrowful Blade stepped onto the balcony with him and gazed down, watching impassively as the older boys dragged the smaller and younger boy into the abandoned house.  Her blue eyes were sad, hard, but without mercy.

    "We cannot reveal ourselves.  Word will spread."  She turned away.

    "I'll kill all of the bully boys," he said.

    "And will you take over the gang?  Will you be the pimp that makes sure the girls work, the master thief to keep the younger boys stealing, the heavy hand to beat them into obedience?"  She looked at him, her eyes still sad and hard and without mercy.  "They'll be absorbed into another gang and you'll have wasted your efforts and revealed us to the guard for nothing."

    "I hate it," he said suddenly.  "I hate not doing anything to help these people."

    "G o o d [Good]."  She closed the meager distance between them, looking up into his face.  "Hold onto that hate, use it, nurture it, and keep it close until the day comes when we strike against Sabre."

    "How will that help these people?"

    She looked past him and watched the children cower in the alley while one of their own was brutalized by their 'protectors'.  "When I am Queen, we'll change everything."

    He nodded sharply and stepped back into the house.  She closed the door to the balcony and the muffled screams were silenced but it didn't help.  Garrison knew that the boy was still screaming.  Muscles tight, anger simmering beneath his skin, he followed the Sorrowful Blade down into the living room.  They were alone in the house.

    "Where are the others?"

    "I tasked them," she said.  "They will return before nightfall."

    "Do you have a task for me?"

    "Yes.  Kill a guard and dispose of his body.  Return with his armor and uniform."

    Garrison nodded and strode out the door, concealing his swords beneath a tattered and threadbare cloak.



    Sabre descended into the dungeons beneath the castle, leaving his guards behind.

    Sweat and fear, offal and blood, the dungeons stank but he ignored the stench as he walked between the cells.  Bargate Prison held the criminals, the murderers and thieves that his guards brought before him, but the dungeons beneath his castle held his very special prisoners.  The bards that composed songs that impugned his honor, the Lords that disobeyed his commands, anyone who displeased him too badly ended up in this little slice of hell.

    Hot irons smoked in the braziers and he nodded approvingly as a bard's tongue was cut out; the fool had dared to sing an outlawed tune in a Bowerstone tavern.  Grabbing a torch from the wall, he descended to the next level and approached the figure in the only cell.

    "G o o d [Good] morning," he said softly.

    The young woman looked at him, clear gray eyes bereft of hope.  Her black hair was tangled and her skin was pale from lack of sun.  Her body was well formed though, smooth legs and narrow waist, rounded and slightly upturned breasts.  He approached her bars and she shrank back from him.  He smiled and she hid her face.

    "What have you seen, Raven?"

    Named for her mother, she was the daughter of the Sorceress Raven and the Seer King of Bandits.  She had inherited her mother's beauty and her father's power, combined with power inherent in Guild Bloodlines from both sides.  Powerful visions but she lacked the skill and training to transcend from Seer to Prophet.

    "I won't ask a second time."

    She shivered in the corner and hid her face.  "I have seen people plotting your death."

    "You've already told me that," he snapped.  "Who?"

    "I don't know their names," she whispered.

    "What do they look like?"

    "I can't see them clearly," she whimpered.

    "Then what G o o d [Good] are you?"

    She sobbed.  "You know they're plotting."

    "Everyone plots," he said.  "I'm more despised than Skorm.  You've told me nothing."

    He opened the door and stepped into the cell.  She cowered as he approached and he grabbed her by the hair, yanking her to her knees and forcing her to look up at him.  She cried out but did not fight.

    "If you do not give me more, I'll burn out your eyes.  It did wonders for your father's visions."

    "No!  Please!"  She did not struggle.  "Don't hurt me!"

    "I don't want to," he said.  "Try harder."

    He released her and stepped back, letting her collapse and sob into the filthy rushes.  He sneered down at the back of her head and strode out of the cell, slamming the door behind him.  He paused at the base of the stairs and looked back at her.

    "Have your visions showed you what will happen to you tonight?"

    She nodded miserably.

    "G o o d [Good]."  He strode up into the dungeons and grabbed a torturer by the arm.  "Have her bathed and brought to my chambers."



    Garrison lowered the body into the bay.

    A dark and moonless night aided his assassination and the disposal but he moved slowly and carefully, not letting the body drop to splash loudly.  The tide would take it out and bring it back but by the time he washed up on the beach, the Guard would be a bloated ruin and that was only if the sharks didn't devour him.  Slinging the bag of clothes and armor over his shoulder, he contorted himself into a cripple's hunch and lurched back up the beach, moaning softly with each dragging step.  The guards ignored him but a gang of youths barred his path as he entered the slums.

    "You can't come this way, old man," one of the bullies taunted.  "Not unless you-"

    The Gods would never know what he would have had to do.  He swung the bag around hard, driving the bully down into the mud unconscious.  Forty pounds of steel across the head had that effect on most people.  Throwing back the cloak to free his sword arm, he bared three feet of steel and froze the rest of the bullies in their cowardly tracks.  These were not the same boys that infuriated him earlier, not the same gang, but he cut them down just the same, their screams turning to gurgles.  One of the boys ran and he almost called for magic but the memory of the Sorrowful Blade's eyes stopped him.  He threw a knife, the blade spinning through the darkness.  It sank to the hilt in the running boy's back.

    He silenced the boy's screams with his sword and yanked the knife out of his back.  No guards approached, no cries broke the sudden silence.  Another night in the slums, another few bastards dying, no one cared.  It sickened him as he wiped his blades clean on the boy's tunic and once again resumed the posture and gait of a crippled grandfather.  Eyes followed him from the darkness but the thieves knew better than to test him and the young whores feared him too greatly to offer their immature charms.

    He found the Sorrowful Blade waiting for him when he stepped into the house.

    "Let me see it."

    He opened the bag and showed her the armor and the uniform.  She examined the cloth, nodding to herself.

    "G o o d [Good], you didn't get any blood on this.  Wash it tonight and hang it to dry in the back room.  Scour the armor until it gleams."  Her blue eyes reflected the light of the meager fire burning in the hearth.  "Tomorrow you'll be leaving with the Prince and the Princesses."

    "Why would they take me with them?"

    Her smile held no mirth or warmth.  "Because you're going to save their lives."



    Prince Talon sat easily in the saddle, gazing disdainfully at the filthy peasants that lined the street as he rode towards North Bowerstone.  The Royal procession stretched behind him, the two Princesses followed by their Guards, the young Noblemen and Noblewomen riding behind.  It was a tedious duty, visiting Bowerstone and pretending to enjoy the hospitality of the Lord Mayor and his family, allowing the filthy peasants to look upon them as they rode through town, giving honor to the simpering sycophant that had been named Mayor after his father assumed the throne of Albion.

    He hid his sneer behind an impassive mask and waved at the crowds, making his horse prance.

    He heard a few brazen bastards calling for mercy, disgusting wenches begging for bread as he rode past.

    “I’m not a bloody baker,” he muttered under his breath.

    One of the twins, Eliana, laughed and urged her horse forward, coming to ride beside him.  “Perhaps if they get too close, you can be the butcher.”

    The other one, Liara, rode up on the opposite side.  “Or maybe we can invite them all to the feast and let them watch us eat so they can amuse us with their begging for table scraps.”

    He chuckled under his breath and let his eyes roam over the crowds, looking at the guardsmen that kept the press of filthy peasants back and beyond, at the vermin themselves.  He saw a few young ladies that might have been suitable, if they were scoured and perfumed.  His lips twisted into a sneer and he banished the thought immediately.  He was a Prince and the Heir to the Throne.  He would not be planting his seed in the gutters.  He would only grace worthy gardens.

    “Give us bread, you ***!”

    He twisted in the saddle, his hand grasping the hilt of his sword.  “Who said that?!”

    A thrown stone glanced off his temple and he jerked back, accidentally yanking on the reins.  His horse reared and he was thrown from the saddle.  His horse panicked and bolted.  The crowds surged forward and his sisters tried to keep close, their horses stomping and rearing on either side of him.  He struggled to his feet, his cloak and his sword tangled with his legs.  Another stone bounced off his shoulder and he almost fell but a hard hand closed around his upper arm, keeping him on his feet.

    “Up!”

    He was pushed onto a waiting horse and he glanced down, looking into the emerald green eyes of the guard that had dismounted to assist him.  Dressed in the dark grays of a Bowerstone Guardsman, the young guard slapped the horse and the rump and Talon grabbed at the reins as it bolted forward.  His entourage thundered after him and he swore vengeance, cursing venomously as he rode through the gates into North Bowerstone.

    Behind him, the mob surged but the heavy gates closed and held as the mob struggled to break through into the rich quarter of the city.  He dismounted and tore off his soiled cloak, dropping it as he strode angrily towards the gates.

    “Archers to the walls,” he roared.  “Drive those filthy beggars back into their holes!”

    The Lord Mayor rushed to his side, wringing his plump hands, fat face beet red.  “Your Highness, are you alright?”

    Talon cracked the back of his hand across the man’s mouth.  The fat little mayor crumbled to the cobblestones.  “Alright?!  That mob nearly had me!  If not for that guard…”

    The heavy twang of dozens of crossbows and the screams of the vermin on the other side of the gate stole the rest of his words.  He ignored his sisters and the other nobles as they dismounted.  He heard cries from his group but ignored them until one of the young nobleman approached, wide-eyed and frantic.  He grabbed Talon by the arms.

    “Avo’s grace!  Jena fell from her horse!  She’s still out there!”

    Talon shook him off.  “The guards will see to her safety,” he snarled.  “Get off of me!”

    He knocked the nobleman to the ground and ordered the archers to fire again.  He turned to the Captain of his personal guard.

    “Bring the guard to me, the one that saved my life.”

    Furious, he stepped over the stunned mayor and strode up the staircase of the Gray Manor, the home in which he had been born.  His mood foul, he pinned the Lady of the Manor with a basilisk glare.

    “A bath, woman!  And be quick about it!”

    He allowed her to lead him into the elegantly appointed chamber and removed his soiled clothes, casting them aside.  He sank into the tub while the Lady herself poured the buckets of hot water over him and her daughters scrubbed the filth from his body.  Brooding, he plotted his vengeance and considered the reward for the guard that had pulled him out of the muck.



    Adelina the Sorrowful Blade stood in the gloom of the living room, gazing out the window as guards dragged people screaming from their homes.  The local bully boys wasted no time turning on each other for the promise of gold.  The Prince proclaimed a reward for the names of the ringleaders of the day’s little uprising and names were shouted from every corner and window.  Petty jealousies and feuds boiled into pointed fingers and accusations.  Dozens of people were chained together and led towards Hangman’s Hill and the King’s Executioner; it was a pity that most of them were innocent.

    I might have regretted the girl but she was no innocent.


    Lady Jena of Oakvale was a terror, accusing men of violating her with their eyes and having the offending orbs burnt from their heads.  Oakvale teemed with the maimed and the blinded, it was poetic justice that she had surrendered her questionable virtue to a mob in a tanners shop.  There was no telling how many men had ridden her before the guards rescued her but if the Gods were G o o d [Good] it was an equal number to those that had suffered her accusations and tortures.

    “We had them in our grasp,” Hawke said softly.  “Why did we let them live?”

    She turned and looked at him.  “If we killed them today, we’d never get close to Sabre.  Now we have Garrison on the inside.  When the time of vengeance finally comes, I’ll have pieces all over the board.”  She smiled.  “Sabre will know why he’s dying and who wields the blade.”

    Hawke joined her at the window and she wrapped her arm around his waist, leaning her head against his shoulder.  He draped an arm over her shoulders and held her close.  For just a moment, Adelina allowed herself to pretend that they were a normal family, that she was a G o o d [Good] mother and he was a G o o d [Good] son, but only for a moment.

    She was a horrible mother because she had forged her son into a weapon against his own father.  She would burn for it, she knew that, but it did not sway her in the slightest.  The end had been written the day Sabre betrayed her.

    There was no going back now.

    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  09-13-2009, 23:56 3403470 in reply to 3403405

    • dawgz525 is not online. Last active: 11-22-2009, 20:00 dawgz525
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    Re: Gazing Into Darkness

    Amazing update as usual...this story is shaping up to be better then its predecessor. (which is no small task IMO)


    I'd 5 star it again if I could. I hope all stays well. Peace
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  •  09-14-2009, 0:55 3403474 in reply to 3403470

    Re: Gazing Into Darkness

    I have to agree with Dawgz here, this thing is awesome!


    1 year on the forums and counting! Get it? Counting? Oh never mind...
  •  09-14-2009, 23:14 3403867 in reply to 3403474

    Re: Gazing Into Darkness

    Another awesome addition.
  •  09-28-2009, 15:17 3407785 in reply to 3403867

    Re: Gazing Into Darkness

    I spent a few days reading your first story and then this and I'm pretty anxious for the next update.
  •  10-02-2009, 14:33 3409021 in reply to 3407785

    Re: Gazing Into Darkness

    Great story to follow your last one. I can't wait to see how everything plays out. And so glad to see you back!!! Up [:up:] Up [:up:]

    http://alexisrose.mybrute.com/team/109037




  •  10-10-2009, 19:51 3411222 in reply to 3409021

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    Re: Gazing Into Darkness

    Hope that all is well and that you're still writing. Just letting you know that your fans are still here. Peace.

    Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel was just a freight train coming your way
  •  10-25-2009, 12:22 3414413 in reply to 3411222

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    Re: Gazing Into Darkness

    Thank you for all the great and kind words.  I have not abandoned this story but a lot has happened since the last time I posted.  I've begun working more closely with my writers group and they've introduced me to a professional editor that works in the science fiction, fantasy, and urban fantasy genres.  I'm working on my novel during all my free time and my fan fictions have been placed on the back burner.

    I'm sort of working on the next chapter but it might be a little while.

    Ciao for now.

    ~Marcasite

    Dear angel, where are your warming wings tonight? It's so cold outside. Won't you hold me for a while? And angel, I feel alone and unalive. The night is frozen and these tears have stung my eyes.
  •  10-25-2009, 21:55 3414555 in reply to 3414413

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    Re: Gazing Into Darkness

    I can sympathize; you can't force writing when your mind is on other things. Your fans will still be here. Hope your novel turns out well. Peace.

    Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel was just a freight train coming your way
  •  10-27-2009, 19:21 3415023 in reply to 3414555

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    Re: Gazing Into Darkness

    Wishing you the very best! Big Smile [:D] Hope it all goes well.
    Flown down by ravens and stolen by the dawn's first rays, night mares stalk the night. Through dusty windows and cracked glass, they watch the weary rest till mornings rise.
  •  11-03-2009, 13:51 3416499 in reply to 3415023

    Re: Gazing Into Darkness

    G o o d [Good] luck!! Just show the editor your other story and what you've done with this one so far. I'm sure they will see the great work you can do.

    http://alexisrose.mybrute.com/team/109037




  •  11-10-2009, 17:30 3417742 in reply to 3399541

    Re: Prologue

    Then Sabre doesn't know Sorrow's alive? Awesome! And if the guild is around to this story is going to have a bunch of interesting twists. ^-^
    I am but a shadow of that girl who once looked at this world as something marvalous to behold. I was simply naive back then... but I am awake now and, for once, I see things clearly.
  •  11-10-2009, 18:20 3417745 in reply to 3399543

    Re: Shades of the Past

    Freaking awesome. This is so going to be G o o d [Good]. I like that Lady Gray is getting what she deserves, though it makes me wonder about Blade. I'm also glad that Hawke turned out to be Sabre's son and not Maze or Bloodraven. Still, I wonder if he's as skilled as Talon. He is the older son and therefore should be king. I so can't wait to see what will happen next or when Sabre finally realizes that Sorrow is alive. She may have crowned him, but I doubt it's too late to kill him.

     

    ...Blade was the one that let Sorrow escape. I wonder what role he'll play in this story or where his loyalties lie. Sabre doesn't know that Blade let Sorrow go or that he killed Thorn. Should be interesting when he finds out. ^-^


    I am but a shadow of that girl who once looked at this world as something marvalous to behold. I was simply naive back then... but I am awake now and, for once, I see things clearly.
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